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Your submission at Articles for creation: Lalit Dalmia (December 20)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This submission is not suitable for Wikipedia. Please read 'What Wikipedia is not' for more information.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Business profile with the ordinary announcements or notices used as public relations, both the information and sources here cannot establish notability as it's not what we consider substantial to our article policies (whatever claims are made or wherever published, and which case the sources are simply indiscriminate publicity).

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SwisterTwister talk 07:36, 20 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Lalit Dalmia (December 29)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KJP1 was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The subject may be notable - I don't know. But the very non-neutral tone needs re-writing; "his exquisite collection", "immense response", "innovative launch activities" - unless someone is saying this and is being quoted, and the sources don't, such promotional language is not appropriate for Wikipedia.

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KJP1 (talk) 09:14, 29 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Spatel2209, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! KJP1 (talk) 09:14, 29 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Lalit Dalmia has been accepted

Lalit Dalmia, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

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Andy Mabbett (Pigsonthewing); Talk to Andy; Andy's edits 11:51, 31 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: M-tech Informatics (March 26)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Joe Decker was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies, the golden rule and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and Help:Introduction to referencing/1), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The key issue here is WP:CORPDEPTH, most of the articles here are either not independent, or are press releases, or cover routine announcements from the company. Look for Also remove promotional wording from the article, such as the "excellent" with regard to post sale services.

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joe decker ^talk 22:04, 26 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]