User talk:Spacebender

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Chzz ► 19:46, 1 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation

The Witness: From the Balcony of Room 306, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

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Shearonink (talk) 07:33, 6 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I edited the article to bring it into line with various Wikipedia guidelines. The major remaining issue is that there are insufficient inline citations to back up various statements. There is now a "Description" (of the documentary) section that is completely referenced, please try to add references to that section. Please reference from reliable sources any claims or assertions...for instance, the fact that the movie is shown at the National Civil Rights Museum...well, for that statement to stay in the article there should be cited proof, maybe from a newspaper article or magazine column, etc....that sort of thing. I am going to leave a 'Welcome' and some helpful links here on your talkpage...that way you'll know where to find information that will assist you in improving this article. Good luck, Shearonink (talk) 07:56, 6 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome

Welcome!

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Some links...

...that should help you improve your article:

Hope this helps, Shearonink (talk) 07:57, 6 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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