User talk:NikkiBarraza
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[edit]Hello, NikkiBarraza, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:16, 2 September 2016 (UTC)
You did a great job of finding sources and detailing important information in your article and have a lot of good sources. The thing that stands out to me most is how you organized your information. You drafted this article and did not put headers of topics above your writing, with a little realignment, you could create a good article. For instance, you use Pat Robertson as an example when talking about religious broadcastings growth, you should instead create an entire separate section dedicated to prominent televangelists instead of trying to incorporate it in this section. Also, regarding the first paragraph on Christianity on the radio, you should create a separate section talking about certain religions in your final draft. For example, under this section you could talk about Judaism, Christianity and other religions and how they broadcast because I noticed this page only focused countries and not the particular faiths. Overall you did a great job of gathering good sources and reliable information, however with some reorganization, you can create a much better article. Msacco32 (talk) 02:18, 14 October 2016 (UTC)
Thank you for your review! I see your point on organization and will organize it with headers in the future. I would love to focus more on particular faiths however, i'm still searching for data and information on that. NikkiBarraza (talk) 04:09, 21 October 2016 (UTC)