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GA Review

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Reviewer: Vami IV (talk · contribs) 09:37, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]


Opening statement

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In reviews I conduct, I may make small copyedits. These will only be limited to spelling and punctuation (removal of double spaces and such). I will only make substantive edits that change the flow and structure of the prose if I previously suggested and it is necessary. For replying to Reviewer comment, please use  Done,  Fixed, plus Added,  Not done,  Doing..., or minus Removed, followed by any comment you'd like to make. I will be crossing out my comments as they are redressed, and only mine. A detailed, section-by-section review will follow. —♠Vami_IV†♠ 09:37, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Vami IV: Thanks for the review. I have addressed all your comments above. epicgenius (talk) 15:20, 5 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Prose

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  • that is inspired was inspired.
    •  Done
  • as well as above the 18th and 22nd Shorten "as well as" to "and".
    •  Done
  • it consists of a recessed double-height arch, with elaborately carved spandrels at the top of the arch. Consider "at its top".
    •  Done
  • these doorways are located within doorways topped by pediments and clocks. Replace the first "doorways" with something else.
  • "Features": Atlas Obscura, which uses user-generated material, is not a reliable source.
  • Move the image in "Initial structure" to the right.
    •  Done
  • "Twenty-six Broadway was once to oil what 1600 Pennsylvania Avenue [the White House] is to politics." Just use the White Houses's address to link the White House here.
    •  Done
  • every cent any of [Standard Oil's subsidiaries] made found its way to 26 Broadway" reads weird
  • After World War I, Walter C. Teagle Who?
    •  Done
  • (died 1928) Delete.
  • The content of "Tenats#Former" should be carefully inserted into "History".
    •  Done
  • A third, the Urban Assembly School of Business for Young Women, is a high school serving grades 9-12. When did this open?
    •  Done 2005.
  • Starting in 2008, the PS 234 elementary school was supposed to have used [...] subsequently deemed "not appropriate for kindergartners" This would make this school not a current tenant. Shorten and send this sentence and its citation into "History"
    •  Done
  • [67]:540 This is the only instance of this form of citation in the article. The [67] part also already has the page number(s).
    • minus Removed

GA progress

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Good Article review progress box
Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.