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Hello Killy-the-frog! Welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. If you decide that you need help, check out Wikipedia:Where to ask a question, ask me on my talk page, or place {{helpme}} on your talk page and someone will show up shortly to answer your questions. Please remember to sign your name on talk pages using four tildes (~~~~); this will automatically produce your name and the date. Finally, please do your best to always fill in the edit summary field. Below are some recommended guidelines to facilitate your involvement. Happy Editing! Dylan Lake 08:28, 19 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]
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I don't completely understand what you're saying. If you're native in Chinese, I can understand Mandarin, so feel free to post it in Chinese. Regarding your question; you said I missed an entry? I forgot to put something into the article? Well, on Wikipedia, we need verifiable citations, and I just insert whatever I find from Xinhua, CNN, NYTimes, etc. If you can find a reliable media source that talks about these "missing documents", then please, send me a link. Best of luck, --haha169 (talk) 17:11, 31 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Ah, I see what the problem is. I found that sentence inserted in, but it was written with bad grammar. I had attempted to freshen it up. During my revision, if I had accidentally removed something, feel free to tell me, and I'll try and put it back in. Regards, haha169 (talk) 17:13, 31 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I merged [1] your inclusion with the paragraph above, as well as revisions. Perhaps it was a misunderstanding? --haha169 (talk) 17:15, 31 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Well, first of all, I attempted to fix your spelling there. It vaguely reminds me of French..., especially your spelling of "victim" into "victime". Anyway, it may be possible that I left out some information, but keep in mind that we can't make the article stretch out too long. Perhaps you can leave a suggest on of how you'd like it on my talk page, I'll re-arrange it, and leave it here. We can discuss it between our talk pages until we achieve a win/win goal Is that good? --haha169 (talk) 04:55, 2 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Well, there is an error in your sentence that I can't just fix. What agreement is this? I need to understand what the agreement is, since the first half of the sentence just talked about bribes, not an agreement. If all possible, it could be separated into to sentences, the latter explaining what agreement the corrupt officials offered. --haha169 (talk) 17:30, 3 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not sure. I can certainly make that "good" English, but the problem here is WP:N. I was merely trying to make it simpler by saying that parents protested and police intervened. WP:NPOV is also an issue here. --haha169 (talk) 20:58, 6 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I didn't say there was a problem with the source. That's WP:V, and I didn't use it as an example. The specifics are WP:N. I was really only interested in keeping the most necessary things. Look, how about: "It also reported cases in which officials bribed parents to keep quiet about the corruption, though some refused and continued protesting."
That entire thing is just a long and confusing way of saying "bribery". --haha169 (talk) 19:05, 9 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
You mean "threatened". Besides, writing down that parents were threatened if they protest is important, but is the agreement really useful enough to insert? Remember, we have to be vague to keep it NPOV, and quite frankly, I'm not so sure about the notability of this agreement. I've never heard of it before NY Times. --haha169 (talk) 05:00, 10 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

It was never a question of reliability. Its a question about notability. Anyway, I'm aware of the talk within Sichuan province over this issue - but the American audience won't be. I think that a simple "Parents who protested were threatened by officials; while others were given money as an attempt to keep calm." --haha169 (talk) 05:16, 10 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

The problem is that Sichuan earthquake is receiving low traffic; and few are going to edit that article. But if you honestly feel that your way is the best; by all means, do so. --haha169 (talk) 17:40, 10 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
That makes perfect sense...but I'm having a headache trying to figure out how to revise that in order to makes sure it is grammatically correct, yet still includes all the information. Um... --haha169 (talk) 04:45, 11 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
It's not missing key points - but rather random tidbits of information. Why not just insert it and see if SillyValley or Medshal have any ideas. --haha169 (talk) 16:08, 11 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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00:56, 20 March 2015 (UTC)

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