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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 14:28, 3 July 2014 (UTC)
Right, let's take a look....will jot notes below....cheers, Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 14:28, 3 July 2014 (UTC)
- It can range from 15.1 to 17.3 hands (61 to 71 inches,... - the "it" does not agree with the preceding it exactly - maybe reword the pronoun?
--Rephrased, better? --MTBW
Gray is found, but is much more rare,...- "found" ("Hey I found a Gray horse!!!") - sounds funny...actually why not trim to just, "Gray is much rarer," or "-much less common"
--Done --MTBW
- In 1958, it was decided to merge all of the half-blood horses in France... - err, any idea on who was doing the deciding?
--Source is unclear, presumably the entity that governs stud books, but unclear in original source. I will ping @Tsaag Valren: and see if she can help. --MTBW
- No sign of Tsaag, but I ran a translation again, and rewrote that bit. Better? --MTBW
- Hmm, given this is GA not FA, I think I'll let it slide. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 03:21, 16 August 2014 (UTC)
- No sign of Tsaag, but I ran a translation again, and rewrote that bit. Better? --MTBW
This website...missing the 'ç' ...just a typo or some weird spelling variant?- Weird spelling variant. --MTBW
Otherwise looking good. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 14:51, 3 July 2014 (UTC)
- Dana appears to be busy, but I will see if I can address your concerns here. But may be a day or two, big weekend in USA. Montanabw(talk) 16:34, 4 July 2014 (UTC)
- @Dana boomer:@Casliber:@Montanabw:I'm just stopping by to check the status of this review. It has been three weeks since it was last touched. Cheers, TLSuda (talk) 16:28, 25 July 2014 (UTC)
- I think I fixed everything raised here, but was there additional work needed? Dana appears to be swamped IRL, so I'll take over and do any fixes required. Montanabw(talk) 17:06, 25 July 2014 (UTC)
- I'll take another look soon. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 21:42, 25 July 2014 (UTC)
1. Well written?:
- Prose quality:
- Manual of Style compliance:
2. Factually accurate and verifiable?:
- References to sources:
- Citations to reliable sources, where required:
- No original research:
3. Broad in coverage?:
- Major aspects:
- Focused:
4. Reflects a neutral point of view?:
- Fair representation without bias:
5. Reasonably stable?
- No edit wars, etc. (Vandalism does not count against GA):
6. Illustrated by images, when possible and appropriate?:
- Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
I think enough has been done on this article to consider it at a GA waypoint and fulfulling of criteria. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 03:21, 16 August 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks, Cas, Did we ping @Dana boomer: on this? She's been pretty inactive this summer, but I hope she will be glad it's got the green! Montanabw(talk) 04:24, 16 August 2014 (UTC)