Talk:Velepromet camp
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 01:52, 18 September 2014 (UTC)
I'll do this one. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 01:52, 18 September 2014 (UTC)
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Re ICTY categorization of Velepromet, it is referenced simply as "Velepromet" or as "Velepromet facility" ([1]) while the International Court of Justice refers to it either as "Velepromet" or "Velepromet prison camp" ([2]). I managed to find correct parameter allowing different designation of the facility and applied it accordingly. Not sure what to do with the category though. There appears to be no particularly correct category in place, so should this one be simply removed? I am aware that this is matter of labels applied (as in cases of "massacres") that does not necessarily have anything to do with number of victims nor it should imply that killing/unlawfully holding captive any number of civilians/pows is tolerable (let alone acceptable) by any stretch of imagination - but I have no clue what to do in terms of categorization here.
- The only thing that should probably be done is renaming the category, not something you can control.
The redundant source is now removed, and the missing one (Ramet) added.--Tomobe03 (talk) 16:32, 19 September 2014 (UTC)
- Listing, well done. Regards, Peacemaker67 (send... over) 00:46, 20 September 2014 (UTC)
Death toll
[edit]Croatia's legal team claimed in Croatia v. Serbia that 350 inmates were killed at Velepromet, but the ICJ could not confirm this number (see page 76 of the verdict). This should probably be mentioned in the article, as the death toll currently presented here is the cumulative total of people that went missing in eastern Slavonia and are presumed to have passed through Velepromet at some point, regardless of whether they were actually killed there or not. 23 editor (talk) 23:21, 25 April 2015 (UTC)
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