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Please complete online student training at http://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students You must login and complete the three basic modules. After completion of these modules, we will be able to see that you have edited three pages: Please complete this assignment by the end of today. Special:Contributions/Parisa Prasertlum at this time shows that you have not finished:

You need to be logged in, so that your contributions are recorded under your account. --Taweetham (talk) 07:26, 29 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

This is a final reminder for your training. Please complete it by the end of today. --Taweetham (talk) 02:42, 30 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for creating your account on Wikipedia. Unfortunately, we have to move on to the next step with only those who complete their training on time. You are still welcome to edit Wikipedia any time. --Taweetham (talk) 03:43, 1 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Special:Contributions/Parisa Prasertlum at this time shows that you have finished the online student training at http://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students. Thank you for completing the student training, please propose a few topics that you wish to write on Wikipedia. You should read all related articles on Wikipedia and draft your new article(s) or revision to existing article(s) in your sandbox. We are looking forward to seeing

  • Your proposed topic(s)
  • Brief outline of your contributions to the article
  • References for the article and sources of media files (photo/VDO/drawing) to be used in the article.

in your sandbox by Friday 6th October. There will be a few reminders before the deadline. Should you have any questions, please feel free to ask. --Taweetham (talk) 00:49, 6 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

This is a reminder that you have to complete your homework by Friday 6th October to continue with Wikipedia Education Program. It is best that you attempt it before the deadline and we can give you early feedback and directions. --Taweetham (talk) 00:49, 6 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

"C frame laboratory" does not seem to pass WP:NOTE. Please find an alternative topic asap. --Taweetham (talk) 05:25, 7 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for creating your account on Wikipedia. Unfortunately, we have to move on to the next step with only those who complete their proposal on time. You are still welcome to edit Wikipedia any time. --Taweetham (talk) 06:41, 8 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

According to the timeline on course page, you are expected to contribute at least 500 bytes by the 13th October. It does not need to be perfect at this time if it is on your sandbox for new article. It has to be somewhat presentable if you are editing the existing article directly. Further optional tranings on the course page will help you. Feel free to ask if you have any questions. --Taweetham (talk) 10:01, 9 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Don't forget to upload your video by the end of tomorrow 5780630 Sarocha (talk) 03:12, 16 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for advices kaa Parisa Prasertlum (talk) 05:24, 18 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Please merge your draft in to the existing article. Be careful with WP:NOT and WP:COPYVIO. We expect to see your work in the article namespace by Friday the 20th of October. --Taweetham (talk) 02:46, 14 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

A reviewer has been assigned to you. Please check course page for more information. The reviewer will be your mentor for this assignment from this week onward. --Taweetham (talk) 01:38, 15 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thank your for your contribution to the article. There are a number of possible improvements:

  1. Please make sure that your article is encyclopedia. We want quality rather than quantity. Please see if the information you have added are sufficiently relevant and necessary.
  2. Please make sure that your references are properly formatted e.g. in the reference section, I see "[2] [4] [5] [6] [3]" which should be removed.
  3. Please plan how would you create media files for your article.
  4. Please read general information on the course page to make sure that you satisfy all aspects of our grading criteria.

There is a chance that your content will be reverted if not in encyclopedic tone/not formatted properly. Please try to address this as soon as possible. I have moved your article to Policeman (laboratory) --Taweetham (talk) 03:55, 21 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your VDO upload. Please consider redoing it again with gloves on your hands. --Taweetham (talk) 08:22, 6 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hi User:Parisa Prasertlum! Thank you for your participation in the education program. Here are your final feedbacks:

  • Citations should come immediately after the dot, ".[1]" not". [1]".
  • Please make sure that what you've written throughout the article is grammatically correct.
  • Where are the references for the following sentence(s):

- Instead, Oesper Collections catalog indicated that policemen sold by the Henry Heil Company of St. Louis as early as 1904.

- Then rubber policeman also recorded in 1910 edition of J. C. Olsen’s textbook of quantitative analysis that states "...particles adhering to the glass must be removed by means of a so-called policeman, which is made by inserting the end of a rather thick large-sized glass stirring-rod into a short piece of rubber tubing"

- There are some other sentences that need references too.

Good luck! --Athikhun.suw (talk) 03:32, 11 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for advices kaa Parisa Prasertlum (talk) 05:25, 18 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Have you formatted your video? 5780630 Sarocha (talk) 08:07, 16 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Please put the banner on your article. 5780630 Sarocha (talk) 13:55, 17 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for advices kaa Parisa Prasertlum (talk) 05:25, 18 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

You are invited to the meet up. --Taweetham (talk) 08:32, 16 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]