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I like the broad overview of the scope of central venous catheters that you provide
I wonder if breaking up the Lead paragraph will make it more visibly digestible to the reader
Great job on going through a large amount information in a concise manner Medical uses section [ edit ] Impressive job on entirely reworking a large paragraph I liked the way you display the information in a list format. It helps to easily visualize the information
I suggest adding in more hyperlinks to other wikipedia articles in this section as there are a large number of complex medical terminology
Tone is neutral and balanced Catheter Flow section [ edit ] Great job on identifying a need for a new section
I like how you summarize the equation in a descriptive paragraph including the rationale for central catheter design and function, placing the equation in context.
I would consider breaking down the last sentence in the section into several sentences for clarity. [ edit ] Great idea including this section in the article, as PICC lines are a very important and closely related topic
I like how you describe the pitfalls and indications for PICC lines in a clear and concise manner, incorporating previous topics like catheter flow
I would consider breaking up this paragraph into 2-3 sections for ease of visualization
