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Your submission at Articles for creation: Paul Hamlyn Foundation (February 8)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Dreamy Jazz were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to User:SwoodwardPHF/sandbox/Paul Hamlyn Foundation and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Dreamy Jazz 🎷 ^{talk to me | my contributions} 11:51, 8 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, SwoodwardPHF! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Dreamy Jazz 🎷 ^{talk to me | my contributions} 11:51, 8 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Managing a conflict of interest

Hello, SwoodwardPHF. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about on Wikipedia, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a conflict of interest may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for organizations for more information. We ask that you:

avoid editing or creating articles about yourself, your family, friends, company, organization or competitors;
propose changes on the talk pages of affected articles (see the {{request edit}} template);
disclose your conflict of interest when discussing affected articles (see WP:DISCLOSE);
avoid linking to your organization's website in other articles (see WP:SPAM);
do your best to comply with Wikipedia's content policies.

In addition, you must disclose your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution which forms all or part of work for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation (see WP:PAID).

Also please note that editing for the purpose of advertising, publicising, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you. Dreamy Jazz 🎷 ^{talk to me | my contributions} 11:55, 8 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Dreamy Jazz:), thanks for reviewing my entry so quickly - I did wonder if that was going to be the case... Re conflict of interest, I understand I should clarify I am a staff member of PHF but wasn't clear how to do that in my user profile. Our senior leadership team has asked me to create a page for the Foundation - I accept I may not be best placed to do this myself but how do you suggest we move forwards? Thanks for further guidance, I'm a newbie to this and it's quite confusing when everyone else seems to work a way round these rules! SwoodwardPHF (talk) 12:12, 8 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

SwoodwardPHF, hello. If you are being paid to create the article (which in a way you are, as you are being employed by them), then you will need to disclose this on your userpage. You can do this by adding {{Paid|employer=Paul Hamlyn Foundation}} to your userpage. For more information see WP:PAID. Dreamy Jazz 🎷 ^{talk to me | my contributions} 12:16, 8 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@SwoodwardPHF:, also if you would want your draft accepted, you will need to:

Find more sources. I advise that you look on Google and search for "Paul Hamlyn Foundation". I found several sources. You will need to check that these sources are independent and reliable. Look at the page I've just liked for advise on how to determine this for each source you find.
Write the draft in a netural way. The best way to do this is to write from what the sources say, as if they are suitable, then the sources will talk about this charity in a netural way. See Wikipedia:Neutral point of view for more information on how to write in a netural way.

In the end, as long you write the article in a neutral way using independent and reliable sources, it should be fine. When you are happy the draft is ready press the "Resubmit" button. Dreamy Jazz 🎷 ^{talk to me | my contributions} 12:22, 8 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Paul Hamlyn Foundation (February 11)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Dreamy Jazz was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

It's a lot better, but there are several sections that are unsourced. I have marked where this is the case.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Paul Hamlyn Foundation and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Paul Hamlyn Foundation, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{db-self}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
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Dreamy Jazz 🎷 ^{talk to me | my contributions} 17:25, 11 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Paul Hamlyn Foundation has been accepted

Paul Hamlyn Foundation, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. If your account is more than four days old and you have made at least 10 edits you can create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer.

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Dreamy Jazz 🎷 ^{talk to me | my contributions} 15:18, 14 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]