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Welcome!

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Hi Narisaswiki! I noticed your contributions and wanted to welcome you to the Wikipedia community. I hope you like it here and decide to stay.

As you get started, you may find this short tutorial helpful:

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Alternatively, the contributing to Wikipedia page covers the same topics.

If you have any questions, we have a friendly space where experienced editors can help you here:

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Please remember to sign your messages on talk pages by typing four tildes (~~~~); this will automatically insert your username and the date.

Happy editing! --Taweetham (talk) 03:36, 2 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 01

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Please complete online student training at http://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students You must login and complete all five basic modules. (Wikipedia policies, ..., Finding your article) After completion of these module, we will be able to see that you have edited at least three pages on the English Wikipedia.

Special:Contributions/Narisaswiki at this time shows that you have not finished:

  • sandbox [1] (N.B. Please do not click "Submit your draft for review!". The function is not applicable to our course.)
  • be bold [2]
  • talk page tutorial [3]

You need to be logged in on a desktop platform, so that your contributions are recorded under your account. The links above take you straight into the pages where you can launch interactive tutorials. We expect to see you create three new pages during the this training exercise. --Taweetham (talk) 03:36, 2 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

This is a reminder that you have not complete the assignment. Please complete it as soon as possible to remain in our program. --Taweetham (talk) 13:23, 4 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
This is a reminder that you have not complete the assignment. Please complete it as soon as possible to remain in our program. --Taweetham (talk) 09:55, 6 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Hi Narisaswiki! The sandbox tutorial is still missing. --Taweetham (talk) 12:59, 8 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 13:34, 8 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 02

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General instruction
  • You are going to see history of pages on Wikipedia to learn how volunteers collaboratively develop content and media. We would like you to learn from the edits made by our students in the past terms. The list of terms, students and articles can be found at user:Taweetham/WEP.
  • All tasks must be answered by using Special:Diff. See Help:Diff for further detailed instructions and see an example below
Tasks
  1. Read WP:NOT. Find an example of student edit on an article AND warning message that the student received on his/her talk page.
  2. Read Wikipedia:Edit warring. Find an example of student edits on an article (it requires several edits to be an edit warring) AND warning that the student received on his/her talk page.
  3. Read WP:COPYVIO. Find an example of a student who has been warned about it on his/her talk page. Find an example (Wikipedia diff on an article) where copyrighted media (image, VDO or sound files) is deleted from Wikimedia Commons and removed from an article.

Please leave your answer below. (Leave a reply in this section of your talkpage.) --Taweetham (talk) 13:34, 8 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Week 2

Wiki Assignment

Task 1

  • Edit Warning

Special:Diff/692252716

  • Talk Page

http://en.wiki.x.io/wiki/User_talk:PakpongICCH444

Task 2

  • Edit Warring (Toxicology)

Special:Diff/D5481026

  • Talk Page

http://en.wiki.x.io/wiki/User_talk:Myat_T._Aung

Task 3

  • Copyright

Special:Diff/689010352

  • Talk Page

http://en.wiki.x.io/wiki/User_talk:U5680907

125.24.158.103 (talk) 14:47, 15 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

125.24.158.103 (talk) 14:45, 15 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Student Edit — Preceding unsigned comment added by 125.24.158.103 (talk) 13:51, 15 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Please login and sign your post as per the training. --Taweetham (talk) 01:09, 16 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 01:10, 16 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 03

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Please propose a topic or two that you wish to write on Wikipedia. You should read all related articles/policies on Wikipedia and provide the following information.

  1. Your proposed article(s) (New or existing STUB article relating to a chemical compound, reaction, equipment or technique - or related to your major/interest. (see Category:Stub-Class Chemistry articles))
    • For new article, explain briefly why it passes WP:NOTE.
    • For existing topics, explain briefly the state/structure of the current article.
      • Is the structure & existing content appropriate?
        • If not, restructure or remove content as per WP:MOS and WP:NOT before you move to the next stage.
  2. Brief outline of your contributions to the article
    • In what section & what content
      • Make sure it belongs to the article and it is encyclopedic. See WP:NOT for things that should NOT be added.
      • Make sure that it is not redundant to existing articles. Use Google search "site:wikipedia.org" rather than Wikipedia search.
    • References for the article
    • Media files (photo/VDO/drawing) to be used in the article.
      • You may suggest plan to create your own work and upload to Wikimedia Commons
      • You may use existing media on Wikimedia Commons. Use Google image search "site:wikimedia.org" rather than Wikimedia Commons search.
  3. Examples/template/related articles that you will use as a model to develop your nominated article.
    • In terms of WP:MOS/formatting - your article will have similar style/format/tone to these articles.
    • In terms of content - your article will link to or will be linked from these articles.

Please leave your answer below. (Leave a reply in this section of your talkpage.) --Taweetham (talk) 01:10, 16 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  1. My proposed new article is on Alpha-isomethyl ionone. This is a natural chemical compound found in certain mushrooms and is used for its floral fragrance to add to the perfumes'scent. Additionally, it is said to be one of the ingredients in Channel Perfume.
  2. I want to focus on the chemical compound, its chemical structure, and its uses.

-- Narisaswiki (talk) 16:04, 22 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

 Done Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 14:54, 27 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 04

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Your topic is approved and added to the course page. Please develop the proposal into the first draft in your sandbox.

  • For existing article, you may copy some parts of the existing article to your sandbox to see how revision/integration of content would work. You will copy the code back to the article at later stage.
  • For new article, you may want to copy parts of a template article to your sandbox to see what sections are necessary. The sandbox will be moved to the article namespace at later stage. Please do not click "Submit your draft for review!". The function is not applicable to our course.

In all cases, do not copy more than what is necessary. For example, do not copy any categories to your sandbox. --Taweetham (talk) 14:54, 27 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Please pay attention to formatting and technicality of your edits. I have spent some time to revise you answer in Week 03 above as an example. --Taweetham (talk) 14:55, 27 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Narisaswiki, Thanks for your first draft. Here are some comments.

  1. Please do not sign your sandbox. I have removed the signature and made other cosmetic changes.
  2. Please name your reference and use it for second, third, ... citations so that the reference appears only once in the reference list.
  3. Please use the template {{Chembox}} for your chemical.
  4. Please study WP:MOS and WP:NOT and your template article. I believe that the section "Health and Safety" of your draft article should not be in an encyclopedia.

--Taweetham (talk) 10:13, 3 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

 Done Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 05:08, 19 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 07

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Your work has been reviewed. Majority of the content/formatting is ok. Please carefully move encyclopedic part of your sandbox to article namespace so that the general public can see it. Here are some tips to help you complete the transition to online editing.

  1. Content/Formatting policies
  2. Technicalities
    • Unlike sandbox, all edits will be public immediately and it is important to make sure that all of your edits are acceptable. You may use preview button and provide edit summary to help you.
    • Any "page save" on Wikipedia even outside article namespace is permanently recorded and can be retrieved by the public. Please think carefully before you click save and before you revert other people edits. No work is lost but only the latest version of the page is shown to the public. Deletion of pages (or versions of pages) is only possible by admins if it falls under Wikipedia:Deletion policy. You can request admins to do deletion or other prescribed tasks should the need arises.
    • You may want to set watchlist and notifications so that you can catch up with changes made to your article and your talk page by other editors.
  3. Community interactions
    • You will be interacting with other volunteers when you make edits on the article namespace. Please respect other users in the community and assume good faith.
    • If your work is reverted or modified in any other ways, do not engage in a edit war. Rather use discussion page of your article to settle issues.
    • You may be blocked from Wikipedia for failure to observe community rules.

We hope you enjoy seeing product of your hard work read by many people in the years to come. --Taweetham (talk) 09:26, 20 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

ICCH224 Week 08

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For your information, the grading is based on the criteria below: Wikipedia contributions must meet the minimum quantity requirement to be graded.

Quantity
  • We generally expect at least 5,000 characters (counted by xtools's authorship attribution) to the assigned article unless you upload media file(s) and/or help contribute to classmate article(s).
  • If media are created by you, uploaded to the Wikimedia Commons and used in the article, either 1,000 or 2,000 or 3,000 characters credit will be given, regardless of the number of media uploaded.
    • 1,000 characters credit will be given to sound files(s).
    • 1,000 characters credit will be given to image(s).
    • 2,000 characters credit will be given to video(s).
  • If you help classmate(s) to edit their articles or create media files for uses in classmates' articles, up to 1,000 bytes of your contributions may be counted. Your classmate(s) must remain in the Wikipedia assignment program at the end of the term so that the articles can be counted.
  • All of the work must be created by you and recorded under your username.
  • No outstanding WP:COPVIO issues for both text and media.

The work will be graded based on quality and process criteria:

Quality

Learn from similar articles on Wikipedia (preferably higher quality than the article you are working on).

  • Structure
  • Content
    • All information are relevant to the article and written in encyclopedic tone. (Understand WP:NOT.)
    • Text are clearly supported by reliable sources. (Follow WP:REF.)
    • Do final clean up and proofreading.
  • Formatting & housekeeping
    • Formatting (citation e.g. {{cite web}}}, {{cite journal}} and {{cite book}}, heading styles, bullet/numbered point, font face, table, position/layout/caption of images etc.)
    • Other issues (course tag on talk page of your article, make sure you add categories to your article(s) and media)
    • File names in Wikimedia commons or reference name in the article should be sensible and helpful for other editors.
    • Unnecessary files, pages e.g. redirection are nominated for deletion.
    • To produce desired formatting, learn from source codes of other articles on Wikipedia or ask classmates/other Wikipedians.
Process
  • Complete the assignment on time.
  • Understand Wikipedia articles and policies by independent reading.
  • Take appropriate action on comments given by the community/instructor.
  • Provide edit summary for every edit on the article namespace.
  • If conflict arises, do not engage in edit war. Use talk page/discussion pages to resolve the issue.
  • Help improve classmates' articles.
  • Thank other editors/reviewers of your article.

--Taweetham (talk) 05:08, 19 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Alpha-isomethyl ionones

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Hi Narisaswiki! You sandbox has been moved to the article namespace. Please consider adding appropriate WP:category, WP:internal links and chemical structure to the article. You can also improve the article further by adding more encyclopedic content that is supported by reference(s). --Taweetham (talk) 08:46, 18 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hello and hi Narisaswiki,

I have added some more ids and a structure diagram to Alpha-isomethyl ionones. I have a question though, is this more than one chemical? Is it a whole family of related substances? If it is only one then we should remove that "s" from the end of the name. I also linked it with the Dutch and German pages, which appear to be on one chemical. You can reply here if you wish. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 00:35, 19 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Graeme Bartlett: Thank you for raising this question and adding ids and the chemical structure to the article. Narisaswiki has made her changes to remove "s" from the page. I have also renamed the page to remove "s".--Taweetham (talk) 05:02, 19 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Graeme Bartlett: Thank you so much for your question and your contribution.--Narisaswiki

Hi Narisaswiki! Thanks for making changes to the article. I have posted the grading criteria above and have the following comments at this point.

  1. I only added a few categories from Ionone. I intentionally did not look further so that you can add some others by yourself.
  2. Please see Special:WhatLinksHere/Alpha-isomethyl_ionone and Ionone. Can you create an internal link from other article to the article that you created.
  3. Can you create a talk page for the article. See an example at Talk:Ionone. You can put this article into Wikipedia:WikiProject_Chemicals.

--Taweetham (talk) 05:02, 19 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Narisaswiki! The two links under "other names" go to error. You must be logged in but the reader is not. Gyimhu (talk) 06:35, 19 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Gyimhu: Thank you for letting me know. I will check the citations and update it asap.--Narisaswiki

Hi Narisaswiki! Please see your contribution of 2,827 characters to the article and the talk page of the article. Can you contribute by taking or drawing a relevant photo and upload it to Wikimedia commons? Also, please see if you can address the messages on the talk page. This may lead to additional content to the article. --Taweetham (talk) 00:30, 30 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

This is a reminder that you have not complete the assignment. Please complete it as soon as possible to remain in our program. --Taweetham (talk) 07:27, 6 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your time today. Here is a summary of our meeting.

  1. Check if this is a single compound from three parts of the name and #2.
  2. Check de and nl articles - figures, content (espectiall synthesis).
  3. Elaborate on properties and products.
  4. See if you can make a ball-and-stick model and/or derivative figures for synthesis of the compound. We agree that CH3 group should not be shown explicitly. This will be uploaded to Commons. Please be careful not to upload too many files. Mistakes can be corrected into the files that uploaded earlier. It has to be catagorized properly.

--Taweetham (talk) 07:33, 7 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Just letting you know: I have added the GHS hazard pictograms to the article along with other parameters for Globally Harmonized System of Classification and Labelling of Chemicals in the Chembox Hazards template. Your previous addition of irritant and environmental hazard was invisible because there was "|" in front. This turned them into positional parameters, and not values for the MainHazards parameter. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 04:30, 8 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Graeme Bartlett: Thank you so much for your help. I am very grateful.--Narisaswiki
Hi Narisaswiki: Quick reminder (1) Please login and sign your message above. (2) Please do not forget to add description below the photo in Alpha-isomethyl ionone. We agreed earlier that I left it for you to fill that part to gain charter count. --Taweetham (talk) 05:24, 11 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for your work. You can still contribute your work to Wikipedia after the completion of this course. --Taweetham (talk) 02:06, 18 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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