Talk:Justin Yu
Justin Yu has been listed as one of the Video games good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: October 29, 2024. (Reviewed version). |
A fact from Justin Yu appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 8 February 2024 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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Did you know nomination
[edit]- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 18:07, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
- ... that the cellist in MIT's video game orchestra is the current Classic Tetris World Champion Justin Yu? Source: https://news.mit.edu/2023/justin-yu-wins-tetris-world-championship-1027
- ALT1: ... that Justin Yu achieved the earliest possible game crash in classic Tetris only days after Willis Gibson's first beat the game? Source: https://www.gamesradar.com/it-took-34-years-for-someone-to-beat-tetris-now-2-more-people-have-done-it-days-apart-from-each-other/
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Sugarbush Hill
Created by Johnson524 (talk). Self-nominated at 06:55, 16 January 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Justin Yu; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
- Article created 12 January. No issues of copyvio or plagiarism. All sources appear reliable. QPQ is done. Hooks are interesting and sourced. I think the primary hook is great. Looks ready to go! Thriley (talk) 20:09, 20 January 2024 (UTC)
GA Review
[edit]The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Nominator: Johnson524 (talk · contribs) 18:30, 2 August 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: LunaEclipse (talk · contribs) 13:34, 12 September 2024 (UTC)
I'm also reviewing this one. School might get in the way, so don't expect me to respond immediately. 💽 LunaEclipse 💽 ⚧ 【=◈︿◈=】 13:34, 12 September 2024 (UTC)
- @LunaEclipse: Thank you so much for taking up another Tetris article review! Take all the time you need, and cheers! Johnson524 01:35, 13 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Johnson524: Apologies for leaving you in the dust. I'll probably start reviewing by this weekend. 💽 LunaEclipse 💽 ⚧ 【=◈︿◈=】 14:14, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
- @LunaEclipse: Hello, I hope you're doing well! Just wanted to check if you still wanted to do this review since its been a month. If you are, no rush! Just in case you weren't, I wanted to ask so another editor could take over. Cheers! Johnson524 03:35, 20 October 2024 (UTC)
- Johnson524, yeah, I'd rather have someone else do it at this point. — 💽 LunaEclipse 💽 ⚧ 【=◈︿◈=】 10:01, 20 October 2024 (UTC)
- @LunaEclipse: Hello, I hope you're doing well! Just wanted to check if you still wanted to do this review since its been a month. If you are, no rush! Just in case you weren't, I wanted to ask so another editor could take over. Cheers! Johnson524 03:35, 20 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Johnson524: Apologies for leaving you in the dust. I'll probably start reviewing by this weekend. 💽 LunaEclipse 💽 ⚧ 【=◈︿◈=】 14:14, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
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- Answering the request for a different reviewer.
Image review
[edit]- File:Justin Yu CTWC 2023.jpg Looks correctly licensed, though I have to say I'm not used to GDrives being used to share images.
- File:2023 CTWC finals.jpg - On wider displays this crashes into the infobox. May want to move it down a little. Also, fixed image sized are not recommended per MOS:IMGSIZE.
- Done
Prose review
[edit]- which helped him to become the first person to reach Tetris's late-game glitched color levels, as well unintentionally help him in his major at MIT. - "help" ... "help". Perhaps rephrase to be less clunky?
- Done
- What's the point in introducing the CTWC acronym if you don't use it? I see several instances where Classic Tetris World Championship is spelled out after the acronym is introduced.
- Done
- or when the maximum amount of four rows are cleared at once in-game - You already defined "tetris" above.
- Not done I'm sorry, I'm not exactly sure what your concern/what you want me to do here is? Johnson524 05:27, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
- You have "perfect Tetris game" consisting of only the highest scoring line-clears called tetrises" and "trying to focus on completing tetrises, or when the maximum amount of four rows are cleared at once in-game" two paragraphs alter. Given the brevity of the article, such repetition stands out. I'd nix one, if possible. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 09:24, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
- Done Ohhhh I get it now Johnson524 17:27, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
- You have "perfect Tetris game" consisting of only the highest scoring line-clears called tetrises" and "trying to focus on completing tetrises, or when the maximum amount of four rows are cleared at once in-game" two paragraphs alter. Given the brevity of the article, such repetition stands out. I'd nix one, if possible. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 09:24, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
- Not done I'm sorry, I'm not exactly sure what your concern/what you want me to do here is? Johnson524 05:27, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
Source review
[edit]- Per Wikipedia:Citing sources, reference style should be consistent. I see a mixture of sentence case and title case for the articles cited.
- The majority of the article is sentence case, the only part I can see that's title case is the competitive record results, and that's because that's exactly how the title is formatted in the source. I've actually never heard this concern before, so I apologize for asking, but can this stay as is? Cheers! Johnson524 05:27, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
- GA Criterion 2a, "it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline;" In this case, the relevent sentence is "Editors may use any citation method they choose, but it should be consistent within an article." It tends to slide at GA, but it does get caught at FA reviews ("The translated title for Chen 2009 isn't capitalized the same as the others", ""Quick Spin" should be "Quick spin" for consistent capitalisation", Check the capitalisation on article titles, which goes awry in places. Most are in sentence case, but for some (FNs 3, 6 and 127) caps have sneaked in there). In this case, I don't think it's a deal breaker, but it is something that would help improve the article. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 09:33, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
- Done For the most part, the only titles I didn't change were the competitive record ones along the line of "CTM May 2022 Masters Event" and so on, as these seemed like more formal titles than anything. Johnson524 17:27, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
- GA Criterion 2a, "it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline;" In this case, the relevent sentence is "Editors may use any citation method they choose, but it should be consistent within an article." It tends to slide at GA, but it does get caught at FA reviews ("The translated title for Chen 2009 isn't capitalized the same as the others", ""Quick Spin" should be "Quick spin" for consistent capitalisation", Check the capitalisation on article titles, which goes awry in places. Most are in sentence case, but for some (FNs 3, 6 and 127) caps have sneaked in there). In this case, I don't think it's a deal breaker, but it is something that would help improve the article. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 09:33, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
- The majority of the article is sentence case, the only part I can see that's title case is the competitive record results, and that's because that's exactly how the title is formatted in the source. I've actually never heard this concern before, so I apologize for asking, but can this stay as is? Cheers! Johnson524 05:27, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
- Not a GA criterion, but I would recommend archiving your online references to future-proof the article. I see you've done some, but those news articles that form the bulk of the content are not covered
- Internet Archive bot currently isn't working, but I'll try to get this done as soon as it's fixed. Johnson524 05:27, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
- Is Classic Tetris Monthly a publisher or a work? The title makes it sound like a periodical, which would be a work.
- Done
- References appear to support the cited material.
- Earwig gives 13%, but these are mostly competition names.
Conclusion
[edit]This article is very tightly written, and seems quite solid for its subject. Just a few nitpicks. Also, be advised that I made some edits while reading through. Please review. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 19:06, 23 October 2024 (UTC)
- Pinging Johnson524, because I don't think Christie Bot gave a notification that a new review was underway. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 12:51, 24 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Crisco 1492: Thank you very much for taking up this review! I will get to the changes suggested shortly. Cheers! Johnson524 13:05, 24 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Crisco 1492: OK, all the corrections I could do are complete now! I think I had a question or two on some, but all in all the article should be set. Thank you so much again for taking up this review, cheers! Johnson524 05:27, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
- Hi Johnson524, I've responded above. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 09:34, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Crisco 1492: Should be all set now, cheers! Johnson524 17:27, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
- Congratulations. I am happy to say that this article meets the good article criteria! — Chris Woodrich (talk) 17:39, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Crisco 1492: Should be all set now, cheers! Johnson524 17:27, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
- Hi Johnson524, I've responded above. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 09:34, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
Jonas Cup Victory
[edit]fractal recently won the inaugural DAS-only jonas cup event at the portland retro gaming expo [where the world championship used to be held], a historic achievement. its a deeply celebrated outcome for a very special event 72.0.177.41 (talk) 02:09, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
Move page to Fractal (gamer)
[edit]When people in the Tetris community talk about, or to Fractal, nobody refers to him as Justin, or, only rarely when introducing him in a YouTube video.. In this talk page I use the name "Fractal", because it would honestly be impolite to do so otherwise. All his social accounts go by "Fractal". To refer to him as Justin Yu, like on a Wikipedia page is just poor manners. Not only that, it doesn't follow Wikipedia's policy of using common names. We don't default to the government name of living people, we use the name they actually go by in the field they're known for. This is true for pen names (J.K Rowling), stage names (Marylin Monroe), ring names (Hulk Hogan), and yes, gamertags, like with Faker and Turbopolsa. Using their government names violates Wikipedia policy, prior precedent and its just kinda weird. Stolenshortsword (talk) 09:29, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- See Talk:Willis Gibson#move page to Blue Scuti for centralized discussion. Johnson524 02:43, 4 November 2024 (UTC)
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