User talk:LPDan

Jack Berry (American Musician) moved to draftspace

An article you recently created, Jack Berry (American Musician), is not suitable as written to remain published. It appears there is a WP:UPE or WP:COI conflict. Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, and have addressed the UPE/COI issue, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. As per WP policy, please do not move into mainspace yourself. Onel5969 ^{TT me} 14:56, 23 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Thanks for the input

This is my first article, so I'm sorry if I've made mistakes. From what I've read, you have three main issues that need fixing? One is I have a conflict of interest or have been paid. I've been a fan of Jack's since he was a kid in the Garbage-Men band and they were on NPR Science Friday. We are not friends or business partners. Is that disqualifying? How can I possibly correct that?

Also, 'information that can't be referenced should be removed'. I have worked really hard to collect as many reference links from the info I looked up. How many more do I need to qualify? Should every sentence have a citiation? I used other musician articles as guides, many of them local, and tried to follow their lead and templates as examples.

The other problem seems to be notability. From my work on the article, he seems to be referenced in several other Wikipedia articles, and in a Google search, his articles ,videos, etc. take up two pages. He has national recognition and media coverage. I've gone through all citations and links out and they seem to fit. Maybe it is the quality of the references? Can you be more specific?

Also, 'do not move into mainspace yourself'. In the article how to move out of sandbox, I followed the instructions as decscribed in the article. What did I do incorrectly here?

I worked really hard on this article for weeks.

Thanks for any more detailed information on making the article better. LPDan (talk) 15:42, 23 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jack Berry (American Musician) (October 10)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Ingenuity was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please remove all inappropriate external links from the body of the article (Youtube, Spotify, Amazon). Notability is not inherited; just because their band is notable does not mean that each artist is.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Jack Berry (American Musician) and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

— Ingenuity (talk • contribs) 13:14, 10 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, LPDan! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! — Ingenuity (talk • contribs) 13:14, 10 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Jack Berry (American Musician) has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Jack Berry (American Musician). Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 14:22, 5 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Jack Berry (musician)

Hello, LPDan. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Jack Berry".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. ✗plicit 06:25, 17 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]