User talk:CyrilPul

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Happy editing! Kleuske (talk) 16:33, 18 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Hi. Your user page is intended to tell the rest of he community about yourself. Your sandbox is the place to construct a new article. For that reason, I have moved the article to your sandbox. Good luck. Kleuske (talk) 16:35, 18 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Worcester Festival Choral Society (January 19)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted because it included copyrighted content, which is not permitted on Wikipedia.

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Bkissin (talk) 16:25, 19 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, CyrilPul! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Bkissin (talk) 16:25, 19 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Hello, CyrilPul, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions.

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Worcester Festival Choral Society (February 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Overly promotional. You have misunderstood how Wikipedia works. Wikipedia summarises what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about a topic, showing how it meets Wikipedia's special definition of a notable topic.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Theroadislong (talk) 15:06, 3 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

February 2022

Thanks for contributing to the article Draft:Worcester Festival Choral Society. However, one of Wikipedia's core policies is that material must be verifiable and attributed to reliable sources. You have recently used citations which copied, or mirrored, material from Wikipedia. This leads to a circular reference and is not acceptable. Most mirrors are clearly labeled as such, but some are in violation of our license and do not provide the correct attribution. Please help by adding alternate sources to the article you edited! If you need any help or clarification, you can look at Help:Contents/Editing Wikipedia or ask at Wikipedia:New contributors' help page, or just ask me. Thank you. Kuru (talk) 19:16, 9 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Worcester Festival Choral Society (February 13)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Worcester Festival Choral Society and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Worcester Festival Choral Society, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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Theroadislong (talk) 22:01, 13 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Worcester Festival Choral Society has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Worcester Festival Choral Society. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 20:44, 6 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Worcester Festival Choral Society has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Worcester Festival Choral Society. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 21:22, 6 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Following your comment on the 6th March, I have been through the document and have made many changes to the document and removed everything that I consider might be classed as over promotional.

Would you have a further look to see whether the document meets the required standard.

I realise that this page has been back and forward several times, and I would have done it very differently knowing what I know now.

CyrilPul (talk) 16:27, 17 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Worcester Festival Choral Society

Hi, not sure why you didn't get the automatic notification, so just dropping by to tell you that I've accepted your article Worcester Festival Choral Society which is now live.

I spotted one tiny issue which you may wish to correct, namely the punctuation and spacing around the ref tags (see WP:REFPUNCT). Put simply, after the end of text comes punctuation, then the reference tag, with no space before the tag but a space after it.

Best, -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 14:41, 31 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]