Template talk:Did you know/Approved
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Section | # of Hooks | # Verified |
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August 7 | 1 | |
August 8 | 1 | |
August 11 | 1 | |
August 14 | 1 | |
August 20 | 1 | |
August 23 | 1 | |
August 24 | 2 | 2 |
August 25 | 5 | 4 |
August 26 | 3 | 1 |
August 27 | 3 | 2 |
August 28 | 4 | 2 |
August 29 | 4 | 2 |
August 30 | 10 | 3 |
August 31 | 3 | 1 |
September 1 | 3 | 3 |
September 2 | 5 | 2 |
September 3 | 4 | 3 |
September 4 | 2 | 1 |
September 5 | 2 | |
September 6 | 4 | 1 |
September 7 | 7 | 2 |
September 8 | 3 | |
September 9 | 6 | 2 |
September 10 | 6 | 5 |
September 11 | 4 | 2 |
September 12 | 6 | 1 |
September 13 | 3 | 1 |
September 14 | 3 | 3 |
September 15 | 9 | 4 |
September 16 | 7 | 2 |
September 17 | 3 | 2 |
September 18 | 10 | 8 |
September 19 | 7 | 3 |
September 20 | 9 | 1 |
September 21 | 4 | 1 |
September 22 | 6 | 2 |
September 23 | 7 | |
September 24 | 6 | 2 |
September 25 | 6 | 3 |
September 26 | 6 | 2 |
September 27 | 9 | 4 |
September 28 | 8 | 5 |
September 29 | 7 | 5 |
September 30 | 6 | 6 |
October 1 | 5 | 5 |
October 2 | 2 | 1 |
October 3 | 10 | 3 |
October 4 | 8 | 4 |
October 5 | 7 | 3 |
October 6 | 1 | |
October 7 | 2 | |
Total | 243 | 109 |
Last updated 05:58, 7 October 2024 UTC Current time is 06:21, 7 October 2024 UTC [refresh] |
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[edit]How to promote an accepted hook
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Nominations
[edit]Special occasion holding area
[edit]- Do not nominate articles in this section—nominate all articles in the nominations section on the regular nominations page, under the date on which the article was created or moved to mainspace, or the expansion began, or it was listed as a Good Article; be sure to indicate in the nomination any request for a specially timed appearance on the main page.
- Note: Articles intended to be held for special occasion dates should be nominated within seven days of creation, start of expansion, or promotion to Good Article status. The nomination should be made between at least one week prior to the occasion date, to allow time for reviews and promotions through the prep and queue sets, but not more than six weeks in advance. The proposed occasion must be deemed sufficiently special by reviewers. The timeline limitations, including the six week maximum, may be waived by consensus, if a request is made at WT:DYK, but requests are not always successful. Discussion clarifying the hold criteria can be found here: [1]; discussion setting the six week limit can be found here: [2].
- April Fools' Day hooks are exempted from the timeline limit; see Wikipedia:April Fool's Main Page/Did You Know.
- Note for promoters: please be sure to add an "invisible" comment after a hook when you've placed it in prep, noting that it's a special occasion hook and including the date it is supposed to run. This should keep the hook from being moved after promotion, as sometimes happens to hooks when a queue needs a slot filled or a prep set needs to be made more balanced by swapping hooks between preps.
November 7 (after US election polls close)
[edit]Allison Reese
- ... that Allison Reese has been called "better at Kamala than Kamala is"? Source: Holtermann, Callie (2024-07-22). "A Kamala Harris Impersonator Is Ready for Her Moment". The New York Times. ISSN 0362-4331. Retrieved 2024-08-04.
"You're better at Kamala than Kamala is," a commenter wrote on one of her videos.
- ALT1: ... that comedian Allison Reese came out to her parents through a group text message? Source: Rodriguez, Alexander (2023-11-19). "Allison Reese is a Comedic Star on the Rise". Metrosource. ISSN 1529-935X. Retrieved 2024-08-04.
So, I just sent a group text. I was just like, "Hey, think I'm gay. That cool?" Several minutes went by and I was like, oh God. And my dad finally responded, "Yep, you're good." And that's truly it. And my mom called and was like, "Hey, I know you're doing comedy. Is that like a joke?" I was like, no, it's real. And she's like, "Okay!"
- ALT2: ... that Allison Reese has received millions of views on social media for her impressions of Kamala Harris? Source: Burnett, Erin (2024-08-03). "Meet comedian who went viral for her impression of Kamala Harris". Erin Burnett OutFront (Television production). CNN. 0:22. Retrieved 2024-08-04.
Her impressions of Harris have lit up social media, a few getting millions of views.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Alex Thach
- Comment: Thanks for reviewing! Definitely open to more hooks here, but I think ALT0 is the most intriguing one I can make.
- ALT1: ... that comedian Allison Reese came out to her parents through a group text message? Source: Rodriguez, Alexander (2023-11-19). "Allison Reese is a Comedic Star on the Rise". Metrosource. ISSN 1529-935X. Retrieved 2024-08-04.
Bsoyka (t • c • g) 03:23, 5 August 2024 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Hook eligibility:
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- Other problems: - If ALT1 is approved, then reference [1] needs to be repeated directly after the sentence "Soon after this, at the age of 22, she came out as a lesbian through a group text message to her parents, who were both supportive of her sexuality." This is necessary per WP:DYKHFC, which says "The facts of the hook in the article should be cited no later than the end of the sentence in which they appear."
QPQ: Done. |
Overall: Bsoyka Nice work on this article. I think ALT0 is the most interesting as well, but ALT1 might also work. I'm not sure about ALT2, since many influencers get millions of views for whatever it is that they're known for. Epicgenius (talk) 19:11, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Bsoyka, Epicgenius, and Kimikel: Just noting that I have pulled this from prep 1 as there is already a Kamala hook in queue 7 and there's another in a later prep. I have not in any way assessed the article.--Launchballer 14:09, 14 September 2024 (UTC)
- Pulled per WT:DYK#Allison Reese and WP:DYKELECT. Not the nom's fault, and so this shouldn't be timed out. I've moved it to SOHA.--Launchballer 22:10, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
Approved nominations
[edit]Articles created/expanded on August 24
[edit]Statue of John Stockton
- ... that the sculptor re-positioned the statue of John Stockton about 20 times by using a wrench to adjust ball-and-socket joints on steel rods?
- Source: [1]
- ALT1: ... that the statue of John Stockton was adorned with a mask during the COVID-19 pandemic? Source: [2][3]
- Reviewed: 0
Left guide (talk) 13:53, 26 August 2024 (UTC).
References
- ^ Robinson, Doug (June 14, 2004). "Sculpting Stockton no way a slam-dunk". Deseret News. Retrieved August 24, 2024.
- ^ Kalbrosky, Bryan (January 25, 2022). "Somebody put a mask on a John Stockton statue because he refuses to do it himself". USA Today. Retrieved August 24, 2024.
- ^ McCarriston, Shanna (January 25, 2022). "Fan puts face mask on John Stockton statue outside of Jazz's Vivint Arena". CBS Sports. Retrieved August 24, 2024.
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall: Fun little DYK, was kind of neat to learn more about the statue and how the everything came together. All in all it looks fine, no copyvio issues, and article is long enough. I'm not a huge fan of the second hook, it's not as interesting as learning about the process that was taken to make the statue. One minor note to the nominator, it was kind of a pain to go through the article history since you moved it over from your sandbox. Maybe consider using draft space next time. Dr vulpes (Talk) 15:44, 28 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Dr vulpes: Thank you, glad to know you enjoy it! I personally find the first hook to be more interesting also, but my main qualm is that it seems somewhat difficult to include all of the useful details while keeping it reasonably simple and catchy for the average reader. As to the last point, my interest in working on specific topics comes and goes and seems totally random, so I often try to save things in userspace rather than draftspace to avoid the automatic deletion after 6 months, which has happened before. Left guide (talk) 01:30, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Left guide: I 100% feel you on that! I was going over it and it took me a little bit for it to click. No worries just glad you got it here to DYK. Dr vulpes (Talk) 03:09, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Dr vulpes and Left guide: The hook and the article text both can be read to mean that the current statue was re-positioned and contains hidden joints. Maybe something like:
- @Left guide: I 100% feel you on that! I was going over it and it took me a little bit for it to click. No worries just glad you got it here to DYK. Dr vulpes (Talk) 03:09, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that a sculptor used ball-and-socket joints to re-position the original clay statue of John Stockton about 20 times before arriving at the final pose.
- Feel free to strike if not feeling it or if you come up with better wording, Rjjiii (talk) 13:22, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
UnMetal
- ... that UnMetal is a parody of Metal Gear and Metal Gear 2: Solid Snake?
- ALT1: ... that in UnMetal, the player has to heal any enemies they shoot? Source: "... or the player being forced to use some of their limited health kits to heal enemies that they use lethal force on thanks to Fox’s insistence that he will not kill because he’s not an assassin."
- ALT2: ... that in UnMetal, the player saves their game by using a urinal? Source: "They can be difficult at first so fast save often with your portable bedpan…yes, a bedpan. Plus, you must empty it out at real save points, which are restrooms."
- ALT3: ... that the protagonist of UnMetal was originally created for a canceled game that donated money to humanitarian aid NGOs based on the player's game progress? Source: "Jesse Fox has an interesting origin story linked to a project code-named Afraid Project. It was a game in which progress made by the players would have an impact on the real world. For each successful operation performed by Jesse, there would be a donation to an NGO." This is also mentioned in the in-game digital artbook.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Zbrojovka Z 4
AdoTang (talk) 02:40, 25 August 2024 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall: The plot section does not have inline sourcing, but this is not required per MOS:PLOTSOURCE. ALT2 talks about using a bedpan to save and needing to empty it to save again, which is not exactly what the hook says. It may need to be reworded if it is the hook chosen, but I believe other hooks are more interesting anyway, especially ALT3. The source provided for ALT3 does not mention humanitarian aid, but this is mentioned in other sources in the article. I believe this DYK is ready to go. Muhandes (talk) 11:04, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 25
[edit]Happy of the End
- ... that Ogeretsu Tanaka wanted to draw a manga series featuring scenery in Shinjuku, which led to the creation of Happy of the End?
- ALT1: ... that Ogeretsu Tanaka was inspired to create the manga series Happy of the End after taking a morning walk in Shinjuku? Source: https://www.chil-chil.net/compNewsDetail/k/801authors108/no/26553/
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Statue of Dirk Nowitzki
lullabying (talk) 03:50, 31 August 2024 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Hook eligibility:
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall: AGF on the Japanese-language sources for plagiarism and close paraphrasing. Earwig finds no chance of violation with the English-language sources. I'm a bit iffy on the hook - it boils down to "She wanted to do something, so she did." The fact that Shinjuku is uber-modern and densely built up is not going to be known to most people. Do you have any ALTs to consider? Also, I'd recommend a few more third-party references to ensure that notability is shown. Most of the references are from the publisher, or incidental mentions. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 01:05, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
- Butting in while scrolling down the noms page - I think this one works because normally you'd expect an author to develop a work from an idea for the plot or characters, or perhaps a theme. It strikes me as unusual to build a whole creative work around the desire to draw specific kinds of scenery in the background. ♠PMC♠ (talk) 23:08, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
- That's the idea I was going with. The manga was initially developed with Shinjuku as the setting. lullabying (talk) 02:27, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
- Alright. Marking tick - if we have a consensus that this is sufficiently interesting, I'm okay to sign off. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 03:21, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
- That's the idea I was going with. The manga was initially developed with Shinjuku as the setting. lullabying (talk) 02:27, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
- Butting in while scrolling down the noms page - I think this one works because normally you'd expect an author to develop a work from an idea for the plot or characters, or perhaps a theme. It strikes me as unusual to build a whole creative work around the desire to draw specific kinds of scenery in the background. ♠PMC♠ (talk) 23:08, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
Self-Ish
- ... that multiple songs on Self-Ish express amnesia caused by recreational drug use?
- ALT1: ... that Self-Ish had frenetic two-hour writing sessions containing screaming because Will Wood was unmedicated? Source: https://nyunews.com/arts/music/2022/04/29/will-wood-interview-in-case-i-make-it/
- Reviewed:
Koopastar (talk) 07:11, 31 August 2024 (UTC).
- Article is both new and long enough. No copyright violation. Article is presentable. Both sources are cited, one with one with a local newspaper and a student newspaper. No QPQ necessary. I feel the ALT1 is more interesting. I also think it might make more sense, in the original proposal, for the word "express" to be replaced with the word "portray" or "depict". Overall a solid nomination. RoundSquare (talk) 06:19, 23 September 2024 (UTC).
- @RoundSquare and Koopastar: The first hook reads as in-universe (WP:DYKFICTION) and the second hook likely does not meet WP:DYKBLP. Rjjiii (talk) 13:43, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
Manuel Osa Nsue Nsua
- ... that a banker was named the prime minister of Equatorial Guinea to succeed a government that resigned for being "ineffective"?
- Source: News Central Africa ("Equatorial Guinea’s President Teodoro Obiang Nguema Mbasogo has appointed former bank chief Manuel Osa Nsue Nsua as prime minister, following a decree issued nearly three weeks after the previous government resigned for being 'ineffective.'")
- ALT1: ... that a banker was named his country's prime minister to succeed a government that resigned for being "ineffective"? Source: same
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Alfred Sully
- Comment: Open to other ways of wording or other ALT hooks. Was hoping to get this Equatoguinean featured in some way (since not many get featured after all - this would be only the country's third-ever DYK bio!).
BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:54, 25 August 2024 (UTC).
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall: You barely made the 7-day period! The hook is a little confusing, but oh well. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗
14:03, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
- TheNuggeteer, "but oh well" is not an adequate response to a hook being confusing. Please suggest improvements as part of your review. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 12:00, 3 September 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry for the long reply! Reading this again, I don't think this is uninteresting or confusing.
🍗TheNuggeteer🍗
09:12, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry for the long reply! Reading this again, I don't think this is uninteresting or confusing.
Palace Theater Light
- ... that the Palace Theater Light bulb has been running since 1908?
―Panamitsu (talk) 06:20, 25 August 2024 (UTC).
- Taking this — MaxnaCarta ( 💬 • 📝 ) 00:20, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
- Reviewing... will post my comments this afternoon! — MaxnaCarta ( 💬 • 📝 ) 01:44, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall: I am okay with sourcing as spot checks passed. However, I think you should actually link all the newspaper articles where possible so that any reviewing admin can also verify the sources. — MaxnaCarta ( 💬 • 📝 ) 01:44, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Panamitsu: I need you to please fix source 4, cited several times. Atlas Obscura articles are user-generated and user-editable with minimal oversight, and the site's terms of use includes disclaimers about user submissions. Many of the "places" articles cite Wikipedia as a source of their information or otherwise lack clear or reliable sourcing. Per WP:GUNREL: These articles should generally not be referenced on Wikipedia. I personally would have no issue with you using this source once or twice for something uncontroversial, however unfortunately for an article to appear on the Main Page, I don't think this source is gonna cut it. I can seek a second opinion if you want, but I would hate to approve it only for an admin to step in and decline to post...— MaxnaCarta ( 💬 • 📝 ) 02:37, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
- @MaxnaCarta: Thanks for telling me this, I hadn't seen this website before. I've removed it now. Luckily the other sources were already used for the same information so I didn't have to make many changes, except for removing a name and a year. ―Panamitsu (talk) 02:54, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Panamitsu: all good, thanks for actioning so fast. I will review the rest of the sources and come back to you. I dont anticipate any issues. Looks okay from here. Cheers — MaxnaCarta ( 💬 • 📝 ) 02:57, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
- MaxnaCarta Is this ready to go? SL93 (talk) 23:21, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 26
[edit]Tauba Tauba (song)
... that Karan Aujla's Hindi-language single "Tauba Tauba" from the film Bad Newz became a Billboard Hot 100 Top 25 ahead of the film's 19 July 2024 release?
- ALT1: ... that Karan Aujla's Hindi-language single "Tauba Tauba" from the film Bad Newz peaked at #1 on the Billboard India, and UK Asian charts ahead of the film's 19 July 2024 release? Source: https://www.billboard.com/charts/india-songs-hotw/2024-07-20/ and https://www.officialcharts.com/charts/asian-music-chart/20240719/asian/
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Doris Ilda Allen
KunalAggarwal95 (talk) 06:40, 27 August 2024 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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- Adequate sourcing: - no, ALT0 -> source references Canadian Hot 100, not (US) Billboard Hot 100
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- Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
Hook eligibility:
- Cited: - no, ALT1 -> sources in article refer to charts released after the date of release, so not "ahead of the film's 19 July 2024", and are not the sources in the hook
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall: created July 2024, 5x expanded up to 26 August, but over more than 20 days not new enough Bogger (talk) 13:46, 3 September 2024 (UTC)
- But this is not mentioned in the DYK rules that article must be expanded within 20 days. KunalAggarwal95 (talk) 18:26, 3 September 2024 (UTC)
- Article qualifies as a 5x expansion as the expansion began on 26 August (per DYKcheck), the same day it was nominated at DYK. Creation date is not relevant in the case of a more recent 5x expansion, the date that matters was the date the expansion began. Pinging reviewer Bogger, to let them know that their review was based on a misunderstanding of the DYK rules. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:40, 5 September 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry, I had used raw size expansion (3,233 bytes -> 7,570 bytes) instead of prose size (323 chars -> 200 chars). New enough, but hooks and sources need work... -Bogger (talk) 06:12, 5 September 2024 (UTC)
- Bogger ALT2: ... that Karan Aujla's Hindi-language single "Tauba Tauba" from the film Bad Newz became a Billboard Canadian Hot 100 Top 25 ahead of the film's 19 July 2024 release? Source: https://www.billboard.com/charts/canadian-hot-100/2024-07-20/
- I have replaced the old chart sources with the hook sources. KunalAggarwal95 (talk) 10:18, 5 September 2024 (UTC)
- updated sources for ALT1 look good, approved ALT1, ALT2 -Bogger (talk) 11:19, 5 September 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 27
[edit]Hermética (album)
- ... that thrash metal band Hermética has a failed project to release a version of their debut album in English?
- Source: Juan Ignacio Provéndola (May 7, 2018). "Hermética: diez curiosidades a 30 años de su debut" [Hermética: 10 trivia 30 years after their debut] (in Spanish). La izquierda diario. Retrieved August 28, 2024.
- ALT1: ... that "Desde el oeste", from Hermética's debut album, was the first recorded song singed by Ricardo Iorio? Source: Blumetti, Frank; Mora, Miguel (October 1993). "Hermética: el sonido de la gente". Madhouse Extra (in Spanish) (2). Buenos Aires: Editorial Llamoso: 14.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Vadym Sukharevsky
Cambalachero (talk) 15:08, 28 August 2024 (UTC).
- to first hook, which I find more interesting. Source checks out, article sufficiently expanded. Ten Pound Hammer • (What did I screw up now?) 19:31, 21 September 2024 (UTC)
Barry Green (hunter)
- ... that an Australian wildlife conservationist has trapped and killed over 1,450 feral cats?
Di (they-them) (talk) 01:53, 27 August 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: References were spot-checked for verification; no issues arose. Yue🌙 04:22, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
- Di (they-them) is there an independent RS that describes Green as a conservationist? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 19:03, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
- AirshipJungleman29 The ABC article source says that
Mr Green has been widely recognised for his two decades of conservation work, including by Natural Resources Kangaroo Island
. The award from the South Australian government, which can be seen at 28 seconds into the ABC video source, describes him as adedicated, hands-on environmentalist
. So, while the word "conservationist" isn't necessarily used, I think these essentially say the exact same thing. If that's an issue, I'd be fine with tweaking the hook to say "an Australian environmentalist" instead. Di (they-them) (talk) 21:22, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
- AirshipJungleman29 The ABC article source says that
Articles created/expanded on August 28
[edit]Kitsap (Suquamish leader)
- ... that in 1825, the Suquamish leader Kitsap led an alliance of tribes stretching from the Columbia River to Puget Sound to stop the Cowichan slave raids wreaking havoc on the Sound?
- Source: Buerge (2017)[3] p.33: "....when the Suquamish chief Kitsap organized a confederacy to meet a threat from the north."
Ibid. p. 41-42: "The most feared were the Cowichan ... Slave raids had led the Cowichan far from their homes in search of human merchandise ... by spreading havoc on the sound, they likely intended to eliminate rivals and make the HBC come to them"
Ibid. p.42: "The confederation Kitsap engineered stretched from central Puget Sound to the Columbia River, and Old Man House was its nexus."
Ibid. p. 43: "The attack likely took place around 1825 ... Kitsap and other Suquamish men took the lead"- Reviewed:
PersusjCP (talk) 16:51, 28 August 2024 (UTC).
- QPQ done: Template:Did_you_know_nominations/Counterintelligence_Group PersusjCP (talk) 16:54, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Reviewing... Flibirigit (talk) 21:44, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
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Hook eligibility:
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Overall: The article was expanded more than fivefold (2,024 to 12,369 characters) when comparing the pre-expansion version on May 7, 2024, to the nominated version on August 28, 2024. Length and sourcing are adequate. The article appears neutral in tone, and no plagiarism concerns were found. The proposed hook is interesting, but its citation needs some work. As per WP:DYKCRIT, the sentence(s) which support the hooks require citation immediately following. The hooks is supported by several sentences, but not all of them have a citation. No image is included in this nomination, but all images in the article have a free Commons license. The nominator has supplied a QPQ, although it was not required. Overall, the expanded article is a welcome contribution to Wikipedia and needs only minor work for DYK. Flibirigit (talk) 22:09, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
- I have added a citation directly after the sentence in the second paragraph. If there is another I missed, please let me know! Thanks! PersusjCP (talk) 22:26, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
- I made a couple minor edits to the first paragraph of the "Fight against the Cowichans" section to better source the hook, and added the same wikilinks which appear in the hook. The sourcing is now adequate for approval. Flibirigit (talk) 00:24, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
- Appreciate it, thanks! PersusjCP (talk) 05:55, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
- I made a couple minor edits to the first paragraph of the "Fight against the Cowichans" section to better source the hook, and added the same wikilinks which appear in the hook. The sourcing is now adequate for approval. Flibirigit (talk) 00:24, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
Afrique Victime
- ... that Mdou Moctar's Afrique Victime was also released on Nokia devices (specifically the Nokia 6120) to honor his former albums?
- Source: SRC
🍗TheNuggeteer🍗
03:41, 28 August 2024 (UTC).
- GA status confirmed, date is fine. Various GA-related quality aspects confirmed as meeting DYK standards. Still needs a QPQ review. Hook needs improvements; not Nokia devices, but a single device (the article states "In homage to his first albums, which he spread using Bluetooth, he released a collector's edition Nokia 6120 handset."). And while this is not a DYK concern, I think this part of the article should be expanded - how can one spread albums using Bluetooth? How does one include an album in a handset (the source states it was pre-loaded onto a classic handset, which is confusing - what exactly was that item)? If I was a GA reviewer I'd expect this to be addressed (expanded with clarifications in the text). Ping GA reviewer User:Vigilantcosmicpenguin.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:02, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- The "spreading albums using Bluetooth" thing is already explained in the article Mdou Moctar, so I figured it's WP:Summary style to exclude that info from this article. But I agree that the article should be clearer, so tweaked. — Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧 (talk | contribs) 16:12, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- Finished the hook request.
🍗TheNuggeteer🍗
09:04, 29 August 2024 (UTC) - @Piotrus: Hello?
🍗TheNuggeteer🍗
11:57, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
@Piotrus and TheNuggeteer: The first hook was a bit confusing to me. Perhaps something like:
- ... that Mdou Moctar's 2021 album Afrique Victime was distributed on pre-loaded Nokia 6120 classic cellphones?
Feel free to strike or revise, Rjjiii (talk) 13:59, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
- Good rewording, I am fine with that. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:49, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 29
[edit]Shinichi Ishizuka
- ... that manga artist Shinichi Ishizuka was told that becoming a manga artist would be "absolutely impossible"? Source: https://tokion.jp/2021/02/26/shinichi-ishizuka-creative-expression/
- Reviewed: Cosmetic Playlover
Created by Link20XX (talk). Self-nominated at 00:21, 30 August 2024 (UTC).
- The article is well-developed, fully cited, neutral in tone, and free of unresolved tags. The hook is both interesting and cited, making it suitable for the main page. I used a translator to verify the information, and everything checks out. While the article is on track for GA status in the future, I suggest renaming the "Biography" section for clarity since we already know this is a biography article. Dividing it into sections like "Early Life and Education" and "Career" could improve the structure. Overall, great work! Morogris (✉ • ✎) 14:49, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
- Note: I made some edits here and there and also ran an archive bot. Feel free to revert any of my edits if deemed unsuitable. Morogris (✉ • ✎) 15:10, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
IMAX Melbourne
- ... that the largest IMAX cinema in the southern hemisphere is in Melbourne?
Mjks28 (talk) 01:03, 29 August 2024 (UTC).
- General eligibility:
- New enough:
- Long enough:
- Other problems: - Article was nominated 9 days after being moved to mainspace. The limit is 7 days.
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Overall: Cambalachero (talk) 18:39, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Cambalachero: Per WP:DYKNEW, "The seven-day limit can be extended for a day or two upon request." For a relatively new nominator, I'd take this.--Launchballer 00:04, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 30
[edit]Christian Albright, De'Montre Tuggle
... that professional football players Christian Albright and De'Montre Tuggle were both born on March 29, 1999, were both named second-team all-Mid-American Conference in 2020, were both waived by the Chicago Bears in August 2022, and both made their Canadian Football League debuts in 2023?
- ALT1: ... that Christian Albright and De'Montre Tuggle were both born on March 29, 1999, both named second-team all-MAC in 2020, both waived by the Chicago Bears in 2022, and both made their CFL debuts in 2023?
- Reviewed:
~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 14:15, 30 August 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Note that this review is for both of the articles; Where's the hook source? Good enough. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗
14:29, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
- Sources added. The birthdates and CFL debut years are at the CFL profiles, and the other sources are self-explanatory. Thanks for the quick review. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 14:41, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9 and TheNuggeteer: the hook is far too long per WP:DYK200; please suggest a shortened alternative. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 12:02, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
- ☛ Offering to review alternative hooks, if the original reviewer has to step back for a bit. Rjjiii (talk) 22:38, 28 September 2024 (UTC)
- The hooks also probably need rewriting since they may not make as much sense to international readers who may be less familiar with American or Canadian football. Maybe BeanieFan11 can help with wordsmithing? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 23:47, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
- Maybe something like: ... that Christian Albright and De'Montre Tuggle were both born on March 29, 1999, named second-team all-Mid-American Conference in 2020, both members of the Chicago Bears in 2022, and both debuted in the CFL in 2023? There's a limited amount of space so explaining everything might not be possible. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:50, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
- I actually wonder if it's even necessary to mention the full date since the main point about them being born on the same day would still make sense otherwise, but I'll leave that to the review. To clarify: according to WP:DYK200, multi-article hooks are exempt from the strict reading of the rule and are allowed to go above 200 words. However, if I remove one name from the hook, it would still be around 195 characters, which is on the long side and thus not ideal. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 02:14, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
- Maybe something like: ... that Christian Albright and De'Montre Tuggle were both born on March 29, 1999, named second-team all-Mid-American Conference in 2020, both members of the Chicago Bears in 2022, and both debuted in the CFL in 2023? There's a limited amount of space so explaining everything might not be possible. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:50, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
- The hooks also probably need rewriting since they may not make as much sense to international readers who may be less familiar with American or Canadian football. Maybe BeanieFan11 can help with wordsmithing? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 23:47, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
- New reviewer needed since TheNuggeteer has been topic banned from DYK, among other processes. Struck original, too-long hook; here's a slightly cut-down version of BeanieFan11's hook above as ALT2:
- ALT2: ... that both Christian Albright and De'Montre Tuggle were born on the same day, named second-team all-Mid-American Conference in 2020, signed with the Chicago Bears in 2022, and debuted in the CFL in 2023? (185 prose characters excluding the second bold link per DYK rules; ALT1 above is 183 prose characters with the same exclusion) —BlueMoonset (talk) 02:44, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
- Long enough, new enough, no plagiarism, and everything is cited. Both articles are mostly hard facts with no NPOV issues. The bits of the hook fact can be verified by the sources cited in both articles. Approving ALT2 for a hook. It reads a lot smoother than the original wording. Looks good, Rjjiii (talk) 03:18, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that both Christian Albright and De'Montre Tuggle were born on the same day, named second-team all-Mid-American Conference in 2020, signed with the Chicago Bears in 2022, and debuted in the CFL in 2023? (185 prose characters excluding the second bold link per DYK rules; ALT1 above is 183 prose characters with the same exclusion) —BlueMoonset (talk) 02:44, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
Brittni Mason
- ... that a Paralympic gold medalist originally did not know she qualified for parasports?
- Source: Ligon, Catherine (August 28, 2024). "Brittni Mason had no idea she was eligible for Paralympics. Now she's chasing gold". USA Today. Retrieved 2024-08-30.
Queen of Hearts (talk) 20:10, 30 August 2024 (UTC).
- Article was 5x expanded on August 30, so is new enough. At over 2000 characters, it is long enough. The article is properly referenced with in-line citations. The hook is interesting, short enough, and cited in-line. No copyvio issues noted with Earwig's. The QPQ has been done. Looks good to go! SilverserenC 23:00, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
Edmonds Band Rotunda
- ... that Edmonds Band Rotunda (pictured) was deconstructed after the 2011 Christchurch earthquake and was rebuilt in 2021?
―Panamitsu (talk) 07:50, 30 August 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: A bit uninteresting, but looks good. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗
14:17, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
- Nice article, I found the fact it was a restaurant to be quite interesting/unique, heritage buildings often get rebuilt but a rotunda serving as a restaurant paints quite an interesting thought in my mind. Traumnovelle (talk) 07:06, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
- Seconding Traumnovelle, my only comment is that the hook is a bit boring. I think a more interesting one might be something like
...that the small basement of the Edmonds Band Rotunda was once used as a kitchen?
. And thank you for including my photo! David Palmer//cloventt (talk) 20:35, 22 September 2024 (UTC)
- This looks more interesting than the hook presented in the nomination.
🍗TheNuggeteer🍗
11:44, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
- This looks more interesting than the hook presented in the nomination.
Articles created/expanded on August 31
[edit]Diplodus argenteus
- ... that despite being commonly found off the coast of country, the etymology of Diplodus argenteus' name has nothing to do with Argentina?
- Source: ETYFish Fish name etymology database: https://etyfish.org/acanthuriformes6/
- ALT1 ...that while adult Silver porgies prefer to inhabit the surf zone, juveniles prefer tidepools while sub-adults frequent beds of seagrass? Sources: Wells, V. Carpenter, C. 2011. A Field Guide to Coastal Fishes from Maine to Texas. Baltimore. Johns Hopkins University Press. Robins, C.R. and G.C. Ray, 1986. A field guide to Atlantic coast fishes of North America. Houghton Mifflin Company, Boston, U.S.A. 354 p. Cervigón, F., 1993. Los peces marinos de Venezuela. Volume 2. Fundación Científica Los Roques, Caracas,Venezuela. 497 p.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Huang Shaoqiang
Ryan shell (talk) 19:10, 2 September 2024 (UTC).
- Doing... ミラP@Miraclepine 20:48, 2 September 2024 (UTC)
General eligibility:
- New enough:
- Long enough:
- Other problems:
Policy compliance:
- Adequate sourcing: - I will kindly AGF the offline sources, but many parts of the article is unsourced. Paragraph four has an unsourced statement, and the "Biology" paragraph is unsourced; there’s also one ending in "FAO REF?". Ref 1 doesn't specify it's a "gamefish" beyond vague "if fished incidentally" (which doesn't clarify individual scale nor if it's done commercially or recreationally, especially when next to "commercial importance") nor mention angling. I can't seem to find the 2.5g weight in ref 11.
Ref 16 doesn’t say “the silver porgy is generally standoffish and seldom approaches divers”; while it says “D. argenteus had always been seen in the gulfs”, it doesn’t go beyond only a few year-round divers identifying the species."Or anything to do with Argentina's etymology" seems so OR-y and debatable; both of them come from the same Latin word. - Neutral:
- Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
- Other problems: - “fairly high probably” should be “fairly high probability”
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Overall: Nom four days after creation and size at 3871. There are several sourcing issues you'll have to fix, as well as a QPQ to provide; see above. Also, it would help if you could provide online links to the refs since it'll make the reviewers' jobs better; I had to find some of them myself with the WP:LIBRARY providing access to some of them, and I’ve linked them in the refs. And please refrain from using redundant sources; I only needed 12/13 to verify one of the claims that also had ref 9 attached. ミラP@Miraclepine 22:13, 2 September 2024 (UTC)
- I believe I've fixed most of the more pressing issues around left over annotations and poor sourcing. That said, I recognize that there could be a case to be made for OR and have provided an alternative hook, that I am much more in favor of using. In the coming day's I'll probably delete or rewrite problematic areas as I dig up and cross check source problems. Ryan shell (talk) 02:53, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
- The most pressing issue is the missing QPQ. They are due at the time of nomination and if it is still missing a week later, the nomination will be rejected. Schwede66 18:30, 7 September 2024 (UTC)
- Just finished QPQ for the nom of Huang Shaoqiang. Not sure if adding it here will suffice or notRyan shell (talk) 20:05, 7 September 2024 (UTC)
- Link to review for convenience: Template:Did you know nominations/Huang Shaoqiang. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 21:38, 7 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Ryan shell: While the ALT1 seems boring, I'm fine with ALT0 because the issue I raised was on being related to Argentina's etymology but not Argentina the country. That said, while the gamefish issue has been fixed - I crossed off the ref 16 issue because I put in the wrong ref, silly me - no other issues have been resolved and the article still has unsourced paragraphs. BTW I'm pretty sure it's more convenient to add the QPQ in the "Reviewed" line. ミラP@Miraclepine 15:25, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
- @ミラP Mission citations related to the Biology section and fisheries information has been cited. Uncited issue in paragraph four has also been cited. The 'probably' into 'probability' typo has also been corrected. Ryan shell (talk) 20:35, 14 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Ryan shell: Have checked the sources and I can finally approve ALT0. I'm not sure ALT1 is hooky enough though, and even if it is "silver porgies" should be uncapitalized. ミラP@Miraclepine 21:28, 14 September 2024 (UTC)
- @ミラP Mission citations related to the Biology section and fisheries information has been cited. Uncited issue in paragraph four has also been cited. The 'probably' into 'probability' typo has also been corrected. Ryan shell (talk) 20:35, 14 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Ryan shell: While the ALT1 seems boring, I'm fine with ALT0 because the issue I raised was on being related to Argentina's etymology but not Argentina the country. That said, while the gamefish issue has been fixed - I crossed off the ref 16 issue because I put in the wrong ref, silly me - no other issues have been resolved and the article still has unsourced paragraphs. BTW I'm pretty sure it's more convenient to add the QPQ in the "Reviewed" line. ミラP@Miraclepine 15:25, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
- Just finished QPQ for the nom of Huang Shaoqiang. Not sure if adding it here will suffice or notRyan shell (talk) 20:05, 7 September 2024 (UTC)
- The most pressing issue is the missing QPQ. They are due at the time of nomination and if it is still missing a week later, the nomination will be rejected. Schwede66 18:30, 7 September 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 1
[edit]Svayamvara
- ... that in ancient Indian literature, princesses would select their husbands from a lineup of suitors or through public contests in the distinctive matrimonial tradition called Svayamvara (pictured)?
- Source: A Dictionary of Hinduism, Oxford Publications "For the daughter of a royal or a kṣatriya family, a way of selecting a husband which takes the form of either of a public contest between her suitors, or an assembly at which the bride-to-be simply chooses between them. Perhaps the best-known instances occur in the Mahābhārata, where Arjuna wins Draupadī by this method, and Damayantī prefers Nala to any of the assembled gods."
- Brockington, John L (2006). "Epic Svayaṃvaras, Voice of the Orient: a Tribute to Prof. Upendranath Dhal". Academia.edu: 35–42.
- Reviewed:
Seyamar(245CMR)💬📜 06:05, 3 September 2024 (UTC).
- : Seems new and long enough, almost entirely written by nominator; I have a few very minor problems with the sourcing that I think can be resolved by just copying some nearby sources, which I tagged: specifically, I think there should be a citation for the 1st paragraph of "Svayamvara in the Rg Veda" and one place in the 1st paragraph of "Damayantī's Svayamvara". Also, I think it would be more clear if the source at the end of the last paragraph of the lead were duplicated to the first two paragraphs as well if it applies to them, and per the DYK guidelines, I think that the source given has to be present at the end of the sentence giving the claim present in the hook. Don't see any neutrality issues. Article is (listing criteria) presentable, image & hook seem good, no other complaints. As for copyvio, not sure what the standards are on manual "spot-checks", so I'm leaving that for a second reviewer. Mrfoogles (talk) 04:59, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
- @User:Mrfoogles, done what you have suggested.Seyamar(245CMR)💬📜 06:23, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
- Citation problems seem resolved, all that's left is a copyright check. Mrfoogles (talk) 16:53, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Mrfoogles: Have you completed the copyright check, and is this approved? If not, what else needs to be done? Z1720 (talk) 14:39, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
- I was hoping someone else would also double-check my copyright checking (which is done, but I’m new), but that doesn’t seem to be happening anytime soon, so I’ll approve it. Mrfoogles (talk) 14:52, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Mrfoogles: Is the review completed?Seyamar(245CMR)💬📜 18:26, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
- The green check in the circle means yes (it's a special DYK one that means it was accepted). Mrfoogles (talk) 18:34, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Mrfoogles: Is the review completed?Seyamar(245CMR)💬📜 18:26, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
- I was hoping someone else would also double-check my copyright checking (which is done, but I’m new), but that doesn’t seem to be happening anytime soon, so I’ll approve it. Mrfoogles (talk) 14:52, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
- Citation problems seem resolved, all that's left is a copyright check. Mrfoogles (talk) 16:53, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
- @User:Mrfoogles, done what you have suggested.Seyamar(245CMR)💬📜 06:23, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
@Z1720 Any update, it has been passed quite a long ago.Seyamar(245CMR)💬📜 17:03, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Seyamar: The article is at WP:DYKNA: it will be moved into a prep set when there is an open spot. Z1720 (talk) 18:13, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
Joan McIntyre (activist)
- ... that activist Joan McIntyre left Friends of the Earth to start her own organization focused on stopping the whaling activities of Japan and Russia?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Brittni Mason
- Comment: Article was moved from draftspace to mainspace with this edit.
SilverserenC 23:05, 1 September 2024 (UTC).
- Silver seren (talk · contribs) and Thriley (talk · contribs), I verified that the article is long enough and that there are no plagiarism concerns through the Copyvios tool and spotchecking.
Regarding the hook, "Joan And The Whales" says, "She had been special projects coordinator of Friends of the Earth ...". I will take this as verifying that she left Friends of the Earth to start her own organization.
I checked the Wikipedia article and could not find where it says "left Friends of the Earth to start her own organization". Would you add this to the Wikipedia article or quote the text where it says this in case I missed it? Thank you, Cunard (talk) 09:27, 3 September 2024 (UTC)
- I've added that additional note to the sentence about her forming Project Jonah. Good clarification! Thanks, Cunard. SilverserenC 22:07, 3 September 2024 (UTC)
- verified, thank you! Cunard (talk) 07:39, 5 September 2024 (UTC)
- I've added that additional note to the sentence about her forming Project Jonah. Good clarification! Thanks, Cunard. SilverserenC 22:07, 3 September 2024 (UTC)
WCCN, Wisconsin Pavilion
- ... that the owner of two Wisconsin radio stations put a 16-foot (4.9 m) cow outside the Wisconsin Pavilion (pictured)? Source: https://newspapers.com/article/marshfield-news-herald-giant-holstein/154384862/
- ALT1: ... that two Wisconsin radio stations purchased and reassembled the Wisconsin Pavilion (pictured) from the 1964 New York World's Fair for use as their studios? Source: http://www-newspapers-com.wikipedialibrary.idm.oclc.org/article/marshfield-news-herald-clark-county-pav/154384084/
- Reviewed: The Life Eaters and Rico Krieger
Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 18:04, 1 September 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: I prefer ALT1; not sure the first hook is interesting enough. Important question - I'm not sure if the expansion of the radio station article suffices, as it appears to incorporate through merger what was in another article. A second set of eyes on that issue, or explanation by the nom, would be helpful. 2603:7000:2101:AA00:587E:4EDE:255:173E (talk) 22:16, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
- I can't ping. There is a merger, but neither page had substantial material. WCCN (AM) had 245 characters. WCCN-FM had 515 characters. 245 + 515 = 760. The current page size is 4482 characters, where the combined 5x of both pages would be 3800. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 22:18, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
- That works. Good to go. I still prefer ALT1, and I am not sure that the first hook is interesting enough. Nice work.2603:7000:2101:AA00:D919:443A:176C:AE5B (talk) 03:57, 2 September 2024 (UTC)
- I can't ping. There is a merger, but neither page had substantial material. WCCN (AM) had 245 characters. WCCN-FM had 515 characters. 245 + 515 = 760. The current page size is 4482 characters, where the combined 5x of both pages would be 3800. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 22:18, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 2
[edit]Myvanwy Rhys
... that Oxford suffragist Myvanwy Rhys presented a bouquet of irises to Millicent Fawcett at the Royal Albert Hall? Source: "She was one of the delegation who carried the OWSS banner to London in 1908, and presented a bouquet of irises to Millicent Fawcett at the Albert Hall." https://www.firstwomenatoxford.ox.ac.uk/sites/default/files/owcah/documents/media/oxford_suffrage_women_.pdf (p.11 in pdf reader)
Lajmmoore (talk) 20:46, 3 September 2024 (UTC).
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- Interesting: - I’m concerned the hook may not be legible to many readers; I am reasonably interested in related topics and still had not heard of Millicent Fawcett, and the entry does not explain.
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Overall: Thank you for nominating this interesting and worthy entry! If I could make one general recommendation for making this important topic more accessible to the non-specialist reader, I think regardless of the hook, the entry could benefit from a few words explaining who Fawcett was, and likewise to explain what the Bangor dispute was (currently it’s a bit mysterious). As to the hook, I wonder if it would be more interesting to say something like:
- ALT1 ... that Oxford suffragist Myvanwy Rhys earned first-class honours from Newnham College, Cambridge, but was denied a degree?
Tell me what you think. Innisfree987 (talk) 05:34, 8 September 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks so much Innisfree987 - these are all great points. I hope @Manxshearwater: can expand the points in the article. As for the ALT - I think that's much better, thank you for coming up with it, I've scratched the top one Lajmmoore (talk) 06:28, 8 September 2024 (UTC)
- Wonderful! @Manxshearwater: maybe you could just ping me once you’ve had a chance to look and then I’ll tick off the nomination? It doesn’t need to be anything elaborate, just another half sentence’s explanation would be plenty I think—I’m almost tempted to do it myself but it would be much better if someone familiar with the topic did! Thank you both, I enjoyed learning about Rhys! Innisfree987 (talk) 06:49, 8 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Innisfree987: @Lajmmoore: Thanks, great points and I have added some info on Fawcett and on the Bangor dispute so hopefully that helps! Happy with the nomination and I think the alt hook is great. Glad you enjoyed learning about her too! Manxshearwater (talk) 10:32, 8 September 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you both for such quick responses—good to go! Innisfree987 (talk) 17:19, 8 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Innisfree987: It looks like the DYK bot didn't pick up the approved green tick. If it is approved, please re-add it below, using this code: {{subst:DYKyes}}. Z1720 (talk) 00:54, 16 September 2024 (UTC)
- Oh that’s strange. Ok I’m going to sign here but add the tick again on the next line, hope it’ll work this time. Innisfree987 (talk) 06:06, 16 September 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks so much Innisfree987 - these are all great points. I hope @Manxshearwater: can expand the points in the article. As for the ALT - I think that's much better, thank you for coming up with it, I've scratched the top one Lajmmoore (talk) 06:28, 8 September 2024 (UTC)
Wigwam (Welsh band)
- ... that Wigwam (pictured) formed four days before their first concert?
- Source: Y Selar, issue 54 (August 2018), page 11 - "Nathon ni ffurfio pedwar diwrnod cyn ein gig cyntaf achos odd angen band arall i chwara' set [...] yng Nghlwb Ifor Bach blwyddyn dwetha." ("We formed four days before our first gig because another band was needed to play a set [...] in Clwb Ifor Bach last year.")
- ALT1: ... that Wigwam (pictured) only formed to play a single concert, but have been performing together for seven years? Source: Same source as ALT0 ("last year" in that context is 2017, so it's been seven years) + "Drymiwr Wigwam yn bencampwr dawnsio’r byd" - "I ddechrau, jyst i wneud one-off gig oedd o. [...] Gwnaethon ni benderfynu cario ymlaen, dal ati gydag ymarfer, wedyn gwnaethon ni ddechrau ysgrifennu cerddoriaeth efo’n gilydd. Erbyn hyn, rydym wedi rhyddhau albwm a phedair sengl." ("At the start, it was just to do a one-off gig. [...] We decided to carry on, kept practicing, then we started writing music together. By now, we've released an album and four singles.")
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Ron Tiavaasue
Suntooooth, it/he (talk/contribs) 23:10, 2 September 2024 (UTC).
- The article was long enough and new enough at the time of the nomination. I did not find any close paraphrasing, and the article is properly sourced. I am assuming good faith for the sources as they are in Welsh, although for DYK purposes the provided translations above should be fine. A QPQ has been done. I'm approving only the original hook as it's shorter, snappier, and probably more intriguing. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 09:56, 5 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: Thank you for the review! But I'm not sure why you've specifically approved only one hook when there's nothing actually wrong with the other one - surely it's up to the prep builders to choose which hook is more interesting. (I say this because I think ALT1 is a little more interesting personally, and is in a pretty common hook style.) Suntooooth, it/he (talk/contribs) 15:30, 5 September 2024 (UTC)
- While I thought ALT1 was also a surprising and interesting hook, I thought the fact about them being formed four days before the gig, as opposed to simply being intended to be a one-time thing, was more unusual and eye-catching. In addition, it's also a shorter hook and arguably punchier. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 23:56, 5 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: Thank you for the review! But I'm not sure why you've specifically approved only one hook when there's nothing actually wrong with the other one - surely it's up to the prep builders to choose which hook is more interesting. (I say this because I think ALT1 is a little more interesting personally, and is in a pretty common hook style.) Suntooooth, it/he (talk/contribs) 15:30, 5 September 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 3
[edit]Anna Haifisch
- ... that the comics character The Artist shares a common temperament with its creator, cartoonist Anna Haifisch (pictured)?
- ALT1: ...
that the graphic style of Anna Haifisch (pictured) is a combination of dark melancholy and silly elements?Source: https://www.mkg-hamburg.de/en/exhibitions/anna-haifisch - ALT2: ... that cartoonist Anna Haifisch (pictured) has been bending the rules of comics? Source: https://www.itsnicethat.com/articles/anna-haifisch-drifter-illustration-270617
- Reviewed: Moses Benjamin Wulff
- Comment: A biography of an unusual and successful woman cartoonist
Munfarid1 (talk) 20:13, 6 September 2024 (UTC).
- QPQ is required at the time of nomination. Schwede66 18:49, 7 September 2024 (UTC)
- Ok, I shall review this (after all). Schwede66 04:34, 28 September 2024 (UTC)
- The article is a new translation and plenty long enough. There are a variety of issues with the content that need tidying up. For a start, the year and place of birth are unreferenced, which is a violation of WP:BLPPRIVACY. Either you find sources or you must remove those details. I noticed a mixture of British and American English; settle on one (personally, I would use British English but it's entirely up to you). The list of print media at the end of the section "Life and career" should all be shown in italic font. Same with the newspaper's part of the title Los Angeles Times Book Prize. In the section "Selected publications", the last three entries need either the ISBN number added, or a reference, or removed from that list. Otherwise, the referencing is fine. The article is neutral. Earwig is clean. With regards to the hook fact, you quote “but the protagonist does have a lot in common with me in terms of temperament.” (you need to use square quote marks, by the way, not curly ones), you need to point me to where it says that in the source as I can't see it. The hook is interesting (to me, at least). Should others have issues with interestingness, there are certainly plenty of other good hooks possible. I won't be able to sign off on the image, I'm afraid. It says that it's supplied by the subject (ok, fine, she could have used a tripod, however unlikely that is, though) but the uploader is not the subject. It therefore needs to go through the Volunteer Response Team before it can technically be used. QPQ has been done. All in all, there's a wee bit of tidy up work to do but it shouldn't take you long, Munfarid1. Schwede66 05:13, 28 September 2024 (UTC)
- Note I've nominated the image for deletion. There are other images on Commons that could be used and I'm happy to check licensing if you'd like to swap something else in. Schwede66 05:18, 28 September 2024 (UTC)
- Hi @User:Schwede66, thanks for your close review. I have taken care of all the issues you pointed out and changed the picture. As most sources give Leipzig and 1986 as her POB and DOB, I have changed that and added a source for this in the lead. (I am not aware that this would have to be repeated in the infobox now, but if so, please let me know.) I did not see any inconsistencies between British and American English in the text, and would prefer to leave it as is. (Again, if you see any, please let me know.) - Also, I have added the correct source of the quote, and apoligize for the mistaken source that you rightly pointed out. Munfarid1 (talk) 11:09, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
- "travelled" and "colour" is British English (traveled; color), while "characterized" and "organized" is American English (characterised; organised). Which one shall it be? I had fixed the quotation marks for you as the manual of style requires us to use square marks (") but you changed it back to something else (″). Whilst not the most important issue at all, we might as well get it right. The licensing of the new image is fine, but the lighting is suboptimal. ALT0 is now referenced. Not sure how I managed to overlook the other two hooks. I’m not sure about ALT1; there’s a bit of synthesis going on. ALT2 is fine. Schwede66 17:23, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
- Well, I wasn't aware that you had changed the quotation marks and understood that I should change them. Actually, I used the special character in WP drop-down menue, and only now read that this is not what MOS requires. So I just changed this again to square marks. - As to the spelling of -ize, this is not exclusively American, but also Oxford spelling and accepted by many British, Commonwealth and international organizations, as well as by MOS:IZE. - I hope this will sort out any doubts on your part for the go-ahead of this DYK. Munfarid1 (talk) 18:48, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
- "travelled" and "colour" is British English (traveled; color), while "characterized" and "organized" is American English (characterised; organised). Which one shall it be? I had fixed the quotation marks for you as the manual of style requires us to use square marks (") but you changed it back to something else (″). Whilst not the most important issue at all, we might as well get it right. The licensing of the new image is fine, but the lighting is suboptimal. ALT0 is now referenced. Not sure how I managed to overlook the other two hooks. I’m not sure about ALT1; there’s a bit of synthesis going on. ALT2 is fine. Schwede66 17:23, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
Good to go. I had never read MOS:IZE; good to learn something. Good work. Schwede66 03:27, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
Yang Pao-an
- ... that Yang Pao'an (pictured) held several roles in the Kuomintang, but was executed by the party?
- Source: Meng, Hong (24 May 2021). "杨匏安:对党"公忠不可忘"的先驱" [Yang Pao-an: A Pioneer Who Was "Unforgettable in His Loyalty to the Party"]. People's Daily (in Chinese). Central Committee of the Chinese Communist Party. Archived from the original on 3 September 2024. Retrieved 3 September 2024.
- ALT1: ... that the Chinese communist Yang Pao'an (pictured) drew from Japanese thought? Source: Meng, Hong (24 May 2021). "杨匏安:对党"公忠不可忘"的先驱" [Yang Pao-an: A Pioneer Who Was "Unforgettable in His Loyalty to the Party"]. People's Daily (in Chinese). Central Committee of the Chinese Communist Party. Archived from the original on 3 September 2024. Retrieved 3 September 2024.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Ani ni Aisaresugite Komattemasu
— Chris Woodrich (talk) 22:01, 3 September 2024 (UTC).
- Please note that there is currently a move request on the talk page. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 00:23, 4 September 2024 (UTC)
- Move request has closed. Article should be okay. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 09:44, 11 September 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: @Crisco 1492: Hi Chris! Overall, this is a well-sourced and well-written article. It was submitted on the day it was created, so it is new enough. Earwig also shows that the article is copyvio free. However, I have some concerns about the hook. I do not find it particularly interesting, and the reason for Yang's execution is not clearly conveyed. The People's Daily source cited in this nomination mentions that Chiang Kai-shek personally called Yang before ordering his execution, which is a much clearer and more interesting detail for a hook in my opinion. But this is just a suggestion for possible amendments to the hook, and it is not compulsory. If the nominator prefers to keep the current hook, that is perfectly fine with me as well. —Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 14:39, 14 September 2024 (UTC)
- Hi Prince of Erebor. That tidbit is mentioned in several of the sources. However, given that they are all state media, and their likelihood of being non-neutral in detailing Chiang Kai-shek, I'm a bit iffy reporting it as objective fact (I think at least one mentions that he basically threw the phone in response). I can add a few lines making it clear that this comes from a state source, then we can do an ALT. Let me revisit the sources. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 15:04, 14 September 2024 (UTC)
- ALT2 ... that Chiang Kai-shek was reported to have ordered the execution of Yang Pao'an (pictured) after the latter threw a phone against a wall?
- ALT3 ... that Yang Pao'an (pictured) refused to forsake the Chinese Communist Party, reportedly even after a personal telephone call from generalissimo Chiang Kai-shek?
- Here are two ALTs, both cited to: Meng, Hong (24 May 2021). "杨匏安:对党"公忠不可忘"的先驱" [Yang Pao'an: A Pioneer Who Was "Unforgettable in His Loyalty to the Party"]. People's Daily (in Chinese). Central Committee of the Chinese Communist Party. Archived from the original on 3 September 2024. Retrieved 3 September 2024. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 15:16, 14 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Crisco 1492: Thanks for your swift reply and update! It is true that state media should not be taken at face value, but it appears that all the other sources cited in the Later years and death section, such as China Daily and The Paper, are also state-owned, leaving us with limited options. Perhaps we could consider ALT3, as it seems to address concerns about neutrality and skepticism regarding the details of the supposed private conversation between Chiang and Yang?
- I think it is ready to go now! —Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 17:49, 14 September 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks! Sounds good to me. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 17:53, 14 September 2024 (UTC)
Wuhan trolleybus route 1
- ... that Wuhan trolleybus route 1 (pictured) was described as "a specialty of Wuhan", and "visitors had to ride the route to appreciate the uniqueness of the city"?
- Source: Zhou, Zhangliang; Liu, Yang (2020-12-22). "搭乘1路电车,穿越武汉62年". cnhubei.com. Retrieved 2024-09-03.
- ALT1: ... that Wuhan trolleybus route 1 circled around a statue of Sun Yat-sen for nearly 65 years? Source: "父辈的"铜人像"——六渡桥铜人像". Xinhai Revolution Net. 2023-12-26. Retrieved 2024-09-03.
- ALT2: ... that the opening of Wuhan trolleybus route 1 was described by a local newspaper as "the start of electrification for Wuhan's public transport industry"? Source: Ronghua Street Office of the People's Government of Qiaokou District, Wuhan (2019). 荣华街志 (in Chinese (China)). Wuhan: Wuhan Publishing House. ISBN 978-7-5582-3398-2.
- ALT3: ... that when Wuhan trolleybus route 1 first started operations, foreign visitors apart from locals had also sought to buy tickets to ride the trolleybus line? Source: Zhou, Zhangliang; Liu, Yang (2020-12-22). "搭乘1路电车,穿越武汉62年". cnhubei.com. Retrieved 2024-09-03.
- ALT4: ... that the establishment of a trolleybus route in Wuhan was due to the general public's perception of communism at the time? Source: Tian, Lianshen (2020-12-01). "武汉公交故事 ▏后城马路的电车梦". Weixin Official Accounts Platform. Retrieved 2024-09-03.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/The Passenger (Boschwitz novel)
S5A-0043Talk 04:25, 3 September 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Approving ALT0 and ALT3. ALT1 is interesting, but I think the hook might give the impression that the trolleybus was continually circling around the statue, when in fact it was used only as a bus turnaround. ALT2 doesn't sound too interesting; this is a given if it was the first-ever trolleybus route in Wuhan. ALT4 might be too niche because it requires readers to actively make the association between electrification and communism. Epicgenius (talk) 23:21, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 4
[edit]Tonia Ko
- ... that Tonia Ko once composed a three-part concerto played on bubble wrap? Source: During her 2024 residency, Ko completed an arrangement of her bubble wrap concerto Breath, Contained III + This overall ongoing project is entitled Breath, Contained as I attempt to release the ‘voice’ of this mundane object without popping (well, only on rare occasions…) ... Breath Contained I, II, and III are works created for increasingly large forces.
ミラP@Miraclepine 17:10, 9 September 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: The sources used look self-published or at a minimum least defer editorial control to Tonia Ko on these pages. Uncertain if they meet the criteria of WP:RS or if because there are otherwise no issues with the article they are usable by WP:ABOUTSELF. I checked the major sources and didn't find anything that could be construed as close paraphrasing; besides the few things that couldn't easily be said any other way ("born in Hong Kong and raised in Honolulu"). I brought up issue with the provenance of sources but if this is not an issue please forgive me as I am very new to DYK. I have no other comments. Reconrabbit 19:19, 10 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Reconrabbit: As a frequent creator of academic biographies, I'm pretty sure the sources in question are reliable for basic facts (her own site included) and I don't think there are any ABOUTSELF issues, especially when the affiliated institutions are non-profits (especially the educational ones). Further, I added more secondary sources to be safe. ミラP@Miraclepine 18:05, 11 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Miraclepine: I wasn't aware of the nonprofit situation. Overall it looks like a fine hook and the basis for the statement isn't disputed. The addition of secondary sources is of course appreciated. I support this nomination. Reconrabbit 18:28, 11 September 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 6
[edit]KGWD
- ... that a South Dakota radio station went from a university to "Guns, Gold & Rock 'n' Roll"? Source: https://radioinsight.com/headlines/93148/station-sales-week-of-may-29/
Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 04:51, 6 September 2024 (UTC).
- new enough, long enough, no copyvio issues. It took me a second to figure out what the hook was trying to say but it's not inaccurate in any way. Interesting (to me at least), supported by source. Good to go. PARAKANYAA (talk) 01:39, 11 September 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 7
[edit]Yumeshima Station
- ... that the extension to the Yumeshima Station was originally supposed to be opened in 2008 for when the Osaka Olympics was being bidded for?
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ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 03:48, 10 September 2024 (UTC).
- ALT1: ... that Yumeshima Station is scheduled to open in 2025, even though it was first planned to be opened in 2008?
Just an idea for the nominator (I will not be the reviewer). Bremps... 06:56, 18 September 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Great work! Going to WP:AGF here on the Japanese sources, but running them through a translator seems to support the claims being made in the article. Partial as well to ALT1 as being less dated and more interesting if the nominator is open to it, but I think the article otherwise is good to go. --Sky Harbor (talk) 16:43, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
Teleke Lauti
- ... that politician Teleke Lauti unseated a former Prime Minister with a campaign managed by a former Prime Minister?
- Source: Islands Business / TuvaluIslands.com (defeated Kamuta Latasi; campaign was run by his uncle, former Prime Minister Toaripi Lauti)
- ALT1: ... that politician Teleke Lauti unseated a former Prime Minister, was unseated himself by a future Prime Minister, and later ran again to replace a former Prime Minister? Source: same for 'unseated a former Prime Minister'; lost to Latasi and Kausea Natano (future PM) in 2002 (could add another source verifying Natano as being a future PM if needed); Fenui News for running to replace a former PM (Latasi in 2018)
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Edward J. York
- Comment: Open to other ways of wording. Would like it if it could be featured by the end of the month, prior to the end of the Wikipedia:2024 Developing Countries WikiContest (since I'm competing with the Tuvalu flag).
BeanieFan11 (talk) 00:02, 10 September 2024 (UTC).
- New enough, long enough, QPQ done. We're treading around describing the political system slightly, but it can be pieced together. A source is needed in the article for the future PM part. Work on climate change should be mentioned in the lead. He may have been assistant Minsiter(?) but that may all need a deeper investigation. CMD (talk) 07:15, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Chipmunkdavis: I added a source for the future PM and expanded the lead a little to mention climate change. As for assistant minister, that source does seem to say that but then there are also several sources referring to him as "Teleke Lauti, Minister for the Environment" (including another UN publication) – he's so obscure, its hard to tell. I'm leaning towards keeping 'Minister for the Environment' though as there seems to be more sources saying that than 'Assistant Minister for the Environment'. Is that everything? BeanieFan11 (talk) 15:51, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
- That feels like everything. Hard to call a Minister of the Environment obscure though! CMD (talk) 16:00, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Chipmunkdavis: I added a source for the future PM and expanded the lead a little to mention climate change. As for assistant minister, that source does seem to say that but then there are also several sources referring to him as "Teleke Lauti, Minister for the Environment" (including another UN publication) – he's so obscure, its hard to tell. I'm leaning towards keeping 'Minister for the Environment' though as there seems to be more sources saying that than 'Assistant Minister for the Environment'. Is that everything? BeanieFan11 (talk) 15:51, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 9
[edit]Funnyback
- ... that people referred to the 1928 US$1 silver certificate as a Funnyback (pictured)?
- ALT1: ... that America's first small-size silver certificate was referred to as a Funnyback (pictured)? Source: Same or other in article
- ALT2: ... that the 1928 US$1 note was 30% smaller than the previous $1 note but people thought the reverse was funny (pictured)? Source: In an effort to lower manufacturing costs, all Federal Reserve notes are made about 30 percent smaller Who actually coined the nickname “Funnyback” about the mismatched face and back designs may never be pinpointed.
- ALT3: ... that the Funnyback (pictured) was the first first small-size silver certificate issued by the United States? Source: First small note
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Georgi Romanov
- Comment: I will likely continue to develop parts of this article. Edit: there are other images as well that are square like this one File:US-$1-SC-1928-E-Fr.1605.jpg
Bruxton (talk) 21:59, 10 September 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Article is new enough, long enough, well sourced and neutral. Earwig picks up some links, but these are quotations, so it's copy vio free. Hooks are cited and interesting. I prefer ALT0 and ALT3. Pic is free, used and clear. QPQ is done. All good. Lajmmoore (talk) 08:36, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
Catharina Weiss
- ... that Catharina Weiss (pictured) used to play for Rolling Chocolate? Source: https://www.cannstatter-zeitung.de/inhalt.die-18-jaehrige-rollstuhlbasketballerin-gewann-im-sommer-wm-bronze-catharina-weiss-s-grosser-wurf.8363bb42-1597-463c-85fb-79e8baa49aae.html
Hawkeye7 (discuss) 19:22, 9 September 2024 (UTC).
- Intriguing hook, although the only mention in the article for chocolate is "the Rolling Chocolate in Heidelburg", which a) isn't the same thing unless you have another source saying they're sometimes called that for short and b) lacks an end-of-sentence citation.--Launchballer 20:29, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Hawkeye7: Please address the above. Z1720 (talk) 14:42, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
- Added a redundant citation at end of sentence and tweaked the hook slightly. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 18:05, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Hawkeye7: Please address the above. Z1720 (talk) 14:42, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
- Full review needed. You are welcome to take up the otiosity of that rule at WT:DYK in the interim.--Launchballer 18:32, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
- Hi Hawkeye7, review follows: article created 4 September (and nominated 5 days later) and exceeds minimum length; article is cited inline throughout with two exceptions: that her current team is "RSV Lahn-Dill" and that her disability class is "1.0" (both mentioned in the infobox and the disability class in the lead only); please can you cite these? The English language sources look to be reliable for the content cited, happy to AGF on the foreign language ones; I didn't pick up on any issue with overly close paraphrasing; image is good and properly licensed; hook is fine and loosk to check out to the German-language source (a Google search appears to confirm the team is referred to simply as "Rolling Chocolate" elsewhere); a QPQ has been carried out. If you can address the two minor citations needed this should be good to go - Dumelow (talk) 17:44, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
- Full review needed. You are welcome to take up the otiosity of that rule at WT:DYK in the interim.--Launchballer 18:32, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
- Added a bit more to cover this. She has left RSV Lahn-Dill but I have let this stand as she is yet to join a new club. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 19:04, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
- Looks good to me - Dumelow (talk) 06:16, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
Engelbrecht !Nawatiseb
- ... that Engel Nawatiseb left the Landless People's Movement only one month after joining?
- Source: "Former Deputy Minister of Information and Communication Technology Engel Nawatiseb has parted ways with the Landless People’s Movement (LPM) after joining the party a mere month ago." -[4]
- ALT1: ... that Engel Nawatiseb left the Landless People's Movement due to disagreements about who should drive during the party's fifth anniversary celebration? Source: "The source further claimed that these party members felt threatened by Nawatiseb’s position in the party. “People felt why is it only Nawatiseb driving the car and not them?” the source said. Following the complaints, the party allegedly took the car from Nawatiseb.", and "Another party source said Nawatiseb was insulted by a powerful young leader in the party about the usage of the car. “Apparently he wasn’t sharing the car with others. But once a car is assigned to you, it’s difficult to share, because once it is broken it becomes your responsibility,” another party source said. The source said the car was taken away a day after the party’s fifth anniversary. “On Sunday morning when they took the car, they embarrassed and insulted the man,” the source said." [5]
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-Samoht27 (talk) 23:04, 11 September 2024 (UTC).
- I may review this nomination later today, but a quick comment is that while the source goes into detail about why !Nawatiseb was chosen to drive the car, why other party leaders were supposedly upset, and ostensible explanations as to why the car was reassigned, the article itself only talks about !Nawatiseb's embarrassment over the car being taken. I really like the second hook, but the disagreements should be detailed (or at least mentioned explicitly) in the article for the nomination to pass. Yue🌙 17:05, 12 September 2024 (UTC)
Also, I think it should be "a celebration of the party's fifth anniversary", because to my understanding he was to drive for the celebration in a specific part of Namibia, as he was the only person qualified in that area. Yue🌙 17:09, 12 September 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: References were spot-checked for verification; no issues arose. Both hooks are verified, but I prefer ALT1. However, I propose to the promoter this rewording of ALT1, which incorporates ALT0:
- ALT2: ... that Engel Nawatiseb reportedly left the Landless People's Movement just a month after joining because of disagreements over who should drive during the party's fifth anniversary celebration?
The sources are the two already given. Yue🌙 20:13, 12 September 2024 (UTC)
Sorry to butt in, but the article isn't good enough for DYK. At first, I intended to remove the stub tag (we don't run stubs at DYK) but it's arguably still a stub. There is nothing outside of his political career; no early life, education, or what he did before politics. The article therefore fails WP:DYKCOMPLETE. Secondly, the date and place of birth are both unreferenced and that's a violation of WP:BLP. Thirdly, about half the article deals with controversies and that feels unbalanced; hence it fails WP:NPOV. There's a lot more work required to get this ready. I'm sorry to be the bearer of bad news. Schwede66 08:17, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 10
[edit]Abdur Rahman Mahmudi
- ... that imprisoned Afghan politician Abdur Rahman Mahmudi (pictured) would write poems using onion juice as ink in his jail cell?
- Source: Louis Dupree. Red Flag Over Hindu Kush: Leftist movements in Afghanistan. AUFS, 1979. p. 17
Soman (talk) 10:51, 10 September 2024 (UTC).
- Will be claiming this review and hope to get to it within the next few days. For now, the hook is good and sourced; AGF on the source, but just to be sure I'd like to see on this page the relevant excerpt for verification purposes. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:13, 12 September 2024 (UTC)
- Continuing the review: the article is new enough and long enough at the time of the nomination, and no close paraphrasing was detected. A QPQ has been done, and the provided hook is interesting and cited inline. Given that I do not have access to the hook fact, I am assuming good faith here. This is almost ready to go: I would just like to see the relevant excerpt here be provided for verification purposes; the tick will be given once that's done. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:28, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
- "Dr. Abdur Rahman MAHMUDI. Born 1909. [...] Beaten in prison, kidneys virtually destroyed. Wrote poems in prison using onion juice as ink" --Soman (talk) 21:47, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
- That should work. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 07:01, 21 September 2024 (UTC)
- "Dr. Abdur Rahman MAHMUDI. Born 1909. [...] Beaten in prison, kidneys virtually destroyed. Wrote poems in prison using onion juice as ink" --Soman (talk) 21:47, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
- Continuing the review: the article is new enough and long enough at the time of the nomination, and no close paraphrasing was detected. A QPQ has been done, and the provided hook is interesting and cited inline. Given that I do not have access to the hook fact, I am assuming good faith here. This is almost ready to go: I would just like to see the relevant excerpt here be provided for verification purposes; the tick will be given once that's done. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:28, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
KAUT-TV
- ... that an Oklahoma TV station returned to its original call sign after the death of its founder, Gene Autry? Source: https://web.archive.org/web/20230906162655/https://www.oklahoman.com/story/news/1998/12/06/kpsg-memorializing-gene-autry-with-movie-serial-name-change/62259992007/
Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 08:32, 10 September 2024 (UTC).
- QPQ done. GA status and date confirmed. Hook is neutral and cited. No other problems, GTG. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 14:33, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
Pituamkek National Park Reserve
- ... that Pituamkek National Park Reserve is Canada's newest national park, protecting a chain of barrier islands used for fishing and hunting by the Mi'kmaq for 4,000 years?
- Source: Kristmanson, Helen. "Pitawelkek: A 2000-Year-Old Archaeological Site in Malpeque Bay". Island Magazine (84). PEI Museum & Heritage Foundation: 2–14 – via Island Archives, University of Prince Edward Island.
- Reviewed: ...Well, Better Than the Alternative
- Comment: PEIsquirrel is my alt. I don't know why the template is saying 0 past nominations (maybe I used my alt? I have 5 according to my user page) but QPQ should be required. I'll take care of that shortly.
Ivanvector (Talk/Edits) 19:42, 11 September 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: New enough, long enough, sourced and neutral, Earwig detects no copyvio issues other than long names and quoted passages, the hook is interesting. I am awaiting the QPQ as mentioned by the nominator. Ivanvector I want to clarify with you the value of "4,000 years" mentioned in the hook. I see a value of 3000 years as mentioned by "suggest the possible presence of a drowned site dating within the Woodland Period (which spans from about 3000 years ago to the recent historic period)." but I'm not sure whether the "to the recent historic period" is inclusive of an additional thousand years or not, I am not familiar with the terminology enough to make my own determination. Ornithoptera (talk) 21:44, 11 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Ivanvector: Please address the above. Z1720 (talk) 14:44, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Z1720 and Ornithoptera: I appreciate the pings. Very busy at work today and for the next few, but I will get to this. Regarding "4,000 years", one of the sources refers to human habitation on the islands from 2,000 BC, but it's not this source. I'll have to find it again. Ivanvector (Talk/Edits) 15:32, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Ivanvector: Note that per a recent rule change, a QPQ should have been provided at the time of the nomination. Please provide one as soon as possible, as the nomination may be closed without further warning unless a QPQ is given. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:45, 18 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: thanks, I was not aware of that. If we're going to be bureaucratic about things, the rules also suggest that previously completed QPQs can be credited towards a future nomination requiring one, and I have done QPQs with three or four of my past five nominations when none were required. Nonetheless, I have started to review ...Well, Better Than the Alternative. I will check on the sourcing for the time period this evening, and update accordingly. Ivanvector (Talk/Edits) 17:11, 18 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Ornithoptera: the source for 4,000 years is "First Look at the Proposed Pituamkek National Park Reserve" in National Parks Explorer, reference #6 in the article, which reads "These shores and forests have been home to the Mi’kmaq people for more than 4,000 years [...] ." I've added an additional inline citation. I interpreted "the recent historic period" as meaning the time period right up to European contact and the Acadian expulsion in the 18th century, and the section you're referring to I believe describes the estimated age of that particular drowned site or to the Pitawelkek site described in the source, not to the whole island chain. Ivanvector (Talk/Edits) 19:07, 18 September 2024 (UTC)
- To clarify the rule, it just means that a QPQ should have been provided at the time of making the nomination, if it is a review that was done previously. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 23:03, 18 September 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for getting back to me with the QPQ. I can verify that the new source for 4000 years explicitly mentions the date mentioned in the hook. For future reference, it might be ideal to not assume "the recent historic period" based on what you might assume, rather, finding a source that can attest to it within a relevant source is the safest way to go. The phrase can be interpreted in a variety of ways and would not serve as a strong source for this context. Thank you for your time Ivanvector, wonderful work on the article regardless. Ornithoptera (talk) 21:20, 21 September 2024 (UTC)
- To clarify the rule, it just means that a QPQ should have been provided at the time of making the nomination, if it is a review that was done previously. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 23:03, 18 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Ivanvector: Note that per a recent rule change, a QPQ should have been provided at the time of the nomination. Please provide one as soon as possible, as the nomination may be closed without further warning unless a QPQ is given. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:45, 18 September 2024 (UTC)
Hugh Bunel
- ... that after murdering Mabel de Bellême in France, Hugh Bunel went into exile for almost 20 years, serving with the Byzantine emperor and the Saracen army before joining Robert Curthose on crusade?
- Source: "Hugh Bunel, who murdered Mabel of Bellême, found himself pursued for years. Orderic tells us that Hugh fled first to Apulia, then to Sicily, and from there to the service of the Byzantine emperor Alexios Comnenos. But wherever Hugh went he was pursued by the threats and bribes of King William and Mabel's sons, who 'promised rewards and gifts to any spies who could kill the exiled assassin in whatever land they might find him', And so Hugh left Christendom altogether and lived among the Saracens for twenty years until, during the First Crusade, he appeared before Robert Curthose at the siege of Jerusalem and offered him his help and service in counsel and battle." from: Hagger, Mark S. (2017). Norman Rule in Normandy, 911-1144. Boydell & Brewer. p. 450. ISBN 978-1-78327-214-3.
- ALT1: ... that Norman warrior Hugh Bunel lived for years among the Saracens before turning against them to join the First Crusade? Source: as above
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Café Adria
Dumelow (talk) 07:01, 10 September 2024 (UTC).
- New enough, long enough, QPQ done. Can't access the relevant part of the hook source, but items sourced to Ordericus 1854 check out and have been very well rearranged throughout the article. I would just like to check where the certainty in the hook comes from, as the cited quote from the source (thanks a lot for that) reports it with some hesitation. CMD (talk) 08:58, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
- Hi CMD, I chose the quote above as it tells the story in one easy citable passage. I think Haggard is just making clear his source; other publications I have cited in the article state it more directly. Eg: "Hugh Bunel, who was exiled from Normandy after hacking off the head of Mabel of Bellême as she lay in bed, lived for twenty years among the Saracens, studying their customs and language: as a result he was able to offer useful services to the armies of the First Crusade." from: Fletcher, Richard A. (1991). The Quest for El Cid. Oxford University Press. p. 109. ISBN 978-0-19-506955-6. - Dumelow (talk) 11:03, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for adding further, good to go. CMD (talk) 15:45, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
- Hi CMD, I chose the quote above as it tells the story in one easy citable passage. I think Haggard is just making clear his source; other publications I have cited in the article state it more directly. Eg: "Hugh Bunel, who was exiled from Normandy after hacking off the head of Mabel of Bellême as she lay in bed, lived for twenty years among the Saracens, studying their customs and language: as a result he was able to offer useful services to the armies of the First Crusade." from: Fletcher, Richard A. (1991). The Quest for El Cid. Oxford University Press. p. 109. ISBN 978-0-19-506955-6. - Dumelow (talk) 11:03, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
Devil's Doorway (Wisconsin)
- ... that the Devil's Doorway (pictured) is found in Wisconsin?
- Source: source
- ALT1: ... that The Milwaukee Journal referred to a rock formation (pictured) as one of "Wisconsin's natural wonders"? Source: Wisconsin's natural wonders draw people from all over the state, the country and the world. From the Devil's Doorway at Devil's Lake, to the Apostle Islands, these are Wisconsin treasures.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Hamad City
Lightburst (talk) 01:39, 11 September 2024 (UTC).
- Hi Lightburst, review follows: article moved to mainspace on 10 September and exceeds minimum length; I am not familiar with the sources used but they appear to be reliable enough for the content; I didn't find any issue with overly close paraphrasing in a spotcheck on some of the sources; image source is no longer online but is a bot upload from a free image repository so ought to be fine; hooks mentioned in article and checkout to source cited, I prefer the simplicity of ALT0; a QPQ has been carried out. Looks fine to me - Dumelow (talk) 14:43, 11 September 2024 (UTC)
- Lightburst, should the image be File:Devil's Doorway 1898.jpg? The caption says 1898, but there is a digital camera photo above it. Rjjiii (talk) 03:49, 21 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Rjjiii: Thanks for catching that error. I removed the 1898 date. I preferred this picture to the 1898 image in the article as this one looks a bit more ominous. Lightburst (talk) 16:22, 21 September 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 11
[edit]Ernest de Munck
- ... that Ernest de Munck owned a Stradivarius cello now named after him?
- ALT1: ... that the Stradivarius cello once owned by Ernest de Munck is now named after him? Source: https://www.nmf.or.jp/english/instruments/post_291.html
- Reviewed:
AsYouWish13 02:26, 15 September 2024 (UTC).
- Long enough. New enough. Inline citations throughout. Eight of the 15 sources are behind Proquest, so AGF here. Other sources do check out. Generally well written; I did make a few minor copy-edits. Copyright "violation unlikely" (9.1% similarity) per Earwig. Both hooks are cited. I find ALT1 more interesting; plus, it references directly to the very Stradivarius cello once owned by the man. GTG for ALT1.
Pabhāvatī
- ... that the beauty of Princess Pabhāvatī was said to light up seven chambers, making lamps unnecessary? Source: Naing, Aung Min (2018). "ရတနာပုံဆရာဥ၏ မင်းကုသကွက်စိပ်" (PDF). Myanmar Academy of Arts and Science. XVI: 470.
- Reviewed:
Hteiktinhein (talk) 11:45, 11 September 2024 (UTC).
- The article is new enough and long enough, no QPQ is needed. The article seems mostly sourced to the primary source, but having a quick search I am satisfied the subject has further coverage. While the source given in this nomination is non-English and without a page number, the hook is sourced in the article to the primary source which does support it. The article would be improved by the use of page numbers for sources. I am unsure about the image copyright, I do not think it can be own work as it is a photograph of an artwork. CMD (talk) 09:25, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Chipmunkdavis:, Thank you for reviewing my first DYK submission. The 'ancient-buddhist-texts' English source is a primary source, but I added it mainly for clarity and better understanding in English. The article is fully supported by the Burmese source, and even without the 'ancient-buddhist-texts' reference, it remains comprehensive. The Burmese source, Kutha Zatdaw (PDF), Myanmar Alin (in Burmese), 16 June 2005, p. 10, is sufficient to cover the entire article. An article from the Myanmar Academy of Arts and Science is also an additional reference that can be used to verify the entire content of the article. If you're unable to verify the Burmese source, please feel free to seek assistance from other Burmese-speaking editors. And I added more English source and page numbers.
- Regarding the image, the Buddhist temple artwork is not copyrighted, which is a common case in Myanmar. Buddhist Jataka tales are often depicted in many temples and monasteries across Myanmar. For instance, File:071 The Defeat of Alavaka (9022063790).jpg is an example. In Myanmar and Thailand, temple arts of Buddha cosmology are generally not subject to copyright. Thanks! Hteiktinhein (talk) 20:06, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
- No problem, it is an interesting article. On the sources, there is no specific issue with non-English sources (although the English backup is appreciated), but as a general point I would suggest including page numbers next to specific claims for all languages. Would you have a link for more information about that copyright situation? CMD (talk) 14:53, 19 September 2024 (UTC)
- As I’m not an expert on copyright, I’m not sure how to explain it very well. I do know that Myanmar is not a freedom of panorama country, but the Aung Myin Dipa Temple in Patheingyi was established around 1880 by Min Dipa, a minister and court official in King Thibaw's court. The paintings in the temple seem old, but there is no indication of the year they were made or the owner’s name. So, they could be considered under the PD-Myanmar license. However, I don’t want to delay or cause any arguments, so it’s fine to promote my DYK without the photo. I’m withdrawing the photo for now. Pls kindly review. Thanks! Hteiktinhein (talk) 02:59, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
- Good to go. CMD (talk) 05:44, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
- As I’m not an expert on copyright, I’m not sure how to explain it very well. I do know that Myanmar is not a freedom of panorama country, but the Aung Myin Dipa Temple in Patheingyi was established around 1880 by Min Dipa, a minister and court official in King Thibaw's court. The paintings in the temple seem old, but there is no indication of the year they were made or the owner’s name. So, they could be considered under the PD-Myanmar license. However, I don’t want to delay or cause any arguments, so it’s fine to promote my DYK without the photo. I’m withdrawing the photo for now. Pls kindly review. Thanks! Hteiktinhein (talk) 02:59, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
- No problem, it is an interesting article. On the sources, there is no specific issue with non-English sources (although the English backup is appreciated), but as a general point I would suggest including page numbers next to specific claims for all languages. Would you have a link for more information about that copyright situation? CMD (talk) 14:53, 19 September 2024 (UTC)
- Regarding the image, the Buddhist temple artwork is not copyrighted, which is a common case in Myanmar. Buddhist Jataka tales are often depicted in many temples and monasteries across Myanmar. For instance, File:071 The Defeat of Alavaka (9022063790).jpg is an example. In Myanmar and Thailand, temple arts of Buddha cosmology are generally not subject to copyright. Thanks! Hteiktinhein (talk) 20:06, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 12
[edit]Passmore Edwards Centre
- ... that John Passmore Edwards erected a library (pictured) in memory of his mother?
- Source: "the building was a gift to Newton Abbot from Passmore Edwards, a noted public benefactor, in memory of his mother." from: "Adult Education Centre and Library". National Heritage List for England. Historic England. Retrieved 10 September 2024.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Dookie
Dumelow (talk) 15:25, 12 September 2024 (UTC).
- Created September 10, and 4,256 characters; new enough and long enough. The qpq is completed. The image is clear and free based on the FOP of the UK. Earrwig does not alert to any issues. AGF on the hook's source - thank you for providing a sentence from the book above. The hook is interesting and it looks like the subject provided nearly all of the money for the building so it is accurate. I made a few edits to the article for expediency. I did not change the spacing after periods (there are two). I think there should be one space after periods but based on MOS:DOUBLESPACE it does not affect what readers see. Bruxton (talk) 20:17, 13 September 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 13
[edit]United States ten-thousand-dollar bill
- ... that the US$10,000 bill (pictured) is the highest denomination of US currency to be used by the public?
- ALT1: ... that in 2023, an example of a US$10,000 bill (pictured) sold for US$480,000? Source: A $10,000 bill from 1934 sold for a record $480,000 at an auction in Texas auction
- ALT2: ... that even though banks will only redeem a US$10,000 bill (pictured) for face value, they are worth more to collectors? Source: If you had a $500, $1,000, $5,000 or $10,000 note now, and would turn the note in to your local bank, the bank would only credit you with the face value of the note. and various source to show greater value like They are led by a pair of $10,000 notes that each have an estimate of $125,000 to $175,000. and the sources for the auction sale.
- ALT3: ... that banks will redeem a US$10,000 bill (pictured) for face value, and then they will send it to the Department of the Treasury for destruction? Source: If you had a $500, $1,000, $5,000 or $10,000 note now, and would turn the note in to your local bank, the bank would only credit you with the face value of the note. and large denomination notes are sent to the Treasury for destruction
- ALT4: ... that a US$10,000 bill (pictured) is still legal tender in the United States? Source: If you had a $500, $1,000, $5,000 or $10,000 note now, and would turn the note in to your local bank, the bank would only credit you with the face value of the note. and Although no longer printed, high-denomination notes of $500 and higher are still considered legal tender in the United States. Notes in denominations higher than $100 were last printed by the BEP on Dec. 27, 1945, but released over the next more than two decades.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Passmore Edwards Centre
- Comment: I will continue to tinker but the article is complete
Bruxton (talk) 20:53, 13 September 2024 (UTC).
- Date, length, hook, qpq ok. Image free on Commons. I prefer the main hook or ALT1. Close paraphrase not found in spot check. --Soman (talk) 11:04, 15 September 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 14
[edit]Grupo Mexicano de Desarrollo, S.A. v. Alliance Bond Fund, Inc.
- ... that U.S. courts cannot freeze a defaulting debtor's foreign assets before trial, said the Supreme Court in Grupo Mexicano (1999), because the English Lord Chancellor didn't do that 210 years earlier?
- Source: Vanderbilt Law Review p. 1010; Indiana Law Journal p. 234–35
- ALT1: ... that because the English Lord Chancellor didn't freeze assets before trial in 1789, the U.S. Supreme Court decided in 1999 that U.S. courts can't either?
- Reviewed:
SilverLocust 💬 05:30, 14 September 2024 (UTC).
- New enough (draft), long enough, no QPQ needed. A couple of paragraphs lack citations, although they read as if they might simply use a duplicate of other existing citations. Earwig gives a high value, but this seems to be mostly quotations. If there is another way to word "converted the preliminary injunction into a permanent injunction" that may be useful, but if not, I have not found copyvio. The hook seems interesting from a common law perspective, but I am concerned the language does not easily track the article which may make it difficult for readers to find. For example, "freeze" does not appear in the article, neither does "Lord Chancellor". I do think it is in the sources given here, although I cannot access the source in the article. This should be a simple fix, either with tweaks to the article or the hook. CMD (talk) 10:48, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
- Added references for those few paragraphs I forgot to cite.
- To make it easier to find the support for the hook, I have rephrased the intro a bit, duplicated a footnote there from the body (optional per MOS:LEADCITE), and added non-paywalled sources for it. Additionally:
- I have changed a "frozen" into "freeze" for sake of CTRL+F. (There were already 8 instances of "freezing".)
- Likewise I have added "Lord Chancellor" to the lead, though "the Chancellor" and "the pre-Revolutionary Chancellor" appear in the article and refer to that. I used "Lord Chancellor" in the hook rather than "Court of Chancery" (the former court of the Lord Chancellor) mainly since it sounds more interesting (and is accurate), but I would be fine with instead using "Court of Chancery" in the hook.
- Re: "
although I cannot access the source
", if you log in to the Wikipedia: Library, then you should be able to access that paywalled sources via HeinOnline at Maloy, "Expansive Equity Jurisprudence: A Court Divided" (and likewise the other paywalled source at Haines, "The Conservative Assault on Federal Equity").
- While I have now very slightly changed the wording, "converted the preliminary injunction into a permanent injunction" (Google) is not original to the case, and the exact phrase is used by the Supreme Court, the court of appeals, and multiple sources (Burbank, Grenig)—in each instance without quotation.
- Thank you very much for looking over this. SilverLocust 💬 22:05, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the replies and explanations, and the TWL note. I believe this is good to go. CMD (talk) 01:51, 21 September 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you very much for looking over this. SilverLocust 💬 22:05, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
Love Lies (2024 film)
- ... that to help the production crew save on the budget, Sandra Ng wore her own clothes while filming Love Lies?
- Source: [1]
- ALT1: ... that singer-actor MC Cheung Tin-fu opened a Threads account and made his first post while filming Love Lies in Sapporo? Source: [2]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Yang Pao-an
Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 15:10, 14 September 2024 (UTC).
Timely nomination. I really like ALT0. Hook facts are verified and there are no copyvios that I can find. Well-written article although the synopsis might be a bit overly detailed. Looks good to go from a DYK perspective. Foreign language references accepted in good faith.--NØ 11:57, 19 September 2024 (UTC)
(Restored by Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) at 16:53, 20 September 2024 (UTC) per WP:TPO, see Special:Diff/1246513251)
Claiming this for review and hoping to finish the full review soon. For now I'll just note that the first hook is probably the best option here. It's mentioned in the article and properly referenced. I couldn't find where in the Chinese source the part about her using her own clothes is mentioned, but the English source confirmed it so there's that. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 15:14, 20 September 2024 (UTC)- Hi Narutolovehinata5. First of all, I am confused, as I believed User:MaranoFan had approved this nomination yesterday, and your statement does not imply a denouncement of their review. So I am unsure why Marano's review was overridden. As for the Chinese source, it is actually written in Cantonese. It writes "'First of all, I would like to thank Sandra Ng for providing many of her own beautiful clothes. In fact, we are the real scam syndicate, as we first asked Ng to play this role but couldn’t advance her payment. Then we "made" Ng into lending us her costumes, and even she joked, "are you guys really that poor?"' Ho Miu Ki expressed gratitude for Ng's professionalism and kindness to help the production crew saving a significant amount on wardrobe expenses. (首先要多謝君如提供許多私伙靚衫。其實我們才是真正的詐騙集團,首先請君如演這個角色,但又未能預支片酬;然後再『氹』君如借出服裝,連她也笑言『你哋係咪真係咁窮呀!』」何妙祺感謝吳君如的專業與不計較,願意為劇組節省大量服飾上的開銷。) It does not mention Ng wearing her clothes, as it was cited to support the first part of the sentence about her "[lending] her own wardrobe to the costume crew" and "to help to save money". It is unrelated to the hook, which is why I did not include that source in this nomination. But as you mentioned, the English source has already checked out the hook, so I am still uncertain about what the problem is here. —Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 15:50, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
- Narutolovehinata5 Do not delete other users' comments like you did here.--NØ 17:07, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
- @MaranoFan and Prince of Erebor: I'm really sorry about the last edit! I recently had the "save discarded edits" preference enabled and I had the editing tab open for a while since I was planning to review this. It seems that the new edits were not detected by the tool after refreshing and instead reverted to an earlier version of the article, hence why my edit overrode the review and I didn't know or notice that a review had already been done. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 23:40, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
- Ahhh thanks for clarifying, Narutolovehinata5! It is fine. I was just a bit confused, because I remember the nomination being approved, but that comment suddenly disappeared and it was undergoing review again. Thought I might be delusional or something. XD —Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 07:36, 21 September 2024 (UTC)
- Putting the tick here just to make it clear that MaranoFan already reviewed/approved this, and I've struck my "review". Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 21:38, 21 September 2024 (UTC)
- Ahhh thanks for clarifying, Narutolovehinata5! It is fine. I was just a bit confused, because I remember the nomination being approved, but that comment suddenly disappeared and it was undergoing review again. Thought I might be delusional or something. XD —Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 07:36, 21 September 2024 (UTC)
- @MaranoFan and Prince of Erebor: I'm really sorry about the last edit! I recently had the "save discarded edits" preference enabled and I had the editing tab open for a while since I was planning to review this. It seems that the new edits were not detected by the tool after refreshing and instead reverted to an earlier version of the article, hence why my edit overrode the review and I didn't know or notice that a review had already been done. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 23:40, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
References
- ^ Hsia, Heidi (22 April 2024). "Sandra Ng wears her own clothes for "Love Lies"". Yahoo! Life. Archived from the original on 18 May 2024. Retrieved 13 September 2024.
- ^ Kwong, Lenka (6 June 2023). "「Threads」社交應用程式熱潮來襲!到底一眾名人的首個帖子內容是甚麼?" [The Threads social media app craze is here! What exactly is the content of the first posts from these celebrities?]. Harper's Bazaar (in Chinese). Archived from the original on 13 September 2024. Retrieved 12 September 2024.
Elias Karmon
- ... that Mr. Bronx was not from the Bronx?
- Source: https://digital.bronxhistoricalsociety.org/mskarmon ( known as “Mr. Bronx,” ... Born in 1910 in the Lower East Side of Manhattan)
RoySmith (talk) 19:43, 14 September 2024 (UTC).
- Doing... ミラP@Miraclepine 18:14, 15 September 2024 (UTC)
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- Adequate sourcing:
- Neutral:
- Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing: - Earwig has one score at 29.6% but it's generally due to a long list, and I nothing severe but one CLOP: "immigrants from Eastern Europe who worked in the garment industry" -> "Eastern European immigrants in the local garment industry"
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Overall: Moved to draftspace on DYK day and size is 3979 B. Since we're almost done, @RoySmith: fix that one issue and I'll approve. Gotta admit that hook was interesting. ミラP@Miraclepine 18:47, 15 September 2024 (UTC)
Miraclepine thank you for the review; I've done some rewording. RoySmith (talk) 19:07, 15 September 2024 (UTC)
- @RoySmith: Okay we're good to go. ALT0 approved. ミラP@Miraclepine 19:11, 15 September 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 15
[edit]Edmond and Lily Safra Center for Brain Sciences
- ... that the facade of the Edmond and Lily Safra Center for Brain Sciences in Jerusalem is a screen based on the circuitry of a rat brain?
- Source: Overlaid with gleaming 21st-century filigree, this esthetic delight hints at pattern and order, embedded in randomness. “They are Henry Markram’s neurons – or rather, from his rat brains,” explains Segev, “and we at ELSC had the idea of this neuron trellis wrapping round the building.” https://www.jpost.com/Jerusalem-Report/In-sickness-and-in-health-540756
- Reviewed:
- Comment: I am trying to find a better image to illustrate the neuron screen
Simxaraba (talk) 07:24, 20 September 2024 (UTC).
- I have now added what I think is a better image of the neuron screen. I can come up with another hook if this one is not good enough.Simxaraba (talk) 09:09, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
- The article is new enough, long enough, has size and references are fine, and the hook works well. QPQ isn't required. I think the other picture in the article might show the facade with the neural network detail more clearly, so it could be a better fit. Anyway, we're all set! Mariamnei (talk) 10:34, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
June Franklin
- ... that June Franklin was the first African American in an Iowa major political party to be elected as the Assistant Minority Leader of the Democratic House?
- Source: "In recognition of her demonstrated leadership skills, she was elected during the 63rd General Assembly to the position of Assistant Minority Leader of the Democratic House. Franklin is the first African-American to hold such a leadership position in either major political party in Iowa." - Silag, Bill (2001). Outside In: African-American History In Iowa 1838-2000. State Historical Society of Iowa. pp. 349–350. ISBN 0890330131.
SL93 (talk) 00:29, 17 September 2024 (UTC).
- Not a huge fan of the hook angle given that being an assistant minority leader doesn't seem as impressive being an actual minority leader. There do seem to be some other possible alternatives in the article so here they are:
- ALT1 ... that Iowa politician June Franklin worked as an insurance agent and a real estate agent prior to entering politics?
- ALT1a ... that Iowa state representative June Franklin worked as an insurance agent and a real estate agent prior to entering politics?
- ALT2 ... that Iowa politician June Franklin wrote to 10 members of the US Congress urging them to declare Martin Luther King Jr.'s birthday a federal holiday?
- ALT3 ... that state representative June Franklin addressed the nation from the Iowa State Capitol following the assassination of Martin Luther King Jr.?
- Most partial to ALT1/ALT1a myself but I'll leave it to a reviewer. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:24, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
- Narutolovehinata5 I agree that those are much better. Thank you. SL93 (talk) 00:32, 19 September 2024 (UTC)
- Doing... ミラP@Miraclepine 00:18, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Nomination two days after creation. Size 2487 B. AGF offline source for ALT0, 1, and 1a. Prefer ALT2 over ALT3 over the others. ミラP@Miraclepine 00:49, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
Brussels Party Conference of the Communist Party of Germany
- ... that the 1935 Brussels Party Conference of the Communist Party of Germany took place in the outskirts of Moscow rather than in Brussels?
- Source: Hans Kluth. Die KPD in der Bundesrepublik: Ihre politische Tätigkeit und Organisation 1945 – 1956. Springer-Verlag, 2013. pp. 12, 15
Soman (talk) 11:19, 15 September 2024 (UTC).
- I will gladly review this article today! WatkynBassett (talk) 08:58, 28 September 2024 (UTC)
- The article was moved to mainspace on 15 September 2024 and nominated on the same day. It is thus eligible.
- The article is well-sourced. I did some spot checks and the references checked out. I would have loved to see Sfn-References. If you plan to bring this article to GA, I would suggest using them (I would offer myself to review this GA-nomination)
- The article is written in a neutral and non-promotional tone. However, I inserted some quotation-marks to highlight particular Communist-vocabulary.
- Earwig did not pick up anything.
- QPQ done.
- Hook review: I really liked and enjoyed the hook! I thought I had a passable knowledge of that era but never heard of the KPD using "code locations" in the 1930s. For the promoter: I accessed the German-language source provided via Wikipedia Library and it checked out.
- Result: Thank you very much for creating free knowlege, Soman. I gladly approve the hook. If you ever want to bring the article to GA, I would offer myself as a reviewer. WatkynBassett (talk) 09:46, 28 September 2024 (UTC)
WatkynBassett (talk) 05:42, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
GhGk-63
- ... that an ancient Canadian archaeological site was discovered during the construction of a dump?
- Source: Desrosiers, Pierre M.; Gendron, Daniel (2004). "The GhGk-63 Site: A Dorset Occupation in Southeastern Hudson Bay, Nunavik". Canadian Journal of Archaeology. 28 (1). page 76
Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 05:10, 15 September 2024 (UTC).
- Article created 13 September. No issues of copyvio or plagiarism. All sources appear reliable. Hook is interesting and sourced. QPQ is done. Looks good! Thriley (talk) 02:56, 16 September 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 16
[edit]Ava–Hanthawaddy War (1401–1403)
- ... that King Minkhaung I of Ava lamented that King Razadarit of Hanthawaddy had so far invaded his country without "breaking a sword or a lance"?
- Source: Chronicle source: Hmannan Yazawin Vol. 1 2003, page 455.
Hybernator (talk) 22:58, 23 September 2024 (UTC).
- No problems detected, date, size, hook, QPQ, etc. all GTG. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 15:21, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
Verna Mersereau
- ... that American stage actress Verna Mersereau performed her traditional classical dances before royalty in Calcutta?
SilverserenC 01:49, 18 September 2024 (UTC).
- New enough (moved draft), long enough. No copyvio from spotcheck of the first 3 sources. Very nice work with the newspapers. On prose, just a double check on whether we should be writing "Europe and the Orient", it feels outdated. Perhaps it should be in quotes, as I am unsure modern readers will understand what "the Orient" means. In Career, I am unclear how she joined a company in 1928 if she had already travelled with them in 1927.For the hook, I am unsure where "ancient" comes from, it is not in the sources. I would also suggest wording it as "royalty in Calcutta", as I'm not sure Calcutta itself had specific royalty. Otherwise, it is interesting and sourced. CMD (talk) 13:48, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
- Hi, Chipmunkdavis! I've fixed usage of "the Orient", per your suggestion. I only used the term because the papers in question did without technically defining what area that referred to. I've fixed the year discrepancy. I've changed the hook to "in".
- As for ancient, I would love for alternative suggestions on that one. I included it for a particular reason. If it just says "classical dance", then people are going to assume that means ballet or ballroom dances, when that is absolutely not the type of dances being referred to. The dances she used were things like ancient Assyrian and Egyptian dances. However, the sources on her dancing before the Calcutta royalty didn't specify which dance types she used in that case, so I wasn't comfortable automatically including either of those two cultural names. SilverserenC 21:44, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
- Interesting that the sources all seem to use classical dance, perhaps its meaning has shifted. After a quick look around, would something like "folk" or "traditional" work? The royalty wording should be tweaked in the article as well. CMD (talk) 00:56, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
- I suppose traditional classical dances will work. I've made the change in the hook above and fixed the royalty sentences in the article. SilverserenC 01:07, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
- We are good to go, in the hopes of one day getting a Wikipedia article on this meaning of classical dance. CMD (talk) 01:29, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
- I suppose traditional classical dances will work. I've made the change in the hook above and fixed the royalty sentences in the article. SilverserenC 01:07, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
- Interesting that the sources all seem to use classical dance, perhaps its meaning has shifted. After a quick look around, would something like "folk" or "traditional" work? The royalty wording should be tweaked in the article as well. CMD (talk) 00:56, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
- As for ancient, I would love for alternative suggestions on that one. I included it for a particular reason. If it just says "classical dance", then people are going to assume that means ballet or ballroom dances, when that is absolutely not the type of dances being referred to. The dances she used were things like ancient Assyrian and Egyptian dances. However, the sources on her dancing before the Calcutta royalty didn't specify which dance types she used in that case, so I wasn't comfortable automatically including either of those two cultural names. SilverserenC 21:44, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 17
[edit]Veto (card game)
... that Veto was a Polish collectible card game inspired by the history of Poland, published from 2004 to 2017?Source: see Mochocki 2017 and 2024, cited in the article- Reviewed:
- Comment: QPQ pending. This is my article translated by another editor from pl wiki.
Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 14:50, 24 September 2024 (UTC).
- Article is new enough and long enough. The sources do seem to suggest the subject exists. The article seems sourced and presentable. The proposed hook seems quite bland, stating only that a historical card game exists. It doesn't even convey the fun concept of the liberum veto I assume the game is named after, although the article does not mention this either. Some new hook options are needed. As an administrative point, there is now somewhat of a consensus that QPQs should be included with nominations, so there is a need to carry it out here soon. Best, CMD (talk) 20:15, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Chipmunkdavis: How about this ALT1: ... that Veto, inspired by the history of Polish-Lithuanian Commonwealth, is considered the first Polish collectible card game?
- QPQ done: Template:Did you know nominations/Ava–Hanthawaddy War (1401–1403). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:14, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks. That's a better hook, but it would be good to get something very specific. Rather than the broad history of the Commonwealth, I would prefer an alt that specifically mentions the machinations of the Sjem (if somewhat dramatised). CMD (talk) 04:39, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Chipmunkdavis: So would I, but to my surprise, I couldn't find any RS that make this obvious connection explicit. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:16, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
- Well that's a huge failing of the Polish gaming media landscape. Approve ALT1. CMD (talk) 06:46, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Chipmunkdavis: So would I, but to my surprise, I couldn't find any RS that make this obvious connection explicit. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:16, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks. That's a better hook, but it would be good to get something very specific. Rather than the broad history of the Commonwealth, I would prefer an alt that specifically mentions the machinations of the Sjem (if somewhat dramatised). CMD (talk) 04:39, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
School of the Arts, Singapore
- ... that Louis Vuitton helped to develop the visual arts programme for School of the Arts, Singapore?
- Source: "FRENCH luxury label Louis Vuitton (LV) will be partnering the School of the Arts (Sota) to develop a visual arts programme for its students."
- Reviewed:
BenTanXiaoMing (talk) 06:33, 20 September 2024 (UTC).
- New enough, long enough. Article is well sourced (other than Regina Song's alumni info which I added one for you) and doesn't seem to have neutrality & copyvio concerns. Hook is interesting enough & AGF on source since it appears the article is only accessible at NLB libraries and I can't go to one in the near future. I also tweaked the hook to make it read more naturally (hopefully), though please do voice out if you disagree. QPQ not needed. Overall seems good to go to me. S5A-0043Talk 09:57, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 18
[edit]White Noise (Will Wood song)
- ... that in the music video for "White Noise", Will Wood sings with a shaved head while an un-shaved version of himself plays backing instruments?
ALT1: ... that Will Wood claims that white noise can cure cancer in his song "White Noise"? Source: https://www.theothersidereviews.com/a-chat-with-will-wood-20-07-22/- Reviewed:
Koopastar (talk) 02:39, 25 September 2024 (UTC).
- @Viriditas: Here's a rewritten version:
- ALT1a: ... that a Bulgarian choir erroneously sings that white noise can cure cancer in Will Wood's song "White Noise"?
- I initially opted for "claim" to encompass that it could be not true, especially given the rarity of something that could cure cancer, but I see the problem behind possibly leading readers to believe it's non-satirical. However, it still has some unusualness to it with the context, and a Bulgarian choir doesn't seem like a common thing to appear in pop music, so I believe this new version could work. I did attempt to think of a hook that encompasses the song's theme, but most interesting points would be sourced from the song's page on Genius, which is a primary source. Koopastar (talk)
- @Koopastar: Thanks for your work on this. I think there's a lot out there about the song, which means you don't have to use Genius. If you were to use the "cure cancer" bit, take a look at this source, which goes in the direction I was talking about. However, I really think it's best to avoid the "cure cancer" thing because it's so problematic and exists solely in the fictional universe of the song (he also says he was joking). My opinion is its best to focus on the facts. The idea that he conducted an 18-person Bulgarian choir over zoom is incredible! (Or is it 16? He says both; perhaps it's a typo? It looks like it really is 16, but your article has 30 listed, let's fix this, or at least figure out which is correct) Why not stick with something like that? You can also add other details to the hook. Did he do this through zoom due to COVID restrictions or for another reason? He says it was one of the "first songs I wrote when I picked up the ukulele", so you might be able to add this as well. All I'm saying is that there are an infinite number of choices that don't use "cure cancer", and we should stick with those. I'm also drawn to what Wood says about the meaning of the song in conversation with Suzanne Torrison in the Behind the Curtains Media interview.[7] That really resonates with me and encapsulates the entire song in one go. There's numerous good hook possibilities available in that interview. Viriditas (talk) 21:09, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Koopastar: Considering the issues with WP:DYKFICTION that were brought up in the last review, have you considered new hooks? Perhaps something matter of fact about the Bulgarian choir? Viriditas (talk) 19:59, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Koopastar: I find this material from York Calling really interesting: "For White Noise, Will also had the chance to direct a 16-piece Bulgarian orchestra over Zoom."[8] In the current version of the article, you write "Wood later communicated with a Bulgarian choir via Zoom to create the song's backing vocals", which underplays his role as music director. What would make this perfect, is if you could somehow work in the COVID-19 pandemic into the hook, as the album itself was written and recorded during that time, and that might explain why Wood was working on Zoom, but that may not be possible given the sources. Something to think about at least? Viriditas (talk) 20:50, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Viriditas: Apologies for taking so long with this. I have some new hooks now:
- ALT2: ... that Will Wood conducted a Bulgarian choir via Zoom for "White Noise"? Source: https://illustratemagazine.com/will-wood-release-a-new-music-video-for-the-single-white-noise/
- ALT3: ... that the soothing ukulele tone of the song "White Noise" was inspired by a college acid trip? Source: https://illustratemagazine.com/will-wood-release-a-new-music-video-for-the-single-white-noise/
ALT4: ... that the song "White Noise" optimistically grieves complacency caused by recommender systems? Source: https://twostorymelody.com/will-wood-on-white-noise-decisions-on-singles-and-empty-celebrations/
- In addition to your suggestion of the choir hook, I also made a couple about the song's subject and background. The reason I didn't use a number for the hook nor the article itself is because of the conflicting numbers between sources, as well as 30 people being credited for the song's choir in the CD. Using 30 would dismiss both numbers Will said, so it feels best to just describe it as-is because choirs typically tend to be large. Additionally, the only article about the song that mentions COVID-19 or "the pandemic" in any capacity is (1), which doesn't discuss the Zoom call unfortunately. Koopastar (talk) 23:56, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Viriditas: Apologies for taking so long with this. I have some new hooks now:
@Koopastar: Great job! I will try to finish this up later and close it out. Viriditas (talk) 23:58, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
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ALT0 is okay, but not as interesting to me. ALT1 should be crossed out as it erroneously frames the hook in a way other than Wood intended. If you listen to the song and pay attention to the lyrics in context, Wood is sarcastically making fun of the idea that white noise cures cancer while also poking fun at the "white noise" of empty music criticism, etc. In other words, he's not actually saying it cures cancer, so the hook doesn't work for me, but I get if you were going for the quirky slot, and I think in some ways that could work. If you look at the source it says "I hired a 16-person classical choir in Bulgaria and conducted them over a Zoom call to get a recording of them erroneously claiming white noise cures cancer." Keep in mind, the song is not about the literal definition of white noise, "noise containing many frequencies with equal intensities", although it pays lip service to that definition in many different ways (white noise sound of a fluorescent light; white noise of holding a seashell to your ear, etc.) The song is about the metaphor of white noise, background noise that drowns out other sounds in a meaningless or distracting way. I think this is a really important song that deserves an important hook. I could pass ALT0 right now, but I'm not a big fan of it. Do you want to give it another go and submit a few more hooks?
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Overall: Prefer ALT2. Second choice would be ALT3, although I'm not fond of linking the ukulele tone to the acid trip without better sources, even though it's true that the song was inspired by it. Third choice would be ALT0. Oppose ALT4 for now based on its unusual wording, which reads as a bad paraphrase. That should also be fixed in the article. I like the intent of ALT4, but if you want to use it, it needs to be rewritten. Overall, good work. Note, I made several copyedits to the article to preserve the source-text integrity. Some of my changes might be considered subjective or interpretive, so please take a look and change to your liking. Viriditas (talk) 22:08, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
Gerda Philipsborn
- ... that Gerda Philipsborn, a German woman, dedicated her life to the early development of Jamia Millia Islamia, a national university in Delhi, India?
- Reviewed:
❯❯❯ Raydann(Talk) 11:07, 25 September 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: The article was created by Raydann on September 18, 2024, 7 days before the nomination. It has 3720 characters (571 words). Acc to this, [9] only one descriptive phrase is same as the source material. Seyamar(245CMR)💬📜 07:57, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
Karađorđeva šnicla
- ... that the Karađorđeva šnicla was accidentally created as an improvisation of chicken Kiev? Source: Kalaba, Ana (9 March 2020). ""Kako sam skuvao istoriju": Životna priča Titovog kuvara" ["How I Cooked History": The Life Story of Tito's Chef]. NOVA portal (in Serbian). Archived from the original on 10 December 2023. Retrieved 13 September 2024., Mitrović, Nemanja (19 February 2023). "Jugoslavija i hrana: Kako je Titov kuvar stvorio Karađorđevu šniclu" [Yugoslavia and food: How Tito's chef created Karađorđe's schnitzel]. BBC News (in Serbian). Archived from the original on 17 March 2023. Retrieved 13 September 2024.
Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 12:31, 20 September 2024 (UTC).
- Article has achieved Good Article status. No issues of copyvio or plagiarism. All sources appear reliable. Hook is interesting and sourced. QPQ is done. Looks ready to go. Thriley (talk) 00:20, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
Dusko Doder
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that Dusko Doder was able to surmise that Yuri Andropov, the leader of the Soviet Union, had died from the evening lighting at the Soviet Defense Ministry and a change to classical music on radio and television?
- Source: "Doder, who was known for his scoops, was reporting for The Post in February 1984 when he noticed hundreds of lights blazing at the Soviet Defense Ministry in Moscow. He surmised that the Soviet leader, Yuri Andropov, had died. United States officials, dismissing the suggestion, said that Mr. Doder was “smoking pot,” as he and Ms. Branson wrote in a 2021 memoir, “The Inconvenient Journalist.”
“Soviet television and radio Thursday night unexpectedly changed scheduled programs to classical music,” Mr. Doder’s dispatch read. “The unusual change came against the backdrop of the illness of Soviet leader Yuri Andropov.”"
NYTimes- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/GhGk-63
- Comment: Alt hooks welcome
Thriley (talk) 21:34, 24 September 2024 (UTC).
- New enough, long enough. No copyvio or OR found. QPQ is done. Appeared on the main page, but as an RD.Hook is interesting, and sourced in the article. Regarding alt hooks, I mean, what a life. Lots of possibilities in finding a friend to fund international travel, covering Tiananmen and the breakup of Yugoslavia, the classic UK libel suit. That said, I like the current one, no need to mess with a good thing. CMD (talk) 16:12, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
ALT1 ... that journalist Dusko Doder announced the 1984 death of Yuri Andropov, the leader of the Soviet Union, a day before the Soviet government after noticing changes to the lighting at a government building and a sudden shift to classical music on radio and television? Thriley (talk) 17:57, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Chipmunkdavis: What do you think of this hook? It feels a bit more hooky. Thriley (talk) 17:58, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
- With the changes that it Doder "reported" before the Soviet Union "announced" it would work, as he sent the info to his newspaper which published on the day of the Soviet announcement. CMD (talk) 03:21, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
ALT2 ... that Dusko Doder reported the 1984 death of Yuri Andropov, the leader of the Soviet Union, a day before the Soviet government announced it after he noticed changes to the lighting at a government building and a sudden shift to classical music on radio and television?Thriley (talk) 17:58, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
- With the changes that it Doder "reported" before the Soviet Union "announced" it would work, as he sent the info to his newspaper which published on the day of the Soviet announcement. CMD (talk) 03:21, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Chipmunkdavis: What do you think of this hook? It feels a bit more hooky. Thriley (talk) 17:58, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Chipmunkdavis: It looks like the previous hooks exceed the character count. Here's a shorter one: ALT3 ... that Dusko Doder reported the 1984 death of Yuri Andropov, the leader of the Soviet Union, before any official announcement after noticing a sudden shift to classical music on radio and television? Thriley (talk) 18:09, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
- A shameful day for me, the DYK reviewer. You can also just replace "was able to surmise" in ALT0 with "surmised" and it is in the limit, but any formulation works. CMD (talk) 01:48, 28 September 2024 (UTC)
Brian David Gilbert
- ... that Brian David Gilbert's online content includes a musical version of Stranger Things, a series of Halloween-themed ABBA covers, and a guide to health insurance?
— Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧 (talk | contribs) 16:48, 19 September 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: The hook is really interesting, good to go! 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗
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Ana Eva Hei
- ... that one of the last surviving women from Rapa Nui to receive traditional facial tattoos was queen consort Ana Eva Hei (pictured)? Source: "By 1930 only two tattooed women survived: Juan Tepano's mother, old Viriamo, and Ana Eva Hei the wife of Atamu Tekana ..." (p.117) https://www.google.co.uk/books/edition/The_Tattooing_Arts_of_Tribal_Women/3eqeAAAAMAAJ?hl=en&gbpv=1&bsq=Ana+Eva+Hei&dq=Ana+Eva+Hei&printsec=frontcover [see Atamu Tekena for his role as king]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Archcliffe Fort
- Comment: I could crop the image down if required
Lajmmoore (talk) 19:14, 18 September 2024 (UTC).
- The article is meeting the size requirement, was nominated in time, and the QPQ checks out. I don't think the image requires cropping. However, isn't the hook missing the word "surviving" for it to match what the source says, Lajmmoore? Something like "... that one of the last surviving women from Rapa Nui to receive traditional facial tattoos was queen consort Ana Eva Hei"? The article has the same issue.--NØ 11:17, 19 September 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks so much MaranoFan - that's a good spot and I've fixed the missing word in both the hook and the article. Lajmmoore (talk) 22:02, 19 September 2024 (UTC)
- I think this is good to go in that case.--NØ 04:05, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
Daughter's Daughter
- ... that Sylvia Chang is the first individual to receive an honorable mention for the Toronto International Film Festival's Platform Prize with her performance in Daughter's Daughter?
- Source: [1]
- ALT1: ... that the scenes set in the United States in the Taiwanese film Daughter's Daughter were almost written out but were retained at the insistence of lead actress Sylvia Chang? Source: [2]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Milan A. P. Harminc
- Comment: Before my rewrite, there was a large unsourced paragraph that should have been removed and arguably should not have counted toward the prose length. However, even if that paragraph were included, the original prose contained 1,011 characters (Special:Diff/1246034327), while the current article after my rewrite contains 6,201 characters. Therefore, it is 100% eligible for DYK.
Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 15:45, 18 September 2024 (UTC).
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- Other problems: - ALT0 is fine. However, both the source for ALT1 and your translation of that quote say that the scenes were almost not filmed in the US. The current wording of ALT1 makes it sound like the footage was shot and then almost omitted in post-production, which is something different.
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Overall: @Prince of Erebor: Nice work on this article. ALT0 is good to go, but if you want ALT1 instead, the wording of that hook should be clarified, as per my comments above. Honestly, I think ALT1 would be more interesting if you submit a revised hook. Epicgenius (talk) 21:21, 19 September 2024 (UTC)
- Hi Epicgenius, thanks for your feedback! Perhaps I can change it to:
- ALT2: "...that the scenes set in the United States in the Taiwanese film Daughter's Daughter were nearly omitted during the writing process but were retained at the insistence of lead actress Sylvia Chang?"
- What do you think? —Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 14:01, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Prince of Erebor, thanks for the response. ALT0 and ALT2 are good to go. Epicgenius (talk) 14:08, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
References
- ^ 羅子欣 (17 September 2024). "王淨「香菜梗」成國際笑點!《鬼才之道》《女兒的女兒》多倫多影展奪獎". TVBS News (in Chinese). Retrieved 18 September 2024.
而多倫多影展2015年設立站台單元,首度頒發「榮譽提及獎」給張艾嘉,史無前例。
[Since the Toronto International Film Festival established the Platform section in 2015, for the first time, Sylvia Chang was awarded with an "Honorable Mention", which is unprecedented.] - ^ Chien, Ying-jou (9 May 2024). "侯孝賢監製新片、張艾嘉向導演申訴:讓我站在紐約街頭一秒鐘!|金馬前進坎城". Yahoo! News (in Chinese). Retrieved 18 September 2024.
《女兒的女兒》導演黃熙坦言,當初拍戲怕沒錢,劇本改過很多個版本,就是為了要在台北拍,不去美國。「張姐聽到以後跟我說:『開什麼玩笑?你好歹要給我站在紐約街頭一秒鐘吧?』」後來劇組真的拉到紐約出外景。
[Director Huang Xi of Daughter's Daughter admitted that he was initially worried about production costs and revised the script multiple times to set the shoot in Taipei instead of the United States. "Sylvia Chang heard this and said to me, 'Are you kidding? At the very least, you need to let me stand on the streets of New York for a second?'" Eventually, the crew really did go to New York for location shooting.]
Gao Qifeng
- ... that Gao Qifeng (pictured), a founder of the Lingnan School, slept in a room filled with explosives?
- Source: Croizier, Ralph (2023). Art and Revolution in Modern China: The Lingnan (Cantonese) School of Painting, 1906–1951. University of California Press. p. 63. ISBN 978-0-520-33696-4. (Quote: "In the eulogy at Qifeng's funeral twenty years later, another old revolutionary, Wang Jingwei, would testify to his old friend's courage in sleeping peacefully in a room stored with explosives, presumably the revolutionary pottery shop in Canton before 1911.")
- ALT1: ... that the painter Gao Qifeng (pictured) was reported to have fled China after accusing Provisional President Yuan Shikai of assassinating a nationalist leader? Source: Cai Dengshan (蔡登山) (25 August 2023). "番禺高奇峰:未尽其才的"岭南三杰" [Panyu Gao Qifeng: The "Three Heroes of Lingnan" Who Did Not Use His Talents to Their Fullest]. Dute News (in Chinese). Shenzhen Media Group. Archived from the original on 17 September 2024. Retrieved 17 September 2024. (quote: 一九一三年,宋教仁在上海被袁世凯遣刺客刺杀于火车站,高奇峰因与谢英伯、马小进为文,揭宋教仁案血迹秘密,为袁世凯下令通缉,于是出亡日本,研究制版学。 [In 1913, Song Jiaoren was assassinated at the Shanghai train station by assassins sent by Yuan Shikai. Gao Qifeng, together with Xie Yingbo and Ma Xiaojin, wrote an article to reveal the bloody secret of Song Jiaoren's case, and Yuan Shikai put them on a wanted list. Gao then went into exile in Japan to study printmaking.]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Poll (parrot)
— Chris Woodrich (talk) 21:47, 18 September 2024 (UTC).
- Both the hooks are really good on interestingness. The article is well-done with no copyright issues and meets the size requirements. This was nominated in a timely manner and the QPQ has been completed. Hopefully it can appear with the image as it is high quality.--NØ 11:11, 19 September 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 19
[edit]Deutscher Kurzwellensender Atlantik
- ... that during the Second World War the British government transmitted German and American music to Nazi U-boats?
- Source: "In March 1943, the Political Warfare Executive at Woburn Abbey began broadcasting from two radio stations, Deutscher Kurzwellensender Atlantik and Soldatenseder Calais. These purported to be authentic German transmitters, but in fact had been developed to undermine German morale, and in particular to target U-boat crews ... The objective was to subvert the discipline of enemy submariners by providing continuous first-class music, news, and feature programs every night between 1830 and 0800. Interspersed with German dance bands and singers recorded in the United States, Atlantik spread rumors, issued depressing news bulletins, and generally sought to destroy the seamen's faith in their leadership by contradicting what they had heard from Germany on official channels." from: West, Nigel (2010). Historical Dictionary of Naval Intelligence. Rowman & Littlefield. pp. 90–91. ISBN 978-0-8108-6760-4.
- ALT1: ... that one regular act on a Second World War German-language British propaganda radio station was a band captured while performing for the Afrika Korps? Source: "Atlantiksender's German in-house band, led by Henry Zeisel, had been captured by the British Eighth Army when they were touring to entertain Rommel's Afrika Korps." from Rankin, Nicholas (10 November 2009). A Genius for Deception: How Cunning Helped the British Win Two World Wars. Oxford University Press. pp. 308–310. ISBN 978-0-19-975671-1.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Devil's Doorway (Wisconsin)
Dumelow (talk) 13:26, 19 September 2024 (UTC).
- @Dumelow: Another interesting article and perfect for DYK. I prefer ALT0 as interesting and confirmed with citation in the article based on the pull out detailed under the hook. I suggest adding the dates that this station operated in the lead. It was nominated seven days after creation so it is new enough and at 6371 characters it is long enough. The QPQ is done and Earwig does not find evidence of plagiarism. We could use some attention on a few minor things prior to approval.
- I suggest adding the dates that this station was operating somewhere in the lead and body.
- MOS:AMPM I think it should be: 6 am 8 am, and should the word broadcast be broadcasted? Here is the sentence: "It broadcast between 6pm and 8am daily on a number of shortwave channels".
- Maybe other words for the phrase "to this end" as it feels conversational and is an informal idiom. Here is the sentence: "To this end some of the staff were German defectors, including Otto John, Richard Wurmann". Maybe "In order to achieve this goal" or something similar.
- Sentence in the article: "To make the station attractive to listeners it broadcast the latest in popular dance music" Same question about the word broadcast
- Sentence "it might involve an attempt for vessels to break out to the far east" should Far East be capitalized? and linked to Far East. I cannot access the source so not sure if it is the same thing.
- Hi Bruxton, thanks for the review. I have made the edits you've suggested. I held off on the "broadcast" ones as Arjayay picked up on one already ("broadcasted" -> "broadcast"). I don't do much in the radio sphere so will defer to them (and perhaps Sammi Brie as the resident DYK radio expert might assist?). Thanks - Dumelow (talk) 21:09, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
- "Broadcast" as a past-tense verb is perfectly fine and preferred to "broadcasted". Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 21:27, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Dumelow: Thank you for the quick action. And @Sammi Brie: thank you for looking, I was unsure. Bruxton (talk) 21:43, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
- "Broadcast" as a past-tense verb is perfectly fine and preferred to "broadcasted". Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 21:27, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
- Hi Bruxton, thanks for the review. I have made the edits you've suggested. I held off on the "broadcast" ones as Arjayay picked up on one already ("broadcasted" -> "broadcast"). I don't do much in the radio sphere so will defer to them (and perhaps Sammi Brie as the resident DYK radio expert might assist?). Thanks - Dumelow (talk) 21:09, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
Pat Ragusa, Alan Pringle
- ... that Pat Ragusa and Alan Pringle are the sole Venezuelans ever to play in the NFL?
- Source: PFR
- ALT1: ... that the only two Venezuelans to ever make the NFL, Pat Ragusa and Alan Pringle, played a combined four games? Source: same
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Samuel Conrad Schwach / Template:Did you know nominations/Isaac Vincent
BeanieFan11 (talk) 21:10, 26 September 2024 (UTC).
- Two QPQs done. Pat Ragusa starting expansion seven days before nomination. No OR or copyvio issues found in use of Gelberg source (although perhaps it doesn't need so many repeat citations). Article is otherwise presentable. Alan Pringle similarly expanded within the week timeframe. Can't access the newspaper sources here, but checked the stats ones and they same in order.Hook source is Pro Football Reference, who at a quick look around reliable for simple data. The data at any rate aligns with the prose in the articles. This seems good to go. CMD (talk) 06:54, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
45 East 66th Street
- ... that tenants of a New York City apartment building protested its owner by going to a racetrack and betting on his horse? Source: Goldstein, Marilyn (June 9, 1974). "Pickets at Belmont—Some Side Action". Newsday. p. 3; Baker, Sybil (June 9, 1974). "Picketed Landlord Gets His Lumps at Race-Track". Daily News. p. 120
- ALT1: ... that tenants of a New York City apartment building bet on the building's owner's horse in an attempt to raise money for an elevator operator? Source: Baker, Sybil (June 9, 1974). "Picketed Landlord Gets His Lumps at Race-Track". Daily News. p. 120
- ALT2: ... that the owner of 45 East 66th Street was once required to hire an elevator operator even though he had just installed an automatic elevator? Source: Kaiser, Charles (January 26, 1975). "East Siders Fight Landlord on Cuts". The New York Times.
- ALT3: ... that a former New York City mayor opposed a penthouse apartment above his apartment building because he lived on the building's top floor? Source: Kodé, Anna (August 29, 2023). "Giuliani's Upper East Side Apartment Is for Sale". The New York Times.
- ALT4: ... that 45 East 66th Street was once called a "high-water mark in early apartment styling"? Source: Gray, Christopher (October 16, 1988). "Streetscapes: 45 East 66th Street; For a Jewel on the East Side, A Loving Facade Restoration". The New York Times.
- Reviewed: Shengli Oil Field
Epicgenius (talk) 21:10, 19 September 2024 (UTC).
- Article is new and long enough, neutral, sourced, copyvio-free, and presentable. The hooks are cited to a reliable source and are interesting, I'd prefer ALT0. Images are properly licensed. QPQ done. Looks ready to me. Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 12:26, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 20
[edit]Samuel Conrad Schwach
- ... that Samuel Conrad Schwach founded the first newspaper in Norway in 1763?
- ALT1: ... that Prussian-born Samuel Conrad Schwach founded the first newspaper in Norway? Source: https://snl.no/Samuel_Conrad_Schwach
- ALT2: ... that Prussian-born Samuel Conrad Schwach founded the first newspaper in Norway in 1763? Source: https://snl.no/Samuel_Conrad_Schwach
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- Comment: Norske Intelligenz-Seddeler has been previously featured on DYK in 2009.
Sebbog13 (talk) 21:44, 20 September 2024 (UTC).
- Will review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:08, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: New and just long enough. No QPQ required. Looks good to go. BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:42, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 21
[edit]The True Record
- ... that The True Record (pictured) closed shortly after implicating Provisional President Yuan Shikai in the assassination of Song Jiaoren?
- Source: Floriani, Giulia Pra (2023). "Photographic Portraits of Leaders of the 1911 Revolution: The Promise of Historical Rupture in the Chinese Republican Press". In Satterthwaite, Tim; Thacker, Andrew (eds.). Magazines and Modern Identities: Global Cultures of the Illustrated Press, 1880–1945. Bloomsbury. ISBN 978-1-350-27865-3. "By implicitly accusing Yuan Shikai of Song Jiaoren's death, the Gao brothers condemned The True Record to a premature end."
- ALT1: ... that the ideas of aesthetic education conveyed by the The True Record (pictured) may have informed the May Fourth Movement? Source: Pan Yaochang (潘耀昌) Xu Li (徐立) (2011). "上海早期都市文艺先锋 ———《真相画报》" [Shanghai's Early Urban Art Pioneer - "The True Record"] (PDF). Journal of Shanghai University (in Chinese): 131–140. (Quote: 画报所设想的通过探索都市新美术,倡导中西融合以提升中华民族文化内涵的举措,从某种角度而言,为五四运动时期倡导“美育”思想做了铺垫。The pictorial's idea of exploring new urban art and advocating the integration of Chinese and Western cultures to enhance the cultural connotation of the Chinese nation, in a sense, paved the way for the advocacy of "aesthetic education" during the May Fourth Movement.)
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Punam Krishan
— Chris Woodrich (talk) 15:30, 21 September 2024 (UTC).
- Verified that the article is long enough, that there are no plagiarism concerns through the Copyvios tool and spotchecking, and that the hook is sourced in the article. Cunard (talk) 09:41, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
- Both hooks are verified and interesting. The image is in the public domain. Impressive research on this very interesting article on an important topic! Cunard (talk) 09:41, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 22
[edit]Francis W. Kelly
- ... that Marine chaplain Francis W. Kelly (pictured) was known as "Father Foxhole" for his insistence on being on the front lines of the Pacific Theater?
- Source: Fitzpatrick, Frank (Apr 15, 2018). "Saga of Philly's 'Father Foxhole'". The Philadelphia Inquirer. Retrieved 21 September 2024.
- ALT1: ... that Chaplain Francis W. Kelly (pictured), who participated in the World War II battles of Guadalcanal, Tarawa, Okinawa and Iwo Jima, was known as "Father Foxhole" for his insistence on being on the front lines? Source: Fitzpatrick, Frank (Apr 15, 2018). "Saga of Philly's 'Father Foxhole'". The Philadelphia Inquirer. Retrieved 21 September 2024.
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~Darth StabroTalk/Contribs 05:02, 23 September 2024 (UTC).
- Hi Darth Stabro, review follows: article moved to mainspace on 23 September and exceeds minimum length; article is well written and cited inline throughout; I don't have access to all of the sources but they look to be reliable and I didn't find any issues with overly close paraphrasing on a spotcheck of ones I could access; for the image do you have any evidence it was taken by a serving US military person, other than the setting of it? Its immediate source is a US newspaper. Hook is interesting but the nickname is only mentioned in the lead and that it was awarded for "his insistence on being on the front lines" isn't mentioned.
- @Dumelow: I'll get confirmation from the PA Veterans Museum that it is a USMC image but all evidence suggests it being an official portrait. I've placed and sourced more into on the nickname.~Darth StabroTalk/Contribs 15:23, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks, give me a ping when you hear back and I'll pop back to complete the review. As you say the photo is almost certainly taken for official purposes but good to have confirmation - Dumelow (talk) 15:26, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
- Howdy @Dumelow:, I've just got off the phone with the PA Veterans Museum where the Inquirer got the photo from and they confirmed that the photo is an official military photo and in the public domain. ~Darth StabroTalk/Contribs 18:23, 28 September 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks Darth Stabro, image looks good. My only hang up is on the "because of his insistence on being on the front lines" bit of the hook. I don't think this is explicitly stated in the article. We have "Kelly's time as a chaplain was marked by an insistence on being on the front lines" and "The Marines of his division became so accustomed to seeing him that they nicknamed him "Father Foxhole" or "Foxhole Kelly"" but the two aren't linked directly. I'm happy to approve both hooks without the "insistence" part or perhaps you can suggest something? - Dumelow (talk) 09:25, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
- Yeah, that makes sense Dumelow. How about was known as "Father Foxhole" for his consistent presence on the front lines? (I have no preference on which hook, whichever you think is best) ~Darth StabroTalk/Contribs 17:33, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks Darth Stabro, image looks good. My only hang up is on the "because of his insistence on being on the front lines" bit of the hook. I don't think this is explicitly stated in the article. We have "Kelly's time as a chaplain was marked by an insistence on being on the front lines" and "The Marines of his division became so accustomed to seeing him that they nicknamed him "Father Foxhole" or "Foxhole Kelly"" but the two aren't linked directly. I'm happy to approve both hooks without the "insistence" part or perhaps you can suggest something? - Dumelow (talk) 09:25, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
- Howdy @Dumelow:, I've just got off the phone with the PA Veterans Museum where the Inquirer got the photo from and they confirmed that the photo is an official military photo and in the public domain. ~Darth StabroTalk/Contribs 18:23, 28 September 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks, give me a ping when you hear back and I'll pop back to complete the review. As you say the photo is almost certainly taken for official purposes but good to have confirmation - Dumelow (talk) 15:26, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that Marine chaplain Francis W. Kelly (pictured) was known as "Father Foxhole" for his presence on the front lines of the Pacific Theater?
- ALT3: ... that Chaplain Francis W. Kelly (pictured), who participated in the World War II battles of Guadalcanal, Tarawa, Okinawa and Iwo Jima, was known as "Father Foxhole"?
- Approving ALT2 and ALT3 above. I don't yet have newspapers.com access but happy to AGF that the source supports the statement in the article " The Marines of his division became so accustomed to seeing him that they nicknamed him 'Father Foxhole'"; seems to be corroborated elsewhere anyway - Dumelow (talk) 20:01, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
Malaysia Monument
- ... that the Chinese community of Kota Kinabalu sponsored the creation of the Malaysia Monument (pictured) just 20 days before it needed to be completed to mark the formation of Malaysia? Source: Daily Express
CMD (talk) 06:36, 22 September 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: A picture of the monument would help and it's not clear why one of the article's pictures has not been nominated. Andrew🐉(talk) 09:12, 22 September 2024 (UTC)
- A good question, to which the answer is that I did not think about that at all. I quite like the infobox image, which captured the monument with the state and national flags around it. If others disagree, I can try to find another. CMD (talk) 10:18, 22 September 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 24
[edit]Battle of Axspoele
- ... that the 1128 Battle of Axspoele (participant pictured) was a rare case of a mass cavalry charge in western Europe in the High Middle Ages?
- Source: "in the west battle was uncommon and mass cavalry charges were rate ... only at Axspoele on 21 June 1128 was there anything resembling a mass cavalry charge and here numbers were small" from: France, John (15 May 2017). Medieval Warfare 1000–1300. Routledge. p. 60. ISBN 978-1-351-91847-3.
- ALT1: ... that before his victory at the 1128 Battle of Axspoele William Clito (pictured) ordered his knights to cut their hair and remove opulent clothing as a sign of penance? Source: "before battle he had all his knights cur off their long hair, cast off their rich garments and do penance for their sins as if they were expecting death" from: Crouch, David (15 October 2006). The Normans: The History of a Dynasty. A&C Black. p. 332. ISBN 978-1-85285-595-6.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Francis W. Kelly
- Comment: After creating this I realised the subject was already covered in a very short orphan article at Battle of Thielt (1128) which I have since redirected to this article. The new content is more than 5x the content here in any case.
Dumelow (talk) 18:17, 24 September 2024 (UTC).
- Article is new enough and long enough; more than 5x longer than short START article (under a different title) that it replaced; appears to have adequate references though they cannot be read on-line so sources are taken in good faith; both hook facts have in-line citations; hooks are both appropriate length; I think the first hook is better than ALT1, but either could be used; image is in Public Domain.Orygun (talk) 05:54, 28 September 2024 (UTC)
How You Get the Girl
- ... that the choreography of this Taylor Swift song, performed during the 1989 World Tour, was inspired by the 1952 musical Singin' in the Rain?
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- personally, i feel that the original hook is suitable (because of the image) also bc i have less than 5 dyk noms, qpq doesn't really apply to me (yet) brachy08 (chat here lol) 10:41, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
- If that's the case, then you should probably remove the second hook. Wolverine XI (talk to me) 10:46, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
removed brachy08 (chat here lol) 11:14, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 25
[edit]Michael Chisholm (geographer)
- ... that geographer Michael Chisholm and contemporaries became known as "Caesar's Praetorian Guard" as an irreverent reference to their teacher, Gus Caesar?
- "Caesar had a hand in the careers of literally scores of young men (and through his supervision of Newnham and Girton geographers, young women) who were to go on to lead the subject in many British and Commonwealth universities. Dubbed irreverently "Caesar's Praetorian Guard", they came together in 1970 to write a festschrift volume"
- ALT1: ... that Cambridge don Gus Caesar was so influential, that a group of his former students became known as "Caesar's Praetorian Guard"?
- "Caesar had a hand in the careers of literally scores of young men (and through his supervision of Newnham and Girton geographers, young women) who were to go on to lead the subject in many British and Commonwealth universities. Dubbed irreverently "Caesar's Praetorian Guard", they came together in 1970 to write a festschrift volume"
Chaiten1 (talk) 07:04, 26 September 2024 (UTC).
- I was initially very confused by this nomination: the link in the first hook went to the wrong Michael Chisholm! Article is new enough and long enough, and well sourced. I'm not sure that ALT1 is really eligible, as the article is specifically about Chisholm rather than the "praetorian guard", but ALT0 is interesting and checks out. I have made some copyedits to it, most notably changing the word "tutor" (an Oxford-ism, which has a different meaning at Cambridge) to "teacher" (the Cambridge-ism would be "supervisor", but that might be a little opaque). There are a couple of easy MoS fixes (dashes, capitalisation in references, removing page numbers from books listed as his works, three dots for ellipsis) which would be advisable before it hits the main page. QPQ
needs to beis done. No evidence of copyvio, BLP or other serious concerns, and no images to check. UndercoverClassicist T·C 14:42, 28 September 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you UndercoverClassicist for catching the infelicities in the hook, and for comments; I have now fixed the MoS points you raise as well.Chaiten1 (talk) 16:06, 28 September 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you @UndercoverClassicist: - I just wonder if you could sign this off, if it's acceptable to you? Many thanksChaiten1 (talk) 14:30, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
- Approved: I've done a few additional copyedits for MoS issues that were still outstanding. UndercoverClassicist T·C 14:51, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you @UndercoverClassicist: - I just wonder if you could sign this off, if it's acceptable to you? Many thanksChaiten1 (talk) 14:30, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
Dick Moss
- ... that labor lawyer Dick Moss argued the 1975 case which resulted in the Seitz decision which established free agency in Major League Baseball?
- Source: "Hired by union executive director Marvin Miller as general counsel in 1967, Moss argued the 1975 case involving pitchers Andy Messersmith and Dave McNally that led to arbitrator Peter Seitz striking down the reserve clause. That provision for a unilateral one-year renewal had been included in every contract since 1878 and had enabled teams to control players by maintaining those agreements could be extended perpetually. Seitz decided on Dec. 23, 1975, the clause meant only a single one-year renewal. The decision impacted all sports across North America and led to collectively bargained free agency in baseball."
Thriley (talk) 19:52, 2 October 2024 (UTC).
- Will review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:46, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Article looks good. QPQ done. Appears good to go (hook probably could be condensed a bit though if wanted, e.g. ... that labor lawyer Dick Moss argued the 1975 case which resulted in the establishment of free agency in Major League Baseball? – not required though) BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:01, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you. I think the shorter hook works better. Thriley (talk) 21:45, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
Adele de Dombasle
... that French divorcee Adèle de Dombasle travelled to Polynesia in 1847 working as an illustrator, drawing people such as Queen Pōmare IV (pictured)?Source: "Adèle de Dombasle managed to produce several tens of drawings during her travels in Polynesia (and Chile). These represent monuments and sites from the Marquesas, Tahitian and Marquesan inhabitants with elements of material culture, landscapes and portraits—including from historical figures such as Queen Pomaré." & "In 1848, a young French divorcée11 who had sailed across two oceans, from Bordeaux to the Marquesas Islands" in https://archaeologybulletin.org/articles/10.5334/bha-656- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Spearfishing at the Micronesian Games
- Comment: I expanded it from a very tiny stub!
Lajmmoore (talk) 18:19, 26 September 2024 (UTC).
- An interesting article, I will review shortly. TSventon (talk) 19:05, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Lajmmoore:, The article is well written (and no longer an orphan). It is clearly 5x expanded, new enough and long enough. No POV problems and no obvious copyvio via Earwig. Images are from 1847 so no copyright problems.
- QPQ has been completed.
- The hook is intriguing, but could you double check that the hook facts are in the article with references following immediately. I couldn't find "divorcee", "travelled to Polynesia in 1847" is OK, "working as an illustrator" and "drawing people such as Queen Pōmare IV" are not immediately followed by references.
- The hook image is interesting and free to use.TSventon (talk) 22:22, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
- Another hook issue, note 11 in the source says she was "More precisely, separated from her husband, as recorded in French archives under the 19th century legal term separée de corps (de la Grandville 2001: 22)." fr:Séparation de corps en France looks like separation rather than divorce. TSventon (talk) 13:41, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks very much TSventon I think I have picked up these issues and those on the talk page. I'll propose a tweaked ALT so as to not include the marriage details:
- ALT1 ... that Adèle de Dombasle helped pioneer women's exploration in Oceania and worked as an illustrator, drawing people such as Queen Pōmare IV (pictured)? Source: "Adèle de Dombasle managed to produce several tens of drawings during her travels in Polynesia (and Chile). These represent monuments and sites from the Marquesas, Tahitian and Marquesan inhabitants with elements of material culture, landscapes and portraits—including from historical figures such as Queen Pomaré." & the pioneer statement derives from the section in https://archaeologybulletin.org/articles/10.5334/bha-656 "Finding the Pacific Matildas" (first paragraph) Lajmmoore (talk) 19:58, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Lajmmoore:, thank you, I can approve Alt1 and have struck Alt0. TSventon (talk) 22:47, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
- Note to promoters: the image should not be used per WP:DYKIMG ("avoid images that divert readers from the bolded article into a side article"). ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 18:28, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 26
[edit]Ye Yanlan
- ... that Ye Yanlan compiled 171 portraits of Qing dynasty scholars, but these were not published until decades after his death?
- Source: Yan Jiasen (严家森) Ma Xiao (马潇) (5 August 2003). "[祖孙篇 叶衍兰 叶恭绰] 进则为达官,退亦是名士" [[Grandparents and Grandchildren: Ye Yanlan and Ye Gongchuo] If You Advance, You Will Be a High Official; If You Retreat, You Will Be a Famous Scholar]. Southern Metropolis Daily (in Chinese). Archived from the original on 12 August 2022. Retrieved 23 September 2024 – via Guangdong Library. [同时,由于他擅长丹青,留意搜集历代名贤的画像,其中清代学者的尤为丰富,积三十年之功,得到169人171幅图像,给后世留下了宝贵的《清代学者象传》。 At the same time, because he was good at painting, he paid attention to collecting portraits of famous people from past dynasties, especially scholars from the Qing Dynasty. After 30 years of hard work, he collected 171 images of 169 people, leaving behind the precious "Portraits of Scholars in the Qing Dynasty" for future generations.]
- ALT1: ... that, according to his family, Ye Yanlan was compelled to leave government service after speaking Cantonese in front of the Emperor of China? Source: Yeh, Max (2006a). "The Yeh Family Collection". The Elegant Gathering: The Yeh Family Collection. Asian Art Museum. pp. 1–14. ISBN 978-0-939117-33-8. "Family stories say that he was exiled out of the court back to Panyu because he spoke Cantonese in the presence of the emperor, one of those southern, nationalistic claims to resisting the “foreign,” Manchurian dynasty."
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Atsuko Tanaka (voice actress)
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Overall: Hi Chris! This is another well-written and well-sourced article about a Chinese historical figure. Earwig shows that it is copyvio free, and the sources for the hook check out. Personally, I find ALT1 to be more interesting, (not because I am a native Cantonese speaker,) but as many painters have their works published posthumously, it is not really that special or interesting. So I would prefer ALT1. —Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 13:44, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
Neutron stars in fiction
- ... that in fiction, neutron stars (pictured) harbour exotic lifeforms in their vicinity, on their surface, and even in their interior?
TompaDompa (talk) 21:54, 26 September 2024 (UTC).
- Approve hook and image Huh, I was just reading about usages of neutron stars in fiction the other day, so this is a funny coincidence (wait, I think I was literally reading the hook source article, whoa). Article was approved for GA on the 26th, so is new enough. At around 7000 characters, it is long enough. The article properly uses in-line citations and the copyvio detector finds no issues outside of the direct quotes used. The hook reads neutrally, is cited in-line (said reference is used in-line for much of the article besides, so easily meets that), and is interesting. The QPQ has been done and the image suggested is in the public domain and views fine on a smaller scale. Looks good to go! SilverserenC 02:39, 28 September 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 27
[edit]Walter Campbell Smith
- ... that in retirement and after a long career of military and civil service Walter Campbell Smith changed his legal name to Walter Campbell-Smith?
- Source: https://www.thegazette.co.uk/London/issue/41787/page/5027 - London Gazette, 1959 'Notice is hereby given that by a Deed Poll dated 21st July 1959, and enrolled in the Supreme Court of Judicature on 5th August 1959, I, WALTER CAMPBELL-SMITH ... Retired Civil Servant .. abandoned the surname of Smith. —Dated the 6th day of August 1959. W. Campbell-Smith, formerly Walter Campbell Smith.
- ALT1: ... that Walter Campbell Smith's ability in Latin helped win him his first job as a mineralogist in the British Museum, where he then worked for his whole career? Source: Cherry Lewis, The Dating Game, 2012, p 51 - google books extract https://www.google.co.uk/books/edition/The_Dating_Game/d2AZZ3NXuogC? - [Appointment as assistant to the department of mineralogy in 1910] "While Holmes came first in mineralogy .. he came second overall, Latin apparently letting him down. Walter Campbell Smith was awarded the post and stayed there all his working life"
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Wilf Perreault
- Comment: Expanded the article from a 2 line stub, prompted by User: P.d.gunstone who added the category of Artists Rifles
Chaiten1 (talk) 10:06, 29 September 2024 (UTC).
- This is not a full review right now(I'll try and get that done in a little bit), but I personally believe the hooks aren't really interesting enough for DYK, ALT0, and definitely more so. I didn't spot any eye-catching facts in my very brief pre-skim, but if @Chaiten1: has any other hooks from the article, feel free to add. If anyone disagrees that these are interesting, please ping me so we can discuss. --PixDeVl
yelltalk to me! 23:38, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you @PixDeVl: I have one more offline source to check out, but I will come up with a couple more hooks to try out. The guy served in two World Wars, was in the chemical weapons unit at the Somme, and published his last article at the age of 94, so I am sure there's something to be found. Here are two more:
- ALT2 ..that Walter Campbell Smith's training in mineralogy led him to volunteer with the chemical warfare unit of British army during World War 1?
- Source: Foulkes, Charles (1934). Gas! The story of the Special Brigade. William Blackwood and Sons, Edinburgh. p. 62. "The twelve volunteers joined at Helfaut ... and were of the greatest assistance in our first three gas attacks. ... Campbell Smith stayed on in the special brigade" [offline source]
- ALT3 ..that geologist Walter Campbell Smith was still writing papers at the age of 94?
- Source: Journal of Gemmology, 1989 https://gem-a.com/wp-content/uploads/2023/11/JoG1989_21_8.pdf "culminated in a long paper based largely on his personal knowledge of 'Seventy Years of Research in mineralogy and crystallography in the Department of Mineralogy 1857-1927' which was published in 1982 when he was 94. Chaiten1 (talk) 16:59, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
- Awesome, thanks @Chaiten1:, I'll do the review soon. If you get any others from your offline source feel free to add and ping me. I'm leaning toward using ALT3 personally, but if you have something more interesting we can definitely go for it. --PixDeVl
yelltalk to me! 17:21, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
- Awesome, thanks @Chaiten1:, I'll do the review soon. If you get any others from your offline source feel free to add and ping me. I'm leaning toward using ALT3 personally, but if you have something more interesting we can definitely go for it. --PixDeVl
- Source: Journal of Gemmology, 1989 https://gem-a.com/wp-content/uploads/2023/11/JoG1989_21_8.pdf "culminated in a long paper based largely on his personal knowledge of 'Seventy Years of Research in mineralogy and crystallography in the Department of Mineralogy 1857-1927' which was published in 1982 when he was 94. Chaiten1 (talk) 16:59, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Looks good to me @Chaiten1: I'm going to WP:BOLDLY go ahead and give this full approval since I'm fairly confident in this being a compliment with the criteria(if someone disagrees please correct me). I will suggest before promoting that perhaps expanding ALT1 to mention who he beat(the guy who pioneered radiometric dating) would probably be interesting enough since beating someone who made such a significant contribution by being better at a now dead language is a fun tidbit. I'd leave it to you to pick which should be promoted(or the promoter, I admit I'm not familiar with the process of closing DYK noms, feel free to point me to the right page or explain it :p). PixDeVl yell talk to me! 17:53, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
Sun Jianai
... that Sun Jianai co-founded China's first national university in 1898?
- Source: Lin, Xiaoqing Diana (2005). Peking University: Chinese Scholarship and Intellectuals, 1898–1937. pp 15-27
Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 05:25, 28 September 2024 (UTC).
- Interesting article, thanks. I will review this shortly. Onceinawhile (talk) 09:52, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Generalissima: are you sure it's correct to say that Sun "founded" the university? The article doesn't quite state it in that way. It seems that technically the university was established by the first edict of the Guangxu Emperor as part of the Hundred Days' Reform? If it is correct, was he the sole founder or a co-founder? Onceinawhile (talk) 11:34, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Onceinawhile: Good point; changed it to "co-founded". Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 16:07, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
- Hi @Generalissima: sorry to be difficult but are you sure that is right? It doesn't say founder or co-founder anywhere in the article. This source says:
"On July 3, 1898, Emperor Guangxu approved a report to implement the Imperial University of Peking and to draft its charter. Sun Jianai, a senior Chinese official, was appointed “guanli daxuetang shiwu dachen,” or the (education) minister for the imperial university's affairs."
The "guanli daxuetang shiwu dachen" is zh:Category:管理大学堂事务大臣. If we are to use co-founder we will need a source stating that. Onceinawhile (talk) 19:10, 30 September 2024 (UTC)- @Onceinawhile: I felt that "was tasked to organize" works for "co-founded", but I'm okay deferring to an slightly alternate hook. How about
Alt1:… that Sun Jianai organized China's first national university in 1898?
(again citing the Lin 2005 source) Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 20:31, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Onceinawhile: I felt that "was tasked to organize" works for "co-founded", but I'm okay deferring to an slightly alternate hook. How about
- Hi @Generalissima: sorry to be difficult but are you sure that is right? It doesn't say founder or co-founder anywhere in the article. This source says:
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Overall: ALT1 good to go! Onceinawhile (talk) 21:08, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
Peck Building
- ... that the largest video game studio in the world is headquartered in a former textile factory?
"Lorsque Christophe Derennes, aujourd’hui directeur général d’Ubisoft Montréal, s’est installé avec sa famille dans la métropole québécoise en 1997, il était loin de se douter que, 25 ans plus tard, le studio du quartier Mile-End deviendrait le plus important au monde, fort de ses 4000 personnes employées. [...] Ubisoft Montréal occupe les bureaux de l'édifice Peck depuis ses débuts dans le métropole québécoise."
Google-translated from French : "When Christophe Derennes, now general manager of Ubisoft Montreal, moved with his family to the Quebec metropolis in 1997, he was far from suspecting that, 25 years later, the studio in the Mile End district would become the largest in the world, with 4,000 employees. [...] Ubisoft Montreal has occupied the offices of the Peck Building since its beginnings in the Quebec metropolis."- Reviewed:
WikiFouf (talk) 19:03, 29 September 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: @WikiFouf: Nice work on the article. However, I had a concern about the hook. Epicgenius (talk) 14:25, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Epicgenius the source I included is not the 2009 NYT one, it's from 2022. As for where the employees work, good point, I'm pretty sure Ubisoft Montreal also owns some neighbouring smaller buildings. It could say "headquartered" instead of "housed" - WikiFouf (talk) 15:30, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
- Or "mainly housed" - WikiFouf (talk) 15:33, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
- @WikiFouf, yeah, "headquartered" sounds good if you want to make that change. I was looking at the wrong source; my bad. Once you propose a revised hook, I can formally review it. Epicgenius (talk) 15:43, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Epicgenius Perf! Noob question, sorry, can I just edit the hook on the DYK page or do I have to resubmit another one? - WikiFouf (talk) 15:53, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
- @WikiFouf, editing the hook here is fine. You don't need to create another nomination/hook. Epicgenius (talk) 16:34, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Epicgenius done thanks! @Epicgenius WikiFouf (talk) 17:35, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
- Looks good to me. (Also, @WikiFouf, I noticed you linked to my talk page. I do not get pings from these; I only receive notifications if you link my user page. This is just a heads-up in case you didn't know.) Epicgenius (talk) 20:31, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Epicgenius Oh right thanks, hadn't noticed:) - WikiFouf (talk) 16:50, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
- Looks good to me. (Also, @WikiFouf, I noticed you linked to my talk page. I do not get pings from these; I only receive notifications if you link my user page. This is just a heads-up in case you didn't know.) Epicgenius (talk) 20:31, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Epicgenius done thanks! @Epicgenius WikiFouf (talk) 17:35, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
- @WikiFouf, editing the hook here is fine. You don't need to create another nomination/hook. Epicgenius (talk) 16:34, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Epicgenius Perf! Noob question, sorry, can I just edit the hook on the DYK page or do I have to resubmit another one? - WikiFouf (talk) 15:53, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
- @WikiFouf, yeah, "headquartered" sounds good if you want to make that change. I was looking at the wrong source; my bad. Once you propose a revised hook, I can formally review it. Epicgenius (talk) 15:43, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
- Or "mainly housed" - WikiFouf (talk) 15:33, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 28
[edit]Ferrari FF
- ... that the Ferrari FF (pictured) was, upon its release, the world's fastest four-seating car?
- Reviewed:
750h+ 16:26, 28 September 2024 (UTC).
- Hi, I will be reviewing this momentarily. Before I pull out the checklist, everything looks good on the surface, and the GA passed, which is good. SirMemeGod 15:52, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry for not getting back sooner. The table:
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Overall: No issues, easy pass. SirMemeGod 17:03, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
References
- ^ Baker, Erin; Knapman, Chris (22 January 2011). "4WD Ferrari FF revealed". The Daily Telegraph. p. 9.
- ^ Neil, Dan (2 April 2011). "The coolest Ferrari ever—drive carefully". The Wall Street Journal. p. D.10. Retrieved 11 September 2024.
The New York Times Simulator
- ... that in The New York Times Simulator, players must keep the rich, the police, and Israel happy?
- ALT1: ... that The New York Times Simulator was inspired by its creator's frustration with media coverage of the Israel–Hamas war? Source: 1
- Reviewed:
- Comment: Under 5 noms, no QPQ required. It doesn't seem to me that WP:DYKFICTION applies to gameplay, but in case it does I included ALT1 as a backup.
🌸wasianpower🌸 (talk • contribs) 23:14, 28 September 2024 (UTC).
- The article is new enough, long enough, well-sourced, neutral and presentable. As the nominator has 5 or less DYK nominations, a QPQ is not required at this time. However, i note that alt0 is likely not interesting (WP:DYKINT) because in games like the Papa Louie series, its the player's responsibility to serve food to the best standards and also at a quick pace to keep the customer's happy. Good thing you provided an alternative hook. JuniperChill (talk) 00:37, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
Frederick Prigg
- ... that Frederick Prigg and his predecessor in the Oregon provisional government's secretary position were both doctors who died by drowning in a river at Oregon City just three years apart?
- Source: On p. 11 of the "Oregon Secretaries of State, Biographical Sketches, 1841-Present", it says John Edward Long was a physician, then goes on to say "Long served as secretary of the provisional government from May 25, 1844 to June 21, 1846. … He served in that position until he was drowned while fording the Clackamas River." In the next paragraph, the source says Frederick Prigg was a physician, then says "Prigg was appointed secretary of the provisional government to succeed Long … He fell to his death from a bluff into the Willamette River at Oregon City in October 1849." The same events are covered in Footnote 74 on p.36 of Bancroft’s History of Oregon, Volume II, but that source say Dr Long drown in the Willamette River at Oregon City (vice Clackamas River, which also flows through Oregon City). As a result, I decided not to name the river in the hook … instead of just said "river", which applies regardless of which river he drowned in.
Orygun (talk) 06:04, 28 September 2024 (UTC).
- Will review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 16:57, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Interesting fact. Article looks good. QPQ done. Appears good to go. BeanieFan11 (talk) 17:40, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
Wilf Perreault
- ... that Wilf Perreault's art work was influenced by artists such as Reta Cowley and Dorothy Knowles?
- Source: Fudge, Paul (1981-10-23). "Wilf Perreault's brush makes back alleys and lanes exciting". The Leader-Post. Regina, Saskatchewan, Canada. p. 18. Retrieved 2024-09-28.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Statue of John Stockton
- Comment: Article came from draft today after 960 days. Images have all gone though VRT. COI has been properly addressed on authors user page and though the AfC process. Might be of interest for anyone interested in Canada and the Arts.
Dr vulpes (Talk) 15:48, 28 September 2024 (UTC).
- Article is new enough (just out of draft space), long enough and appropriately referenced. The images have appropriate permissions (CC-BY-SA etc). No copyvio problems. The hook is short enough, but perhaps is missing a word or two - are they landscape painters? Is there anything surprising about this? Should the hook link to these two as well? It probably just needs a tweak Chaiten1 (talk) 17:54, 28 September 2024 (UTC)
- How does this sound? Dr vulpes (Talk) 22:36, 28 September 2024 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that Wilf Perreault's artwork of landscapes and alleyways was influenced by artists such as Reta Cowley and Dorothy Knowles?
- This looks good to me - QPQ done, and no other issues. Thank you! Chaiten1 (talk) 07:22, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
Blanche Badcock
- ... that a poultry farmer was the first woman to shoot for the Sovereign's Prize, the highest honour in British rifle shooting?
- Source: Kay, Joyce (2004-09-23). Foster, Marjorie Elaine (1893–1974), Rifle Shot and Poultry Farmer. Vol. 1. Oxford University Press. doi:10.1093/ref:odnb/65174.
- ALT1: ... that when Blanche Badcock took up rifle shooting at Bisley, only one club would accept her? Source: Kay, Joyce (2004-09-23). Foster, Marjorie Elaine (1893–1974), Rifle Shot and Poultry Farmer. Vol. 1. Oxford University Press. doi:10.1093/ref:odnb/65174.
- ALT2: ... that Blanche Badcock shared a top score in a shooting match with her partner, Marjorie Foster, beating all six men on the team? Source: Reader, Jean (2021). "Reginald Cory, Blanche Badcock and a Poultry Farm in Surrey" (PDF). Welsh Historical Gardens Trust Bulletin. 80: 25–27.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Michael Chisholm (geographer)
UndercoverClassicist T·C 14:46, 28 September 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Consider changing King's Prize to Sovereign's, since that's what's cited in the the OUP, though I understand this may be an anachronism. Will leave up to the promoter; otherwise good to go. ThaesOfereode (talk) 22:34, 28 September 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks -- "Sovereign's Prize" and "King's Prize" are the same thing, though there's another argument for "Sovereign's" (that no woman had ever shot for the prize while Victoria was on the throne). I've made that change. UndercoverClassicist T·C 10:19, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 29
[edit]Wing Sam Chinn
- ... that Wing Sam Chinn combined Chinese and Beaux-Arts architecture in his design for a Seattle building (pictured)?
- Source: David A. Rash, Chong Wa Benevolent Association Building. https://sah-archipedia.org/buildings/WA-01-033-0064
Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 02:39, 30 September 2024 (UTC).
- New enough GA (what a really cool subject!). Hook is fascinating and within the parameters. Image looks good to go for running on the main page—maybe I'll write an article for the building? QPQ done. No concerns regarding refs, copyvio, etc. Great work! ~ Pbritti (talk) 03:46, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
Neurocysticercosis
- ... that neurocysticercosis has been referred to as the "great imitator" because it can mimic many other neurological disorders? Source: Garcia et al. 2014: " In endemic areas, neurocysticercosis is regarded as the great imitator because it can mimic almost any neurological disorder."
- ALT1: ... that Küchenmeister showed that the consumption of cysticercus from pork caused human intestinal taeniasis by feeding a prisoner food that had cysticerci gathered from a recently killed pig? Source: Del Brutto et al. 2015: "Küchenmeister demonstrated that ingestion of cysticercus from pork resulted in human intestinal taeniasis, by feeding a convicted man, condemned to death, with sausages and a noodle soup both containing cysticerci obtained from a recently slaughtered pig."
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IntentionallyDense (talk) 22:54, 29 September 2024 (UTC).
- Quote supplied, matches hook, new enough (5x expanded), long enough, well written and looks good. Interesting. The lead image of this article will haunt me forever. Seems good to go. Alt1 is fine but less interesting, and also hard to follow + kind of tangential to this article. PARAKANYAA (talk) 18:12, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
- Comment completely unrelated to DYK eligibility, but is "e0008208" a page number? If it's for a figure it should use the loc= parameter. PARAKANYAA (talk) 18:15, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
- @PARAKANYAA: Thanks for the review! I agree that Alt1 is kind of odd and tangential so the first hook may be better. e0008208 is in fact a page number and not a figure. Some medical journals have really weird page numbers. IntentionallyDense (talk) 20:18, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
- TIL. Thanks! PARAKANYAA (talk) 20:22, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
Chocolate Room
- ... that the original exhibition of art installation Chocolate Room was shut down after attracting an "army of ants"?
- Reviewed:
Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 09:27, 29 September 2024 (UTC).
- Interesting read! Date (moved to mainspace yesterday, on 29 Sept), size, references, hook, copyright spot check, nominator has fewer than 5 past noms – all fine, we're good to go. Mariamnei (talk) 10:35, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
1
- ... that 1 is its own square, square root, and factorial?
- Source: *Colman, Samuel (1912). Coan, C. Arthur (ed.). Nature's Harmonic Unity: A Treatise on Its Relation to Proportional Form. New York and London: G.P. Putnam's Sons. pp. 9–10.
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Polyamorph (talk) 12:36, 29 September 2024 (UTC).
- Congratulations on the Good Article status! This article is newly promoted to Good Article, and is sufficiently long and well cited. The Copyvio pulls up a flag to an obscure pdf, which must be an example of the reverse (pdf using text from wikipedia). The hook is excellent, terse and to the point but a tease that draw the readers in; if only to marvel at how you can write an encyclopedia entry on '1'. Hook source checks out. QPQ not required for the nominator. Approved! Chaiten1 (talk) 13:07, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Polyamorph and Chaiten1: What is your opinion of the hook ALT1: ... that many older typewriters do not have a dedicated key for the numeral 1?--Launchballer 14:56, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
- I prefer my proposed hook as its a fundamental property of the number itself. Polyamorph (talk) 15:02, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
- No worries then.--Launchballer 15:06, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
- Polyamorph and Launchballer, sorry for disrupting. But apparently, is it possible we add some wiklinks about those three? To me, readers may not understand about mathematical terms. Dedhert.Jr (talk) 23:35, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
- Factorial maybe, although square and square root are surely common terms.--Launchballer 23:40, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
- I did consider wikilinks, the issue is that the wikilink 1 is small, even when bolded. I wanted to make sure that users focus was on the link to 1 and not some other non-GA article. But I would support a wikilink to factorial (which is a GA), and indeed square (algebra) and square root if these would be helpful. Polyamorph (talk) 05:44, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
- Factorial maybe, although square and square root are surely common terms.--Launchballer 23:40, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
- Polyamorph and Launchballer, sorry for disrupting. But apparently, is it possible we add some wiklinks about those three? To me, readers may not understand about mathematical terms. Dedhert.Jr (talk) 23:35, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
- No worries then.--Launchballer 15:06, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
- I prefer my proposed hook as its a fundamental property of the number itself. Polyamorph (talk) 15:02, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Polyamorph and Chaiten1: What is your opinion of the hook ALT1: ... that many older typewriters do not have a dedicated key for the numeral 1?--Launchballer 14:56, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 30
[edit]Viriamo
- ... that Viriamo's (pictured) traditional Rapa Nui tattoos included motifs similar to an adze and a paddle?
- Source: Adze: "Like Eva (and Uaritaï), she has a tattoo on her cheek in a geometric, adze-like motif and parallel stripes crossing her forehead, below which are dots. She also has “elaborate designs on her body” (Métraux 1940, 240). These match those sketched on shipboard by J. Linton Palmer in 1853 and depicted by Julien Viaud on the “chefesse.” [download] https://www.researchgate.net/publication/362024307_The_Iconic_Tattooed_Man_of_Easter_Island/link/65cbde8e34bbff5ba70efc69/download?_tp=eyJjb250ZXh0Ijp7InBhZ2UiOiJwdWJsaWNhdGlvbiIsInByZXZpb3VzUGFnZSI6bnVsbH19
Paddle: "On the back of old Viriamo, between the shoulder blades, is a motif called ao (“dance paddle”) with conventionalized eyes and nose." https://www.larskrutak.com/sacred-skin-easter-island-ink/
- Source: Adze: "Like Eva (and Uaritaï), she has a tattoo on her cheek in a geometric, adze-like motif and parallel stripes crossing her forehead, below which are dots. She also has “elaborate designs on her body” (Métraux 1940, 240). These match those sketched on shipboard by J. Linton Palmer in 1853 and depicted by Julien Viaud on the “chefesse.” [download] https://www.researchgate.net/publication/362024307_The_Iconic_Tattooed_Man_of_Easter_Island/link/65cbde8e34bbff5ba70efc69/download?_tp=eyJjb250ZXh0Ijp7InBhZ2UiOiJwdWJsaWNhdGlvbiIsInByZXZpb3VzUGFnZSI6bnVsbH19
Lajmmoore (talk) 08:47, 2 October 2024 (UTC).
- Reviewing... new enough, long enough, interestung hook, QPQ provided. Whispyhistory (talk) 14:33, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
- .... Copyvio <3%, interesting hook is in article followed by 2 references containg hook. Image is clear and free. Article is neutral, referenced well and reads well. Thank you. Whispyhistory (talk) 08:22, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
Margaret Pargeter
- ... that Margaret Pargeter was one of the most widely read authors in Britain in 1986?
- Source: New York Times Book Review
- ALT1: ... that Margaret Pargeter was one of the most widely read authors in Britain in 1986, according to the Public Lending Right scheme? Source: New York Times Book Review
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/The Snow Queen (Kernaghan novel)
Cielquiparle (talk) 03:48, 3 October 2024 (UTC).
- Review: Hook fact is cited in the article to an RS, and is sufficiently interesting; hook length is ok; earwig copyvio shows no issues; DYK check shows 5 x expansion so article is valid for DYK: Assuming article is at 5x now, expansion began 60 edits ago on September 29, 2024; 223 characters to 4,485 characters is actually a 20x expansion; article is long enough; article is presentable, stable and fully cited (note it was recently saved from AfD by the nominator); QPQ done. Either hook considered acceptable. Good stuff! ResonantDistortion 08:38, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
Magic (play)
- ... that George Bernard Shaw jokingly threatened to torture Hilaire Belloc if it would get G. K. Chesterton (pictured, left to right) to write his first play?
- ALT1: ... that George Bernard Shaw (pictured, left) praised G. K. Chesterton's (pictured, right) debut play Magic by saying it had "the Shakespearean touch"? Source: The Duke in Magic is much better than Micawber or Mrs. Wilfer, neither of whom can bear the footlights because, like piping bullfinches, they have only one tune, whilst the Duke sets everything in the universe to his ridiculous music. That is the Shakespearean touch. Is it grateful to ask for more? (pp. 106–107)
- ALT2: ... that Magic is sometimes called G. K. Chesterton's (pictured, right) "one and only play" even though he wrote at least two others? Source: For "one and only play" and the play The Judgment of Dr. Johnson he wrote, see: Yet a bittersweet quality does attach to Magic for it was to prove G.K.C's one and only real play. (p. 107) and But "Magic" was Gilbert's one and only play. (p. 135)
For the play he wrote called The Surprise, see There was a later play, The Surprise, that Chesterton wrote in 1932, but it was not published until 1952 and was first staged a year later by Hull University Dramatic Society. (p. 33) - ALT3: ... that George Bernard Shaw (pictured, left) wrote Androcles and the Lion "to insult and taunt and stimulate" G. K. Chesterton (pictured, right) into writing his first play? Source: I want to insult and taunt and stimulate Gilbert with it. It is the sort of thing he could write and ought to write: a religious harlequinade. [Androcles and the Lion] (p. 103)
- ALT4: ... that G. K. Chesterton (pictured, right) and his wife were nearly mobbed in the theater lobby by an adoring audience after the debut performance of his first play? Source: Gilbert and Frances were almost mobbed in the foyer, and at every interval were eagerly surrounded. (pp. 134–135)
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Overall: The first hook seems most attractive and has been checked out thoroughly. It's the one that works best with the picture as I like the way that it identifies all the people. I haven't been able to run Earwig yet and want to do so as there's a lot of quotations and plot to consider. There are also some copy-editing niggles such as some Americanisms and the crooked lead image but I may take care of those myself pending the final review.
(<later>I've made a copy-editing pass and run Earwig and it's reasonably good to go now. Andrew🐉(talk) 07:46, 3 October 2024 (UTC)) Andrew🐉(talk) 19:26, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review, Andrew. I agree that the first hook is far and away the best one, with or without the image (though obviously much better with it). I would appreciate any and all copy-editing edits from you, especially for the Americanisms; I tried my best to conform to British English standards, but my eye for it is by no means perfect. Hopefully Earwig will be up and running shortly. ThaesOfereode (talk) 20:58, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
- You're welcome. It was the centre/center spelling that caught my eye. I'm making a copy-editing pass through the article and addressing some pleonasm and other issues too. Feel free to push back if you disagree. Andrew🐉(talk) 21:30, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
- All excellent suggestions/fixes; I have a tendency for unnecessary periphrasis. I pushed back on minor quibbles – mostly with the plot and character descriptions, having spent quite some time reading and re-reading the play – but I believe all the changes should still be well in line with British standards. ThaesOfereode (talk) 00:12, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
- You're welcome. It was the centre/center spelling that caught my eye. I'm making a copy-editing pass through the article and addressing some pleonasm and other issues too. Feel free to push back if you disagree. Andrew🐉(talk) 21:30, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
The Earwig score was 3% which is negligible. The extensive quotes and lengthy synopsis are debatable but I don't consider these to be show-stoppers and so we can move forward. Andrew🐉(talk) 07:43, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
- Great, thanks! ThaesOfereode (talk) 11:58, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
Operation Concrete
- ... that Jean-Luc Godard credited neither his writer nor assistant on his first short film?
- Source: Brody, Richard (2008). Everything Is Cinema: The Working Life of Jean-Luc Godard (1. ed ed.). New York: Metropolitan Books, p. 33. ISBN 978-0-8050-6886-3.
- ALT1: ... that while shooting his first short film, Jean-Luc Godard was barred from his mother's funeral for stealing? Source: Brody, Richard (2008). Everything Is Cinema: The Working Life of Jean-Luc Godard (1. ed ed.). New York: Metropolitan Books, p. 33. ISBN 978-0-8050-6886-3.
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Lbal (talk) 23:49, 30 September 2024 (UTC).
- Starting review. Updates to follow. Ktin (talk) 05:07, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Article meets eligibility criteria. No issues with tone. Referencing seems alright, but, is sourced to offline sources. I will AGF on those offline sources. Assuming AGF on plagiarism checks as well. No QPQ needed.
Both hooks are interesting. However, to validate both of the hooks, please can I get the relevant sections from the offline sources quoted here? Ktin (talk) 05:20, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
User:Ktin Hi, sorry if my reply is not properly formatted, I'm still working on learning some aspects of Wikipedia. I've linked a Google Books copy of the source at the bottom of the page itself in the Works Cited section, but it is also at this link as well: https://books.google.com/books?id=Nf_uKU6bYRYC&pg=PA25&source=gbs_toc_r&cad=2#v=onepage&q&f=false — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lbal (talk • contribs) 19:11, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
- No problem on the formatting. Let me take a look at the Google Books preview. Ktin (talk) 01:23, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
- Validated both hooks using p33 of the Google Books Preview. Good to go. Ktin (talk) 01:32, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
The Hillbilly Thomists
- ... that the Hillbilly Thomists (pictured), a band made up of friars from the Dominican Order, reached the number two spot on Billboard's bluegrass chart?
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Overall: I’m not at all an experienced reviewer (or editor for that matter) but I believe I understand the DYK criteria well rn to try and help out with the backlog, so if anyone else has comments or if I did something wrong by all means please bring them up! I’d like to particularly request a second opinion on the image licensing (since I’m not sure how having people in a self work affects things). PixDeVl yell talk to me! 16:10, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
- @PixDeVl: Leads do not require citations (see WP:LEADCITE). Also, you can definitely use images of other people if they're not copyright violations. Let me know if you have any questions! ~ Pbritti (talk) 16:15, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
- PS: remember to post
{{subst:DYKproblem|[Name of article]|header=yes|sig=yes}}
on the relevant user's talk page when you review a hook and don't pass it. ~ Pbritti (talk) 16:19, 1 October 2024 (UTC)- @Pbritti: Fixed the lead part, someone on the Discord also mentioned WP:LEADCITE, so thank you both, I'll keep it in mind next time I do a review, as well as the notice. Thank you! I'd personally pass this, but at the least for this first and maybe few other reviews, I'll leave it as requesting a second opinion. --PixDeVl
yelltalk to me! 16:35, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Pbritti: Fixed the lead part, someone on the Discord also mentioned WP:LEADCITE, so thank you both, I'll keep it in mind next time I do a review, as well as the notice. Thank you! I'd personally pass this, but at the least for this first and maybe few other reviews, I'll leave it as requesting a second opinion. --PixDeVl
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- Providing a second opinion here on PixDeVl's request off-wiki. The initial review was mostly good and it looks like the LEADCITE thing was clarified above; no problems there. The image is correctly licensed, which isn't affected by having people as its subject in this context, at least in the United States. The only other concern I had was on the use of Aleteia as a source, as it was criticized at an RSN discussion. However, their about page indicates they have some editorial oversight and the article only uses them for uncontroversial information, so I don't think this is a sticking issue. Approved! —TechnoSquirrel69 (sigh) 16:42, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
- @TechnoSquirrel69: Thanks for the review and helping the new editor! ~ Pbritti (talk) 21:23, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
Organic Cocoa Production and Export Cooperative
- ... that the largest chocolate factory in São Tomé and Príncipe cost over 464,000 euros to build?
- Source: Sebastião, Sita (21 July 2022). "São Tomé inaugura terceira fábrica de chocolate e vai apostar na exportação" [São Tomé opens third chocolate factory and will focus on exports]. Forbes África Lusófona (in European Portuguese). Retrieved 30 September 2024. English source: "São Tomé: New organic chocolate factory to put profits into local community". Macau Business. 21 July 2022. Retrieved 30 September 2024.
- ALT1: ... that the Organic Cocoa Production and Export Cooperative built a chocolate factory on São Tomé Island that cost over 464,000 euros? Source: Same as ALT0.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Yuan Shikai coinage
- Comment: ALT1 is more direct with the article title.
Yue🌙 08:36, 30 September 2024 (UTC).
- Everything looks good in terms of meeting the criteria for DYK but the hooks are lackluster (€464,000 isn't that fascinating a sum for a major chocolate factory). I recommend you look to a different aspect of the topic for the hook. ~ Pbritti (talk) 03:41, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Pbritti: How about:
- ALT2: ... that in 2018 thieves stole 40 percent of the cocoa produced by the São Toméan Organic Cocoa Production and Export Cooperative?
- Source: Carlos, Maximino (23 May 2018). "São Tomé e Príncipe : Economia do cacau prejudicada" [São Tomé and Príncipe: Cocoa Economy Damaged]. Radio France Internationale (in Portuguese). Retrieved 30 September 2024.
- ALT3: ... that the São Toméan Organic Cocoa Production and Export Cooperative claims to represent 3,000 farmers from 42 smallholders' associations?
- Source: "Actividades e Realizações" [Activities and Achievements]. CECAB-STP. Organic Cocoa Production and Export Cooperative. Retrieved 30 September 2024.
- Yue🌙 04:51, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
- New hooks are solid. Good to go! ~ Pbritti (talk) 16:08, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Pbritti: How about:
Articles created/expanded on October 1
[edit]Shah Budak
- ... that Shah Budak, a prince of the Anatolian Dulkadir dynasty, blinded his nephew Shahruh in retaliation for the same treatment his son Feyyaz received?
- Source: * Har-El, Shai (1995). Struggle for Domination in the Middle East: The Ottoman-Mamluk War, 1485-91. E.J. Brill. p. 195. ISBN 9004101802. OCLC 624096003. Retrieved 19 March 2023.
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Aintabli (talk) 18:26, 2 October 2024 (UTC).
- Sourced in article, passed GA recently, generally well written, interesting enough, my only issue is the hook is phrased weirdly in the last half in a way that feels strangely ambiguous. "in retaliation for the same treatment his son Feyyaz received?" can you think of another way to say this? Also maybe don't mention the name of his son; possibly do "in retaliation for the same having been done to his son"? PARAKANYAA (talk) 20:14, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
- Alt1 ... that Shah Budak, a prince of the Anatolian Dulkadir dynasty, blinded his nephew Shahruh in retaliation for his son's similar fate? @PARAKANYAA: How does it sound now? Aintabli (talk) 15:12, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
- I still think that phrasing is slightly awkward, but it's better and less ambiguous. PARAKANYAA (talk) 18:47, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
Eunus
- ... that Eunus, a Syrian slave and reputed prophet, rose to become leader and king of the First Servile War in Sicily against the Roman Republic?
- Source: Urbainczyk, Theresa (2014). Slave Revolts in Antiquity, pp. 52, 56. Park Square, Milton Park, Abingdon, 711 Third Avenue, New York, NY 10017, USA: Routledge. ISBN 978-1-84465-101-6.
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Harren the Red (talk) 18:49, 2 October 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Article is new enough, well sourced, hook is interesting and QPQ is completed. I don't see anything that would hold this back from DYK, so I approve. Only thing I will say is that I don't think this image should be used, as I don't find it particularly informative, and the caption is also quite long. However, if anyone disagrees, feel free. TheBritinator (talk) 22:42, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
- On a second look, it would appear that the website the image is sourced from declares that the image is published under a CC BY-NC-SA 4.0 license, which would make it incompatible with commons. If I am missing something, please feel free to correct me. TheBritinator (talk) 22:49, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
- I can certainly edit the caption to be shorter (more concise), but from what I gather the image is a no go? I am not the original uploader of it to Commons, nor am I super familiar with copyright, so I will defer that judgement to you, though the image on commons itself says CC 4.0 international license. Also, would I edit the caption here, submit a new entry, or something else? How does the process work exactly? Thank you! Harren the Red (talk) 23:16, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Harren the Red:, no need for a new nomination, we'd just not use the image. Is that good for you? TheBritinator (talk) 13:33, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
- @TheBritinator:, yes, certainly! Thank you for the help :) Harren the Red (talk) 15:39, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
- Sounds good, then I approve of the hook. TheBritinator (talk) 16:15, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
- @TheBritinator:, yes, certainly! Thank you for the help :) Harren the Red (talk) 15:39, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Harren the Red:, no need for a new nomination, we'd just not use the image. Is that good for you? TheBritinator (talk) 13:33, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
- I can certainly edit the caption to be shorter (more concise), but from what I gather the image is a no go? I am not the original uploader of it to Commons, nor am I super familiar with copyright, so I will defer that judgement to you, though the image on commons itself says CC 4.0 international license. Also, would I edit the caption here, submit a new entry, or something else? How does the process work exactly? Thank you! Harren the Red (talk) 23:16, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
Jamaludin Malik (legislator)
- ... that Indonesian legislator Jamaludin Malik wore an Ultraman costume to his swearing-in ceremony? Source: [13]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Charlotte Motor Speedway
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Juxlos (talk) 05:39, 1 October 2024 (UTC).
- @Juxlos: Note that per a recent rule change, a QPQ must be provided at the time of the nomination, and a nomination without a provided QPQ may be closed as incomplete without further warning. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 12:24, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
- Wow, I missed a few things while away. Give me a few hours? Juxlos (talk) 12:37, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Juxlos: Should be less than 24 hours, ideally. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 23:39, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
- Will review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:21, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Article looks good. Interesting hook. Only issue is QPQ pending, something that should be addressed quickly. BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:32, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
- @BeanieFan11: QPQ added. Juxlos (talk) 03:33, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
What A Merry-Go-Round
- ... that What A Merry-Go-Round closed with evil clowns cavorting around a carousel? Source: Watt, Judith (2012). Alexander McQueen: The Life and the Legacy. New York City: Harper Design. p. 175–176. ISBN 978-1-84796-085-6. OCLC 892706946.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Hammond's Hard Lines
- Comment: If we go ahead with a Halloween set, this should be held for that please!
♠PMC♠ (talk) 01:15, 3 October 2024 (UTC).
- Will review this. - SchroCat (talk) 08:52, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
- Article is new enough, long enough. It's well-sourced, neutral, BLP-compliant, copyvio-free and 'presentable'.
- Hook is cited by reliable source (to which I don't have access, but will AGF), short enough and interesting
- Image (in article, not part of the DYK) is correctly licensed (on Commons)
- QPD done and no other problems or issues that need flagging.
Happy to green-light this. - SchroCat (talk) 09:08, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
1997 Saint-Casimir mass suicide
- ... that on the same day that the members of Heaven's Gate died in a mass suicide, five members of an unrelated cult did the same thing?
- Source: Coleman, Loren L. (2004). "Cultic Copycats". The Copycat Effect: How the Media and Popular Culture Trigger the Mayhem in Tomorrow's Headlines. Simon & Schuster. ISBN 978-1-4165-0554-9, p. 84. "On March 22, 1997, just as the Heaven’s Gate thirty-nine were dying by suicide, a documentary film about the Order of the Solar Temple cult aired on French television, and, in what was probably not a coincidence, five members of the Order of the Solar Temple killed themselves that day in a “Christic Fire.”
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[edit]Andreas Vogt
- ... that Andreas Vogt yelled "Down with the government! Long live the republic!" as a spectator of a session of the Landtag of Liechtenstein in 1919?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Eunus
TheBritinator (talk) 22:54, 2 October 2024 (UTC).
- GA date, length, hook, QPQ, close paraphrase check checks out. --Soman (talk) 23:06, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on October 3
[edit]Delibird
- ... that despite Delibird being directly inspired by Santa Claus, TheGamer refused to give it the title of Christmas Pokémon?
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Overall: No QPQ required, article was promoted to GA in the last week. Interesting hook as well, and is supported by reliable sources. Good work on the article, Captain Galaxy! ~ Tails Wx 13:51, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
Grizel Niven
- ... that Grizel Niven was the creator of "The Bessie", the Women's Prize for Fiction statuette which a past winner called "ugly"?
- Source: The Daily Telegraph
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Cathy Merrick
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Pending successful closure of AfD discussion.Article has been kept.
Cielquiparle (talk) 06:24, 3 October 2024 (UTC).
- Will review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:59, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Looks good. Nice work. BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:10, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
Littlehampton libels
- ... that in the Littlehampton libels, Edith Swan fooled three juries and two judges, had another woman sent to prison twice and was declared not guilty before finally being convicted?
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- Hilliard, Christopher (2017). The Littlehampton Libels: A Miscarriage of Justice and a Mystery about Words in 1920s England. Oxford University Press. pp. 5–7. ISBN 978-0-1987-9965-8.
- Humphreys, Travers (1946). Criminal Days. Recollections and Reflections. London: Hodder & Stoughton. p. 129. OCLC 2617004.
SchroCat (talk) 08:47, 3 October 2024 (UTC).
- Will review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 21:48, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Interesting subject. Article looks good. Nice work. (On a minor note, I changed the hook from had another women sent to prison twice
to had another woman sent to prison twice
, as it appears to have been a typo.) BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:31, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on October 4
[edit]Lego Indiana Jones: The Original Adventures
- ... that you can cook monkey brains in a Lego Indiana Jones: The Original Adventures minigame? Source: De Marco, Flynn (23 February 2008). "LEGO Indiana Jones". Kotaku. Archived from the original on 31 March 2008.
Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 18:40, 4 October 2024 (UTC).
- @Vacant0: Interesting hook, good article. Earwig's is clear. QPQ done. The source references a monkey brains scene, but does not say that the player can cook it. The Pocket Gamer source also mentions this scene, but does not say that you can cook them. Could you find a source that says that the player cooks them? ―Panamitsu (talk) 03:44, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
- Maybe we could amend this to: “that you can play a monkey brain cooking minigame in Lego Indiana Jones: The Original Adventures or “that you can prepare monkey brain dishes in a Lego Indiana Jones: The Original Adventures minigame?
- This reflects the sources and the actual gameplay (the player prepares a monkey brain meal). Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 07:49, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
- Yes that looks good. ―Panamitsu (talk) 01:29, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
Margaret C. Waites
... that the ghost of Margaret C. Waites (pictured) is said to haunt the Cabot Library Suite at Harvard College, protecting her book collection?Source: “ Supposedly, Radcliffe alumna Margaret Coleman Waites, Class of 1905, whose books occupy the shelves of the Suite, lives within the mahogany inlays to protect her beloved collection.” The Crimson
- For Halloween if it’s not too late!
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Overall: Article is new enough, long enough, is well sourced, neutral and plagiarism-free (Earwig just picks up paper titles). Hook is cited and interesting. QPQ is done. It would be great if this could run at Halloween. Lajmmoore (talk) 10:54, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
- I'm striking ALT0 because it confuses Cabot House with Cabot Library (see article edit history). Try this:
- ALT1 ... that the ghost of Margaret C. Waites (pictured) is said to haunt an undergraduate suite at Harvard College's Cabot House, protecting her book collection? Supposedly, Radcliffe alumna Margaret Coleman Waites, Class of 1905, whose books occupy the shelves of the Suite, lives within the mahogany inlays to protect her beloved collection. [14]
- EEng 06:16, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
- To me it is more confusing when Library Suite is removed because why would a book collection be there? Innisfree987 (talk) 06:26, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
- The phrase "Cabot Library Suite" only appears in the sources because their audience (Harvard folks) are assumed to understand that "Cabot" means "Cabot House". Outside that context it makes no sense. As for the question of why would a book collection be there -- well, that makes the hook more interesting. the article explains. EEng 06:53, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
- As the article creator, thank you for correcting the location of her alleged haunting, both in the article and for the hook. (Catching such details is one of the benefits of the DYK process.) I don't think the new hook is confusing; surely, books (and their ghost benefactors) might be anywhere on a college campus.Penny Richards (talk) 14:32, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
- The phrase "Cabot Library Suite" only appears in the sources because their audience (Harvard folks) are assumed to understand that "Cabot" means "Cabot House". Outside that context it makes no sense. As for the question of why would a book collection be there -- well, that makes the hook more interesting. the article explains. EEng 06:53, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
- To me it is more confusing when Library Suite is removed because why would a book collection be there? Innisfree987 (talk) 06:26, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
Mongrel (2024 film)
- ... that real paramedics were hired to portray EMTs in Mongrel, and they responded to a medical emergency that occurred in a village where they were filming?
- Source: [1]
- ALT1: ... that the Chinese title of the film Mongrel is derived from Laozi's Tao Te Ching? Source: [2]
- ALT2: ... that to minimize direct sunlight in the film, Mongrel was shot in mountains with altitudes of 2,000 to 3,000 meters? Source: [3]
- ALT3: ... that former triad member-turned-rapper Daniel Hong was cast in Mongrel after the director watched one of his short films? Source: [4]
- ALT4: ... that Thai actor Wanlop Rungkumjad learned Mandarin for his role in Mongrel? Source: [5]
- ALT5: ... that Wanlop Rungkumjad is the first Thai actor to be nominated for a Golden Horse Award for Best Leading Actor with the film Mongrel? Source: [6]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Ye Yanlan
Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 14:17, 4 October 2024 (UTC).
- Article looks good and Earwig's is clear. Reviewing ALT0: The hook is interesting and is verified by the source, and the article. ―Panamitsu (talk) 03:49, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
References
- ^ Lui, John (29 May 2024). "Medics on Singaporean director Chiang Wei Liang's Cannes-awarded Mongrel went into action when a real emergency hit". The Straits Times. Retrieved 3 October 2024.
Chiang had hired real paramedics to play EMTs in Mongrel. "Our producer rushed in and said, 'Hey, we need the EMTs right now,'" the film-maker recalls. In a house nearby, a man had suffered a cardiac arrest. The EMTs rushed over but could not save him. The ambulance took 45 minutes to arrive, a tragic illustration of the way rural communities in Taiwan are starved of medical services, forcing them to turn to foreign caregivers – some of them undocumented – to help their sick and aged.
- ^ 鍾錦隆 (22 May 2024). "閃亮光芒的黑色電影!台片《白衣蒼狗》坎城獲迴響". Radio Taiwan International (in Chinese). Retrieved 3 October 2024.
曾威量在採訪中也談到了電影片名"白衣蒼狗"的緣由,表示對老子所說"天地不仁,以萬物為芻狗"的感觸橫貫了整個片子的創作。
[In the interview, Chiang Wei-liang also discussed the origin of the film's title, "Mongrel", expressing that his feelings about Laozi's saying, "Heaven and earth do not concern themselves with benevolence; they see every being as nothing more than straw-made mongrels" [from Chapter 5 of Tao Te Ching], permeated the entire creation of the film.] - ^ "Michaël Capron discusses his work on Wei Liang Chiang's "Mongrel"". Association française des directrices et directeurs de la photographie cinématographique. 21 May 2024. Retrieved 3 October 2024.
The challenge was twofold : to find indoor locations that would suit the story and the exterior scenes, but also to ensure that no direct sunlight reached them. The steep mountain ranges on the eastern side of the island provided the right weather for the film's mood. Access to these landlocked areas was nonetheless difficult, given that the peaks quickly reach an altitude of 2,000 metres above sea level, or even 3,000 metres at times.
- ^ Carré, Patrice (22 May 2024). "Cannes 2024 - Chiang Wei Liang co-réalisateur de "Mongrel" : "J'ai voulu aller au-delà de ma simple satisfaction créative personnelle"". Le Film français (in French). Retrieved 3 October 2024.
Yu-hong, ancien membre d'une triade et aujourd'hui artiste rap respecté, a attiré mon attention par son authenticité brute dans un court métrage. Son empathie et son parcours personnel ont donné de la profondeur à son personnage, faisant écho aux difficultés rencontrées par de nombreux individus marginalisés.
[Yu-hong (Daniel Hong Yu-hong), a former triad member and now a respected rap artist, caught my attention with his raw authenticity in a short film. His empathy and personal journey added depth to his character, resonating with the struggles faced by many marginalized individuals.] - ^ Rithdee, Kong (22 May 2024). "A Thai actor takes the stage at Cannes". Bangkok Post. Retrieved 3 October 2024.
Before shooting, I spent a lot of Zoom calls with the directors, going through each scene and discussing how to execute them," Wanlop says. "I had to learn Mandarin, first in Thailand and then in Taiwan. On set, the directors would come up with new dialogue, and I had to learn it on the spot. I couldn't just memorise the words. The idea is to understand the lines, to know their meaning, and only then could I deliver them convincingly.
- ^ Lui, John; Lee, Jan (3 October 2024). "S'pore directors' Mongrel and Stranger Eyes score a record 13 Golden Horse Awards nominations". The Straits Times. Retrieved 4 October 2024.
...and the first Thai actor to be nominated in the category – Wanlop Rungkumjad – for Mongrel.
James Brown (Isle of Man)
- ... that a 19th century newspaper editor went to prison in protest of the Isle of Man's lack of democracy?
- ALT1: ... that the editor of the Isle of Man Times in the 19th Century was a Liverpool born descendent of slavery? Source: http://www-oxforddnb-com.wikipedialibrary.idm.oclc.org/display/10.1093/ref:odnb/9780198614128.001.0001/odnb-9780198614128-e-72896?rskey=AQtqX4&result=4
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Orange sticker (talk) 13:37, 4 October 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: @Orange sticker: read through the article, and all looks good from a DYK perspective. I have some nitpicks with the article itself I'll think over and probably leave on its talk if I have the time and think them valid enough(i.e. assessment but the difference between B and C isn't very standardized from what I see regardless), but this gets green from me. I'm technically marking this as AGF because I don't have access to The Wikipedia Library with my edit count, so it's paywalled for me. If anyone else who is Extended Confirmed wants to change that to green, feel free to. For picking a hook, I'd go with ALT0 probably, more likely to hook a reader into wanting to know more about the subject. --PixDeVl yell talk to me! 04:32, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
Puck Building
- ... that the Puck Building has two gilded Pucks? Source: Goncharoff, Katya (August 12, 1984). "The Glitter of Gold Gains in Facade and Lobby Decor: Some Say Owners Feel Gilding May Enhance Values". The New York Times.; White, Norval & Willensky, Elliot (2000). AIA Guide to New York City (4th ed.). New York: Three Rivers Press. p. 87.
- ALT1: ... that the Puck Building has two gilded Puck statues on its facade? Source: Goncharoff, Katya (August 12, 1984). "The Glitter of Gold Gains in Facade and Lobby Decor: Some Say Owners Feel Gilding May Enhance Values". The New York Times.; White, Norval & Willensky, Elliot (2000). AIA Guide to New York City (4th ed.). New York: Three Rivers Press. p. 87.
- ALT2: ... that a decade after the Puck Building was built, its western section was demolished to make way for a street? Source: Puck Building (PDF) (Report). New York City Landmarks Preservation Commission. April 12, 1983. p. 4
- ALT3: ... that a fence from a Coney Island amusement park was moved to the Puck Building? Source: Farrell, Bill (October 28, 1987). "Red bat's still on the ball". Daily News. p. 461.
- ALT4: ... that three years after the Puck Building was renovated into commercial condominiums, none of the condominiums had been sold? Source: "New Friends for Puck". Newsday. April 28, 1986. p. 127
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Peck Building
Epicgenius (talk) 13:59, 4 October 2024 (UTC).
- Article is new and long enough (expanded), well-sourced, copyvio-free, and presentable. I prefer ALT1. All hooks are cited to reliable sources, and are short enough and interesting. Images are properly licensed. QPQ done. Looks good to go. Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 18:39, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
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Jumbo's
- ... that Jumbo's became the first white-owned restaurant in Miami to serve and employ black people, beginning in the late 1960s? Source: WLRN-TV, The New York Times, Miami New Times, New York
- ALT1: ... that the Miami New Times described local restaurant Jumbo's as "the Temple of Fried Chicken"? Source: Miami New Times
- ALT2: ... that some people who participated in the 1980 Miami riots went to local restaurant Jumbo's, which was the first restaurant to serve and employ black people? Source: WLRN-FM, The New York Times
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Delibird
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Overall: The article is well-written and well-sourced. Earwigs shows that it is copyvio free. I think all three hooks are interesting, and the respective sources check out. Good to go! —Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 04:46, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
Matthew Webb
- ... that Matthew Webb swam for nearly 22 hours to become the first person to cross the English Channel unaided?
- Source: Seccombe, Thomas (1899). "Webb, Matthew" . In Lee, Sidney (ed.). Dictionary of National Biography. Vol. 60. London: Smith, Elder & Co. p. 105: "At the beginning of August 1875 public interest was greatly aroused by the announcement that Webb intended to attempt the feat of swimming across the English Channel without any artificial aid. The attempt made by J. B. Johnson to swim the straits in August 1872 had ended in a fiasco. On 28 May 1875 Captain Paul Boyton, the American life-saving expert, had, after one failure, successfully accomplished the feat of paddling across the Straits when clothed in his patent dress; but although the journey demonstrated the great value of the dress, the paddle in itself was mere child's play in comparison with the task which Webb set himself to accomplish. His first attempt on 12 Aug. was a failure, owing to the fact that he drifted upwards of nine miles out of his proper course in consequence of the strong current and the stress of weather. Twelve days later he dived from the Admiralty Pier, Dover, a few seconds before one o'clock in the afternoon (31/4 hours before high water on a 15 ft. 10 in. tide), and swimming through the night by a three-quarter moon reached Calais at 10.40 A.M. next morning (25 Aug.), having been immersed for nearly twenty-two hours, and having swum a distance of about forty miles without having touched a boat or artificial support of any kind."
- ALT1: ... that Matthew Webb died attempting to swim down the Niagara Rapids? Source: Watson, Kathy (2001). The crossing: the glorious tragedy of the first man to swim the English channel. New York: G. P. Putnam's Sons. ISBN 1-58542-109-X: 223-224, 230 (link to fulltext in article sources)
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Overall: @It is a wonderful world: No issues from a DYK stand, GA is new enough(despite what DYKCheck thinks?), interesting hook, certainly comprehensively cited, no need for a quid pro quo. Earwig caught a few similar clips but they're generic and small enough that I don't see any issue with copyvio. Marking as AGF since I don't have access to the text for the hook cite. Awesome work, approved from me. PixDeVl yell talk to me! 22:11, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
Hermance Edan
- ... that the board game that would become Stratego was designed by a 57-year-old woman with no previous professional game design experience?
- Source: French Patent office, Brevet n° 396.795
- ALT1: ... that little is known of Hermance Edan before she patented her first board game in 1908, at the age of 57? Source: French Patent office, Brevet n° 396.795
- ALT2: ... that L'Attaque, the board game that became Stratego, was patented in 1908 by its designer, a 57-year-old woman? Source: French Patent office, Brevet n° 396.795 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Farrest (talk • contribs) 05:06, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
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- Comment: I translated this article from the French, so the references in the article may need some work, but Edan's age at the time of her patent seems well-attested. Thanks for your consideration!
Farrest (talk) 20:41, 5 October 2024 (UTC).
- Article is long, new, and presentable enough, and as well-cited as a figure this obscure can be. The hook cites a reliable source and is quite interesting, as "board game designer" was an extremely rare profession in 1908, and dramatically more so for a single 57-year-old woman. I might like it if the hook included both game names, though — perhaps "... that L'Attaque, the board game that became Stratego, was patented in 1908 by a 57-year-old woman?" Personman (talk) 04:21, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
- I like this wording, and I've added it above as "Alt2". Thanks! Farrest (talk) 05:10, 6 October 2024 (UTC)