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A tag has been placed on Hideko Udagawa, requesting that it be deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under two or more of the criteria for speedy deletion, by which articles can be deleted at any time, without discussion. If the page meets any of these strictly-defined criteria, then it may be soon be deleted by an administrator. The reasons it has been tagged are:

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Promotional content

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I've deleted the page and here's my advice.

First off, you need to restate your conflict of interest with Udagawa per the transparency requirements of WP:COI. The best place for this is on your userpage since that makes it easier for people to find. You also need to read over WP:COI in general and I'd also recommend that you go through one of the training programs at either WP:ADVENTURE or WP:TRAINING.

Secondly, the content at the church's website will need to be re-written. Part of this is because it's a copyright violation as it was written but the other reason is because it was very promotional. Examples of what's seen as promotional is as follows:

"captivates international audiences with her artistry and enthusiasm"
"great Russian romantic tradition of violin playing"
"particularly enthusiastic"

These are all example of promotional WP:BUZZWORDS that tend to be used in PR and other material designed to advertise the subject, in this case Udagawa. Now you've posted another article that you claim is promotional, however the existence of other promotional material on Wikipedia does not mean that other promotional material should remain. (WP:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS)

Now if you're working as a PR/marketing person, it's likely that you haven't picked up on the promotional tones because you're used to writing like this on a regular basis, to the point where you don't pick up on this. This is part of the reason why it's usually discouraged for people with a COI to make direct edits to Wikipedia.

Another concern I have is that the article didn't have any sourcing that could establish notability. You linked to her official website, but this cannot establish notability since it's a WP:PRIMARY source. There are some assertions of notability in the article, however without coverage in independent and reliable sources per WP:RS, these claims will not be enough to keep the article live even if the promotional tones were cleaned up. Something to take into consideration is that Udagawa is not automatically notable because she is related to or affiliated with notable persons - you need to show coverage to assert how she's independently notable. (WP:NOTINHERITED) An example of a reliable source would be something like this review by the Herald Scotland. Something like this would likely be considered a routine notice, but it can be used to back up basic biography information. Be careful of blogs and other self-published sources since the majority of those will not be able to assert notability.

My recommendation here would be that if you want to try making a new article, that you submit this via WP:AfC, the articles for creation process. The process is slower, but it would help take care of any conflict of interest and if there are issues with the article, you would be able to fix them and try to resubmit the article. I'm aware that you are getting paid for this and the lack of an article could mean that you don't get paid or worse, but you will need to be cautious here. Tokyogirl79 (。◕‿◕。) 07:28, 2 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I'm not sure I understand what you're talking about. For instance, what does this sentence actually mean  ? : 'restate your conflict of interest with Udagawa per the transparency requirements'

I have no conflict of interest with Hideko - she is my client !

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16:24, 2 February 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Virginia MacNaughton (January 1)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Modussiccandi were:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Modussiccandi (talk) 23:13, 1 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Virginia MacNaughton (January 2)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by MarioJump83 was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
MarioJump83! 08:31, 2 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Virginia MacNaughton (January 2)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by AngusWOOF were:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
AngusW🐶🐶F (barksniff) 16:43, 2 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Virginia MacNaughton (January 2)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by AngusWOOF were:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
AngusW🐶🐶F (barksniff) 17:11, 2 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Virginia MacNaughton (January 8)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Gerald Waldo Luis was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
GeraldWL 13:55, 8 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Virginia MacNaughton has a new comment

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Virginia MacNaughton. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 14:35, 8 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Virginia MacNaughton

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If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion under CSD G13. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it. You may request userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 16:02, 10 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Virginia MacNaughton

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Hello, Newreaders. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Virginia MacNaughton".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! Eternal Shadow Talk 15:59, 8 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]