Talk:Six Feet Under (Billie Eilish song)

Six Feet Under (Billie Eilish song) has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: July 13, 2020. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

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Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 14:28, 13 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

DarklyShadows I'm happy to see that you've unblocked yourself. I'll start my review soon. LOVI 33 14:28, 13 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Infobox and lead

Cover art needs alt text.
"Finneas O'Connell wrote and solely" → "Finneas O'Connell, Eilish's brother, solely wrote and"
Maybe add something about it's lyrical content after the pop ballad mention.
"it was certified platinum in Canada by Music Canada (MC)" → "Commercially, it was certified platinum by Music Canada (MC)"

Background and composition

"on Soundcloud" → "through Eilish's SoundCloud"
"Eilish's second ever single." → "her second single."
"According to sheet music website Musicnotes.com" → "According sheet music published by Hal Leonard Music Publishing on Musicnotes.com" with target
Target A₃ to A (musical note)
Target D₅ to D (musical note)
"The song has been" → "The song is"
"and delicate as" → "and delicate like"
"Lyrics include: "Help, I lost myself again/But I remember you/Don’t come back; it won’t end well/But I wish you’d tell me too."[7]" this sentence seems redundant as you are not analyzing the lyrics. Remove it.

Reception

"When it was released" → "Upon it's release"
""Six Feet Under" has been awarded" → "The song has been awarded"
Remove Music Canada from the last sentence, already mentioned in previous sentence

Promotion

"The music video was directed by Eilish. The video shows" → "It was directed by Eilish and shows"
[14][2] refs need to be in numerical order
""Six Feet Under" was used in" → "The song was used in"

Track Listing

Change title to "Track listing"
"Remix EP" → "Digital EP – Remixes" with target
Add total length for Remix EP

Personnel

Target Tidal to Tidal (service)

Certifications

MOS:TABLECAPTION, probably: Certifications and sales for "Six Feet Under"

References

Make sure all these are archived using the tool
Copyvio score looks good at 20.6%
I think you misspelled the authors name in ref 5
Target YouTube to itself in ref 14
Target NME to itself in ref 15
Remove target to iTunes in ref 17

Final comments and verdict

On hold until issues are fixed. It was great reviewing one of your articles again. I hope to do another soon! LOVI 33 19:41, 13 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

LOVI33 All the problems should be addressed! The Ultimate Boss (talk) 21:51, 13 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Great, I'll pass it now! LOVI 33 22:47, 13 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]