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Former good articleUnited States constitutional criminal procedure was one of the Social sciences and society good articles, but it has been removed from the list. There are suggestions below for improving the article to meet the good article criteria. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
Did You Know Article milestones
DateProcessResult
February 23, 2012Good article nomineeNot listed
May 6, 2012Good article nomineeListed
December 28, 2024Good article reassessmentDelisted
Did You Know A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on January 2, 2012.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that much of the United States Bill of Rights is devoted to criminal procedure?
Current status: Delisted good article


So much is left out

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What about all the case law, such as Miranda v. Arizona and Chambers v. Florida which implemented Miranda warning, and many. many other cases that changed US criminal procedure nationwide? MathewTownsend (talk) 02:19, 2 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Miranda, Massiah, the Fourth Amendment, etc. are about criminal investigations, i.e. cops and robbers. This article is about criminal procedure, i.e. legal proceedings. This distinction makes much conceptual sense (the former constitutional provisions regulate law enforcement officers; the latter regulate lawyers: judges, prosecutors, defense attorneys), and in fact most law schools teach criminal investigations and criminal procedure as separate courses. Savidan 05:08, 2 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Grand jury clause should be lower case

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That is. if the article is to be correct. I added the link to the article Fifth_Amendment_to_the_United_States_Constitution#Grand_jury. Grand jury is not capitalized by legal writers and shouldn't be for the general reader. MathewTownsend (talk) 05:07, 3 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Well, if it is a reference to the Grand Jury Clause, it probably should be capitalized. In this instance it's a proper noun. Lord Roem (talk) 05:13, 3 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
ok. MathewTownsend (talk) 05:22, 3 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Another immigration issue

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Sorry to be the weird guy adding immigration related counsel issues but... Should any discussion of In re Lozada (which I plan on writing shortly) and the mess that has followed it be made? Essentially the oddity is that while you have no right to appointed counsel in deportation hearings you do have a right under Lozada (now upheld by Eric Holder, though briefly struck down by Michael Mukasey) to claim ineffective assistance of counsel. Staxringold talkcontribs 17:18, 5 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

This article is only about cases that are both (1) constitutional and (2) criminal. While I am not familiar with Lozada, it is not criminal and may not be constitutional. I have no problem pointing out the unavailability of the Sixth Amendment right in civil proceedings, as I think it clarifies the contour of the right, but otherwise this is not the article for deportation procedure. As such, I doubt Lozada is based on the Sixth Amendment; more likely, it just analogizes to Sixth Amendment IAC, and is based on Fifth Amendment due process or sub-constitutional law (although I could be wrong; again, I have not read it). Savidan 19:59, 5 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • If I recall correctly it does relate to 5th amendment due process, but the complaints over it stem from the fact that no 6th amendment right exists (and without that, according to Mukasey at least) you can't make a connection that puts the government at fault to make there be a Constitutional issue at all. Regardless, your position makes sense, thanks! Staxringold talkcontribs 20:18, 6 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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Reviewer: Connolly15 (talk · contribs) 14:13, 23 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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Good Article Status - Review Criteria

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  3. Verifiable with no original research:
  4. (a) it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline;
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    (c) it contains no original research.
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  9. [4]
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Review

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  1. Well-written:
  2. Criteria Notes Result
    (a) (prose) The reviewer has no notes here. Neutral Undetermined
    (b) (MoS) The reviewer has no notes here. Neutral Undetermined
  3. Verifiable with no original research:
  4. Criteria Notes Result
    (a) (references) The reviewer has no notes here. Neutral Undetermined
    (b) (citations to reliable sources) The reviewer has no notes here. Neutral Undetermined
    (c) (original research) The reviewer has no notes here. Neutral Undetermined
  5. Broad in its coverage:
  6. Criteria Notes Result
    (a) (major aspects) The reviewer has no notes here. Neutral Undetermined
    (b) (focused) The reviewer has no notes here. Neutral Undetermined
  7. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
  8. Notes Result
    The reviewer has no notes here. Neutral Undetermined
  9. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
  10. Notes Result
    The reviewer has no notes here. Neutral Undetermined
  11. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
  12. Criteria Notes Result
    (a) (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales) The reviewer has no notes here. Neutral Undetermined
    (b) (appropriate use with suitable captions) The reviewer has no notes here. Neutral Undetermined

Result

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Result Notes
Neutral Undetermined The reviewer has no notes here.

Discussion

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Please add any related discussion here.

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GA Review

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Reviewer: ChrisGualtieri (talk · contribs) 18:28, 5 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Review Pending

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As this is the longest un-reviewed article, I am tagging this for review. It will take me several hours to review the material. Expect a detailed analysis by May 7 or May 8. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 18:28, 5 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I've examined the references and found that they link to other (many red linked) cases of which themselves would contain the material for the reference. I do not believe that is acceptable, especially considering the volume of the cases and the length of each one. For Herring v New York I was expecting something like a link to the actual summary judgement which points to a specific section or decision. Such as this. [1] Where the first line summarizes the content, "A total denial of the opportunity for final summation in a nonjury criminal trial as well as in a jury trial deprives the accused of the basic right to make his defense..."

Without links to verifiable material I cannot pass this, most readers want a link to the citation or something material which allows independent checking of that matter. Here is where I essentially have a problem, the case (as a whole) is listed where they have to be independently searched out and some have dozens of pages of material without a page or a section noted. Such as: [2] That being said, most of these are verifiable with simple searches. Could you please respond to this matter, as for references this seems to be allowable, but given the existence of so many easily verifiable online references (usually copy and pasting the case into Google), if proper relevant texts can be accessed? ChrisGualtieri (talk) 14:42, 6 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The wikilinks are for the convenience of the reader if they choose to follow them. In the case of redlinks, their use is to (1) indicate whether or not Wikipedia has an article about that case; or (2) become useful as soon as such an article is created. I've never seen a Supreme Court case determined non-notable at AfD, and new articles about Supreme Court cases are created every day, so the redlinks themselves should not be a problem.
As for verification, the source cited is the the United States Reports, not some website. Offline sources are accepted routinely and universally on Wikipedia, and there is no requirement that each reference contain an external link to the exact line of text referred to. Other editors are more enamored with Justia (and similar sites) than I am. Rather than list its many infirmities here (for example, the fact that there are now hundreds of thousands of broken links to Justia on Wikipedia because of the regularity with which they change their url system), I simply note that there is no policy requiring each case citation in a reference to contain an external link, and that it should be at the discretion of the main author whether to do so. These sites are free as in "free beer," not freedom. We owe them nothing. Savidan 15:09, 6 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not doubting they don't exist because they aren't notable, just that they haven't been created and interwiki sourcing is frowned upon, but for the sake of technical matters regarding sources changing URL types often enough to warrant simply citing the case is no problem. I'll spend some time cross checking the facts and the sources, I've done a few and found no reason to doubt the paraphrasing of the article thus far. It seems the last reviewer to do this disappeared on you, its been waiting for such a long time and I want to have a clearer picture of the situation.
I've also noted some of the images being used in the article are involved in a legal dispute, the photos of the paintings, a separate matter for which make me a tad uneasy on a GA article review. While under USA law they are fine, the on going dispute (several years so far) is of concern to me. While I address the other issues, is there a better substitute or option for the King George III painting and Walter Raleigh? I might ask for a second opinion if you don't want to switch them over, because they are appropriately tagged, but ongoing legal disputes are a concern for this reviewer. 6.A of the GA criteria states, "(a) images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content;" and while it doesn't detail legal disputes, I do have reservations as to whether or not it is a factor. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 18:34, 6 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I absolutely agree that interwiki sourcing is a cardinal sin, and this article does not commit it. The source is the official report of the decision in the U.S. Reports. The interwiki link is no different than any other situation where Wikipedia has (or could someday have) an article about the source being cited (ditto for an article about the author of a source).
As for the images, could you be more specific? I am aware of no reason why any of the images would not be regarded as in the public domain in the US (which is the only jurisdiction Wikipedia follows for this purpose). If you are referring to the George III image, the tags on it make clear that the image is acceptable for use on Wikipedia (and Commons, which is even stricter); they are only there to warn people who might republished in other jurisdictions. Savidan 18:58, 6 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Yeah, no worries. I didn't realize that trying to pin decent references would be defeated by shifting of URLs which would break them all again. They are fine, just don't want other people to ask the same question later and I have no response or reason for not having URL sources when they were so easy. The image matter has this tag, "While Commons policy accepts the use of this media, one or more third parties have made copyright claims against Wikimedia Commons in relation to the work from which this is sourced or a purely mechanical reproduction thereof." While the stance is, "The official position taken by the Wikimedia Foundation is that "faithful reproductions of two-dimensional public domain works of art are public domain, and that claims to the contrary represent an assault on the very concept of a public domain". For details, see Commons:When to use the PD-Art tag. This photographic reproduction is therefore also considered to be in the public domain. Please be aware that depending on local laws, re-use of this content may be prohibited or restricted in your jurisdiction. See Commons:Reuse of PD-Art photographs."
For that concern (mainly for those who would use this article in the UK), I had some reservations. Given the stance I do not believe those two images should prevent it from GA, but I like second opinions. The whole dispute is over the picture of a public domain work being copyrighted, the work itself is not, but the dispute is over the picture being copyrighted. The matter concerns all of the works in the National Portrait Gallery it seems. More on it here. [3] Its the only reason why I am asking if a substitution is preferable to you or if I should ask the relevant board for their opinion on the matter. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 19:14, 6 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I am familiar with the NPG situation. I do not prefer to substitute. The Foundation and community have taken the position that the images are OK, and that is good enough for me. Savidan 19:30, 6 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Then its good enough for me to! I will begin analyzing the content in the coming hours. Still expect a detailed review tomorrow or Tuesday. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 19:54, 6 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]


Criteria

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Good Article Status - Review Criteria

A good article is—

  1. Well-written:
  2. (a) the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct; and
    (b) it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.[1]
  3. Verifiable with no original research:
  4. (a) it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline;
    (b) reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose);[2] and
    (c) it contains no original research.
  5. Broad in its coverage:
  6. (a) it addresses the main aspects of the topic;[3] and
    (b) it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
  7. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
  8. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
  9. [4]
  10. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
  11. [5]
    (a) media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content; and
    (b) media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.[6]

Review

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  1. Well-written:
  2. Criteria Notes Result
    (a) (prose) Clear and concise. Pass Pass
    (b) (MoS) No concerns. Pass Pass
  3. Verifiable with no original research:
  4. Criteria Notes Result
    (a) (references) No concerns. Pass Pass
    (b) (citations to reliable sources) All are easily obtainable even without direct links to the cases, as previously noted, the breaking of any urls occur too frequently and are easily obtainable elsewhere as public documents. Pass Pass
    (c) (original research) Good paraphrasing, sticks to material, no original research. Pass Pass
  5. Broad in its coverage:
  6. Criteria Notes Result
    (a) (major aspects) Covers it well. Pass Pass
    (b) (focused) Goes into detail with relevant cases. Pass Pass
  7. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
  8. Notes Result
    Yes, adequately reflects the historical rulings. Pass Pass
  9. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
  10. Notes Result
    No edit wars. Pass Pass
  11. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
  12. Criteria Notes Result
    (a) (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales) Yes. The issue noted above is not a GA affecting matter. Pass Pass
    (b) (appropriate use with suitable captions) No problems. Pass Pass

Result

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Result Notes
Pass Pass A very good, and clean article!

Discussion

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This is a good article! I know I moved ahead with some concerns, but with those concerns dispelled I will pass this now!

Additional Notes

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  2. ^ Either parenthetical references or footnotes can be used for in-line citations, but not both in the same article.
  3. ^ This requirement is significantly weaker than the "comprehensiveness" required of featured articles; it allows shorter articles, articles that do not cover every major fact or detail, and overviews of large topics.
  4. ^ Vandalism reversions, proposals to split or merge content, good faith improvements to the page (such as copy editing), and changes based on reviewers' suggestions do not apply. Nominations for articles that are unstable because of unconstructive editing should be placed on hold.
  5. ^ Other media, such as video and sound clips, are also covered by this criterion.
  6. ^ The presence of images is not, in itself, a requirement. However, if images (or other media) with acceptable copyright status are appropriate and readily available, then some such images should be provided.

GA status

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With the exception of two citations to Amar 1996, this article appears to be entirely sourced to specific cases and decisions. That is a fine standard for a law review article, perhaps, but is not how things are done on Wikipedia. I think this article needs to be rewritten to be based on secondary sources. The specific case law citations are fine, I guess, but they should be put in a separate references group, and everything else needs citations to secondary sources - books, journal articles, etc. See WP:SECONDARY.

@Savidan: Would you happen to still be active on Wikipedia? Would you have any interest in undertaking such work? It'd be a lot, unfortunately, but I think it's necessary. SnowFire (talk) 17:42, 23 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

GAR

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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · WatchWatch article reassessment pageMost recent review
Result: Delisted. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 14:01, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

First of all, the content seems like a good contribution to free & shareable media. It seems competently written and is probably a great start for developing a GA-class article. Unfortunately there is a gigantic blocking issue here that means it really can't be a Wikipedia GA article as is: WP:PRIMARY, massive overdependence on primary sources, failing GA2b, referenced to reliable sources. Maybe this is the style for an article in a legal review journal, but it's not Wikipedia GA-class referencing style. Of the 179 references, 3 of them are to secondary sources, and 176 are to case law or the Constitution directly. Now, having case law citations "on the side" is fine and useful (whether integrated into citations like "Secondary source p. X, citing Devouard v Wales", or in a separate references group), but there needs to be sources to, say, the kind of textbooks law students in the US read. Citing case law directly is even worse than articles that are heavily reliant on, say, Herodotus; at least with classical-era writers, what they wrote is all we have to work with at times and clearly relevant even when wrong. But there are tens of thousands of modern case law decisions handed down, many of which are ignored as far as precedent, and others that are outright overturned. And others where the dissent is considered more controlling and cited! Citing these can potentially be very misleading. We need a secondary source to mediate which cases are considered relevant. If we're lucky, maybe the article doesn't have to change that much, but someone really does need to go check it against modern high-quality secondary sources and add in references to the secondary sources.

As a secondary concern... and this one is less pressing.. GA3A, broad in coverage. The references mostly peter out after 2012 or so. My understanding is that there has been some changes since due to the Roberts Court (e.g. weakening the exclusionary rule, which seems not to be discussed at all currently). Further, this article appears to be heavily set in the contemporary of ~2012. Maybe a new spinoff article needs to be created on "Evolution of United States constitutional criminal procedure" or the like, but the history of US law is relevant, too. What was procedure like in 1783-1955? That seems completely unexplored currently. So we need both updates on 2012-2024, and possibly some more acknowledgement of historical criminal procedure (even if this might be spun out into a new article). SnowFire (talk) 02:53, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Delist Unless someone is willing to address these problems, I think this article is far from meeting the current criteria. Sangsangaplaz (Talk to me! I'm willing to help) 07:40, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.