Talk:The Dreamscape/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Albacore (talk · contribs) 14:46, 21 April 2013 (UTC)

• I will review this article shortly. Albacore (talk) 14:46, 21 April 2013 (UTC)
• Lead and infobox look good. No DAB links but a dead link. Files look OK. References are all properly formatted.

• Olivia receives an email from someone who claims to be John Scott, listing an address for her to visit. Is Scott someone important here, or is he just some random guy? If he is important, can you explain who he is?

• Can you link "hallucinogen"?

• Why do you use "Young" to describe Mark but everywhere else you use first names? Same with Morales.

• as well as other recent fringe cases what do you mean "fringe cases"?

• This placed it in third place in its timeslot. Can you find out what was second?

• place among viewers aged 18-49 18–49.

• I feel like the SFScope quote is far too long and should be cut down for copyright reasons. I also feel like the length and amount of IGN quotes should be reduced for the same reasons.

I will look over the article again when these are responded to. Albacore (talk) 15:52, 21 April 2013 (UTC)

I believe I have addressed all of your concerns. Thanks for reviewing! Ruby 2010/2013 20:58, 21 April 2013 (UTC)

• Pass. Albacore (talk) 22:31, 21 April 2013 (UTC)