Talk:Sandra Nankoma

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Fixing structure

A couple of thoughts: the "Personal life" section is a jumble of three sentences that relate to three different areas (birth/growing up; activism; education), none of which really belongs in a section entitled "Personal life".

There is inconsistent use of the names "Sandy Soul" and "Sandra Nankoma". Also, encyclopedic style should refer to the subject by last name, not first name.

As noted in the tag, capitalization is very non-standard. In general the flow, wording, phrasing, and continuity of thought should be reviewed.

There are also spaces missing after punctuation.