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Welcome!

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Hello, Sonalchuriwal, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Brianda and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Brianda (Wiki Ed) (talk) 00:47, 2 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

You have an overdue training assignment.

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Please complete the assigned training modules. --Brianda (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:59, 15 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review

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Overall, think this article is really strong and has a lot of evidence backing it up. It is incredibly well written in a neutral tone. Also, super easy to follow and understand. I think the way it is written, and its tone is incredibly strong. The definitions included in the article make the contents easily digestible and it is broken down into sections that make it easy to follow. I think your article could be improved by delving deeper into some of the ideas you briefly mention. In the section “Power as Zero-Sum and Campaign Tactics” you briefly mention that women aren’t encouraged to run for office and the political recruitment model. It would be stronger if you discussed this in a bit more detail. Also, in your conclusion you mention how women are put into this “double bind,” but do not explain what that means. I don’t think you should introduce this concept in a conclusion, but it could be discussed earlier in the article in order for it to make sense in the conclusion. I would say that your article is incredibly well-developed and just needs minor tweaks in order to become very successful.Danimo2021 (talk) 18:38, 3 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Agentic power moved to draftspace

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An article you recently created, Agentic power, is not suitable as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. Onel5969 TT me 12:34, 29 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Agentic power

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Information icon Hello, Sonalchuriwal. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Agentic power, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 10:06, 30 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]