User talk:88.146.220.100
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[edit]Hello, I'm AntiDionysius. I wanted to let you know that one or more of your recent contributions to Argonauts have been undone because they did not appear constructive. If you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. If you have any questions, you can ask for assistance at the Teahouse or the Help desk. Thanks. AntiDionysius (talk) 10:19, 16 July 2024 (UTC)
- I changed it due to the paragraph discussing rivers, but then linking to a settlement. Nauportus links to the city, while Ljubljanica is the "Nauportus River". The sentence "having passed along the Ister river, then along the Savus river, and then to Nauportus which is lying between the Emona and the Alps" seemed weird to me with it linking to a city after mentioning the Danube and the Sava. Though as a non-native speaker the tense might be tripping me up. Having it as "which lies" would probably feel more normal. Oh well, I will leave it to somebody with native knowledge of English and discerment of what is constructive to judge this. 88.146.220.100 (talk) 10:36, 16 July 2024 (UTC)
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