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Wildlife of South Sudan

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:12, 22 August 2011 (UTC)

• ... that the Wildlife Conservation Society (WCS) reports southeast Sudan still has a record migration of 1.3 million antelopes....?

It's a little unclear what the article is about given the main link. Perhaps:

ALT1: ... that the wildlife of South Sudan sees high levels of animal migration and features the wettest area of land on the planet?

Not entirely happy about the wetland link there though. violet/riga _^[talk] 17:13, 7 August 2011 (UTC)

• Reviewed: If you reviewed another article before listing this DYK nomination, put it here

Created by Rosiestep (talk), Nvvchar (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 10:20, 4 August 2011 (UTC)

Length and date check out. Hook needs some work. Duplicate Detector sees a bit of poor paraphrasing, especially the first two entries. I have an ALT to suggest as well.

ALT2: ... that South Sudan may be the location of "the biggest migration of large mammals on Earth"?

Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:26, 10 August 2011 (UTC)

No response in 10 days. Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:36, 20 August 2011 (UTC)

Rosie is a regular, she usually responds to concerns, I have notified her on her talk page. Gatoclass (talk) 10:54, 21 August 2011 (UTC)

I had notified Dr. B, but he either missed it or... Crisco 1492 (talk) 13:19, 21 August 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the note Crisco. I was unaware of the issue, which I've dealt with now through some rewording. --Rosiestep (talk) 18:43, 21 August 2011 (UTC)

Good to go. Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:59, 21 August 2011 (UTC)