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Your submission at Articles for creation: Ditte Maria Bjerg (January 24)
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Hello, Cartierhockey!
Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Taabii (talk) 08:57, 24 January 2025 (UTC)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Ditte Maria Bjerg (January 24)
[edit]![](http://up.wiki.x.io/wikipedia/commons/thumb/7/7e/AFC-Logo_Decline.svg/50px-AFC-Logo_Decline.svg.png)
- If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Ditte Maria Bjerg and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
- If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
- If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.
- Hi @Cartierhockey, you came onto #wikipedia-en-help earlier today asking about this draft. I am just following up.
- Your draft has two issues:
- It's written in a promotional way with phrases like "pursued her passion" and "commitment to collaborative artmaking" and "innovative approach". Wikipedia should be written in a factual tone, not promoting the subject of the article. Check out Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Words to watch for some words to avoid.
- We're looking for significant coverage in multiple, independent, reliable, secondary sources which are not based on interviews with her nor just links to her own organisation Global Stories.
- Hope that helps, let me know if you have further questions though. qcne (talk) 15:50, 24 January 2025 (UTC)