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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Quency Williams/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 09:23, 22 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Notes

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  • added cfl linebackers and def linemen cats, rem american linebackers (unless you had a reason for it being there)
  • Added past teams note and astericks to infobox
  • "University, and saw" remove comma
    • Done.
  • "He played in every year at the school," that makes it sound like he played ar auburn for 100 years
    • Hah...changed to "in every year of his at the school" - is that better?
  • any college stats
  • The raiders section needs revised. PFA says he signed in 1984 infobox will need revised too
  • "In 1986, Williams was contacted " source says 3 months after departure could have been 85 technically
    • Changed to "Williams was later contacted"
  • it should say he was released by the lions without playing in a game.
    • Added.
  • cfl career totals
    • Added.
  • "on September 8" this is kind of pedantic but how do we know the source wasn't reporting yesterday's transactions
    • You're right - that appears to have been Sep. 7's transactions - changed.
  • "professional truck driver" sounds like a sport. Suggest just putting tow truck operator like the article said.
    • Haha...changed.
  • add grey cup to lead
    • Added.
  • whered u get his death date of 23, pfa says 28 and obit says 24
    • I remember there had been some IPs messing with that date...but anyway, since there's contradictions I just changed it to "April 2022"

Thats all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 09:50, 22 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 14:52, 24 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]