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Your submission at Articles for creation: Robert Edward McMurtrie (January 30)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by AlphaBetaGamma were:

The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 01:58, 30 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hello and thank you for taking a look at this. I have rewritten using your guide and hope that conforms. I have also added the citations as recommended. I haver a small issue that I cannot seem to delete the references I originally added and they appear under the revised and conforming References. Any tips as I can't see the source code to delete these!! Thank you WoyWoyChild (talk) 05:12, 30 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, WoyWoyChild! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 01:58, 30 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]