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GA Review

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Passed. Vestrian24Bio 07:50, 17 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Nominator: OlifanofmrTennant (talk · contribs) 09:25, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Vestrian24Bio (talk · contribs) 08:54, 13 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]


Hi! I will be reviewing this article, expect the initial remarks soon! Vestrian24Bio 08:54, 13 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

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@OlifanofmrTennant:

  • EARWIG shows 13.0% - violations unlikely.
  • According to link-dispenser,
    • 2 refs need archive links.
  • References are looking perfect!
  • Isn't there any kind of promotional poster available...?
    • I would suggest including all 4 episode-posters in the infobox using {{Multiple image | border = infobox}} template.
      • Only part 4 had a poster, its been added.

Vestrian24Bio 09:19, 13 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Done Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 10:39, 13 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]


  • Add featured music (|music=) and runtime (|length=) to the infobox.  Done
  • Add alt text to the infobox image.  Done
  • In the guest appearances part, mention which part they appeared in.  Not done
    • The list is too long to comfortably do that, some appeared in multiple and some doubled up on characters.
  • The page is in categories Pages using infobox television episode with incorrectly formatted values and Pages using infobox television episode with unnecessary list markup - Some parameters (|director=, |writer=, |story=, |teleplay=, |narrator=, |presenter=, |music=, |photographer=, |editor=, |production=, |release_date=, and |airdate=) have a pre-defined plainlist formatting, they don't need the template {{Plainlist}} again - fix it.  Done
  • In the first sentence American superhero television series  Done
  • Include that this is the ninth graphic novel in the series.
  • Split the first sentence after ... series The Flash..  Done
  • Add the overall episode count in the series to the remaining sentence  Done
  • Move The series centers on Barry Allen / The Flash, a crime-scene investigator who gains superhuman speed which he uses to fight criminals, including others who also have superhuman abilities. to the end of the first paragraph and maybe add a premise of the finale.  Done
  • Add summaries of development, filming, viewership and reception to the lead section.  Done
  • What are the titles (Reunions, The Blues, Changes and Finale) in the plot section...?
    • The subtitle for the episode

Vestrian24Bio 07:36, 14 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]


  • No need for a full stop in the infobox image caption as its not a proper sentence.  Done
  • In part 4, link to Cobalt Blue (Arrowverse) instead.
    • Removed link as Eddie is already linked and Cobalt Blue (Arrowverse) takes you to the same section
  • In the "Development and filming" section, link Negative, Part Two.  Done
  • Along with six days before wrapping and shutting down one day before, can't the relevant dates be added to it.
    • Gustin didn't reveal the dates only the timeframes
  • Link to Speed Force (Arrowverse) and Negative Speed Force in the "Devising endings" section.  Done
  • Change all links of Speed Force to Speed Force (Arrowverse). (infobox & part two)  Done
  • In the "Character returns and callbacks to past seasons" section, In addition, the primary antagonists of seasons ....  Done
  • In the "Casting" section,
    • Can't there be more images (at least the returning antagonists - a and Karan Oberoi (if available)).  Done
    • No need for a ref on the image caption. Also, it should have a specific alt text.  Done
    • Grant Gustin should be linked as its a distinct sub-section. Same for Oliver Queen / Green Arrow / The Spectre also.
    • Link to Caitlin Snow (Arrowverse) instead.  Done
    • Link Eddie Thawne / Cobalt Blue as whole.  Done
    • Create a link to Henry Allen (Arrowverse).  Done
    • In the 3rd paragraph Karan Oberoi. - there's a full stop instead of a comma.  Done
  • Throughout the article both Hunter Zolomon (Arrowverse) and Zoom (Arrowverse) are used, only use any one of them at all occasions to be consistent.  Done
  • In the lead instead of 430 thousand viewers, just say 430,000 viewers.  Done
  • Add author's first and last names to ref 42.  Done
  • Writing for Den of Geek - who wrote... (mention Lacy Baugher)  Done
  • Format the last part as following,  Done
== References ==
=== Notes ===
{{notelist}}
=== Citations ===
{{reflist}}
== External links ==

@OlifanofmrTennant: That's all. Vestrian24Bio 13:09, 16 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Vestrian24Bio: done Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 05:23, 17 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
What's the reason for moving Cosnett's image, it seems irrelevant to the section. Vestrian24Bio 06:48, 17 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Vestrian24Bio: Moved back Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 07:31, 17 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • Source spot-check: pass

All else good, passing for GA. Vestrian24Bio 07:49, 17 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Final review

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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