Wikipedia:Peer review/Camp Fire (2018)/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to get this article up to GA status but can you give me suggestions on how to upgrade it? 
Thanks, I love rpgs (talk) 01:22, 17 December 2018 (UTC)
- A couple suggestions:
- You can move the lists in the Timeline section into a table or something, because the list breaks up the prose.
- Good job on the loss of life & structural damage tables!
- Oh, and, on the photo of the Bay Bridge in this section, you can add the smog explanation to the caption.
- I hope these suggestions will give you some ideas!
– Ben79487 (talk contribs) 00:54, 1 January 2019 (UTC)