User talk:Joshmosh06/sandbox
Peer review from Haozhi Zhang
[edit]Hello, Josh, as a member of our group, I would like to offer some suggestions for your draft:
Overall, you did a great job for planning your draft. The structure looks good and covers many aspects of this topic. However, the lead section of your draft might missed some aspects that mentioned in following section: like the history, education and sub- disciplines. Additionally, some subsections may need to reorganize because they are not related well: like 6.3 History of industrial and production engineering In South Asia in 6 Education. Finally, there are only two reference including in the end, you might add more to improve the credibility of your wiki.
Response From Josh to Haozhi Zhang
[edit]Thank you for your review, I have added around 16 -18 references into the main article. I used NCSU's lib page to find many books on the related sub-disciplines of IPE and added more info about each one into the main article. Thank you for the other part about the not related info. That needed to be removed asap. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Joshmosh06 (talk • contribs) 01:40, 22 April 2018 (UTC)