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Your submission at Articles for creation: Asprofin Bank Corporation (January 22)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Qcne was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just brief mentions about the subject or routine announcements)
reliable
secondary
strictly independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet all four of these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Hi again, we chatted on the wikipedia-en-help live chat a few times (I'm qc). I came across this draft again in my review queue, and so had a look at the sources. You can substantially cut the content of this draft down to the basic bits that just discuss Asprofin. For example, sources #11 to #19 don't mention Asprofin at all, just discuss banking in general. Readers can just go to the individual articles about those banking elements to get information on them. I think source #20 is the only independent source that gives coverage to Asprofin . Two or three more sources like that would be ideal, with the draft then cutting out all the other bits.

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qcne (talk) 22:27, 22 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, 202.184.130.71! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! qcne (talk) 22:27, 22 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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