Talk:H. C. Westermann

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Major Edits

Much of this article was written like someone's personal thesis. To the best of my ability, I pared down the article's superfluous, theoretical, and editorializing content. Please keep in mind these kinds of edits when editing this article further; this is an encyclopedic entry, not an artistic assessment. Chargoe (talk) 17:44, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I realized my tone is a bit harsh here, which I really did not intend. The more subjective parts were well-wrought and thoughtful IMO, but not in line with some of Wikipedia's content policies. Chargoe (talk) 17:52, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Potential Additions

This article may benefit from more embedded or linked images to Westermann's artwork. Although there are thoughtful descriptions of some works, it may be useful to create pages or Wikimedia links to some of the prominently-mentioned artworks. Chargoe (talk) 17:47, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]