Template:Did you know nominations/Bangué

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The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 20:39, 20 August 2024 (UTC)

Bangué

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• ... that Bangué, the smallest island of the Bazaruto Archipelago, was formed due to the archipelago itself?

• Source: Everett, B. I.; Van der Elst, R. P.; Schleyer, M. H., eds. "Geomorphology and the Terrestrial and Oceanographic Setting". in Everett, B. I.; Van der Elst, R. P.; Schleyer, M. H., eds. (2008). A Natural History of the Bazaruto Archipelago, Mozambique (PDF). Durban: South African Association for Marine Biological Research. ISBN 9780869890820.

https://biblioteca.biofund.org.mz/wp-content/uploads/2019/01/1548936139-F0838.A%20natural%20history%20of%20the%20Bazaruto%20Archipelago.pdf

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Created by Generalissima (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 66 past nominations.

Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 16:44, 2 August 2024 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook eligibility:

• Cited:
• Interesting:
• Other problems: - I would recommend the hook be reworded since it is a bit confusing in my view.

QPQ: Done.

Overall: New enough, long enough, plagiarism free, QPQ is completed. I believe that the hook is interesting, but could use a reword. I am presuming that the source for the hook is from the section pertaining to the wave action causing the island to emerge? I'm spitballing here, but "arisen through wave action" could possibly be something interesting to be used as a hook. Ornithoptera (talk) 01:46, 3 August 2024 (UTC)

• @Generalissima: Please address the above. Z1720 (talk) 04:14, 9 August 2024 (UTC)

• Marking for closure: Generalissima has not addressed concerns. Z1720 (talk) 19:34, 15 August 2024 (UTC)
  • @Z1720: May I have an hour or two to address these concerns? I was rather busy and forgot about this. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 19:35, 15 August 2024 (UTC)

• @Ornithoptera: Fair enough! How about ALT1: ... that Bangué, the smallest island of the Bazaruto Archipelago, was formed by ocean waves shaped by the surrounding archipelago? Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 19:37, 15 August 2024 (UTC)
  • per response provided, awaiting Ornithoptera :) theleekycauldron (talk • she/her) 18:38, 19 August 2024 (UTC)
    • Seems good to me, approving ALT1! Thank you for your time Generalissima! Ornithoptera (talk) 18:48, 19 August 2024 (UTC)