Talk:Caffey family murders

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... that the sole survivor of the Caffey family murders escaped his burning house and crawled for an hour to a neighbor's following the crime?

Source: https://abcnews.go.com/US/shooting-arson-survivor-family-slain-forgives-daughter-killers/story?id=16654379

https://cbn.com/article/sin/terry-caffey-crime-passion

- ALT1: ... that the plan for the Caffey family murders began with a Myspace page?

Source: https://cbn.com/article/sin/terry-caffey-crime-passion

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Created by Jolielover (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

jolielover♥talk 14:33, 23 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

Two issues that I have identified. The first is subjective: naming an otherwise non-notable victim of a crime like this in a hook is not my favorite option. I would encourage rephrasing ALT0 to swap out Caffey's name to "sole survivor" or something of that ilk. The second hook is a bit of a mischaracterization, as the discovery of the Myspace page was a catalyst for some of the grievance involved in the crime but not really integral to the plan (going by how CBN describes it). I recommend nixing ALT1 and hearing your perspective on ALT0. Otherwise, I think all is in order. ~ Pbritti (talk) 16:49, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Pbritti: Thanks for the comment, and I agree, the second hook is not my favourite. I've adjusted ALT0 accordingly, let me know if anything else needs to be done! jolielover♥talk 16:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Earwig gave some high readings but those look like quotations causing false positives. No other outstanding issues. Nice work! ~ Pbritti (talk) 17:00, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]