Wikipedia:Peer review/Laptop/archive1
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I think it needs general review.
Thanks, Kozuch (talk) 12:05, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
- Comments from « Milk's Favorite Cøøkie ( talk / contribs)
- Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. - Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text.
- Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked.
- Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article.
- The two tags as soon as you see the article tell alot. It needs citations.
- This section needs a cleanup.
- This section needs an update.
- This section has no citation whatsoever.
- Expand the "Advantages" section. I'm sure there is more to it then that.
- That's all for now. « Milk's Favorite Cøøkie ( talk / contribs) 19:38, 17 May 2008 (UTC)