User:Peterorfanos/Technology policy/Brooke.baker873 Peer Review
Peer review
[edit]This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.
General info
[edit]- Peterorfanos
- Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Peterorfanos/sandbox
Lead
[edit]- The lead has good information about some events that technology policy influenced
- I might suggest adding a brief overview of what technology policy is
- use more straight forward language
Lead evaluation
[edit]Content
[edit]- All of the content added seems to relate well to the topic.
Content evaluation
[edit]Tone and Balance
[edit]- all of the content is neutral, but I think you can change some language to sound less like storytelling and more informational
Tone and balance evaluation
[edit]Sources and References
[edit]- All of the sources are credible
- maybe add a few more
Sources and references evaluation
[edit]Organization
[edit]- headings or section titles might help the readers to better follow the article
Organization evaluation
[edit]Images and Media
[edit]Images and media evaluation
[edit]- N/A
For New Articles Only
[edit]If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
- N/A
New Article Evaluation
[edit]Overall impressions
[edit]- The content added was relevant information
- work on organizing and keeping with an academic tone