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Potential Articles

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  • The Guernsey Literary and Potato Peel Pie Society (film) - The plot analysis is missing a few key points and the critical response paragraph could be separated further.
    • Okay, seems to be a good article for the assignment. You've already identified some issues, but always scan for other issues or violations of various policies of Wikipedia.
  • Cola wars - The advertising strategies paragraph has an imbalance of information between Coke and Pepsi and the Comparison of Products section is a bit hard to understand.
    • Good; that imbalance you mentioned could be a violation of WP:NPOV (more specifically, WP:UNDUE because it gives more weight to one side. It may also use some rewriting.
  • Two Weeks Notice - The Plot section could be written better and the opening section is a bit vague.
  • Johnny Flynn - The opening section does not include his major achievements and the Acting Career section is not organized well.
  • Idina Menzel - Career section is very dense and should be split up.
    • Thanks! I'm assigning these to you on Wiki Edu. Dr.ozkul (talk) 20:47, 11 February 2025 (UTC)

Model Articles

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Article History/Bold Edits

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  • Cola wars
    • The Archives talk page includes discussions on the Cola market and what products are in which company, what decades were the cola war apart of mostly 70s-80s), and the table listing cola products
    • This article has already been edited by a TAMU student in 2021!
    • Oknazevad is VERY active; They were debating for a bit about whether Keurig Dr Pepper would be part of this 'war'
    • Judd Apatow is making a movie about the Cola Wars (this is recent news)
    • The article was first created in 2004 and has had a decent amount of small edits throughout the past year
  • Hope Chest - While this article has useful information, I believe the lead should be separated into different categories. Currently, the lead covers not only the definition of hope chest but its history and uses, with around five paragraphs total. A heading labeled “Suffocation hazard to children” incorrectly includes the decoration of a hope chest too, which should also be moved to a different heading.
    • The talk page largely contains conversations relating to how the hope chest is seen in different parts of the world
    • In the beginning of the article history there was a large section on modern hope chests with an example from a movie. This whole section has since been deleted, firstly the example due to it being “badly written and has no encyclopediac value”, and finally the whole section was deleted without explanation in 2007.
    • The decoration section was first written in 2008 and has largely been unchanged; The Suffocation hazard section was added in 2012.
    • There have been attempts to include a section relating the hope chest to pop culture, but those have also since been removed in 2023. The content of the sections were largely irrelevant to a hope chest, just references from movies or songs. This section lasted for 10 years before deleted.
    • The Historical Origins section has been a slow accumulation of information through the years
    • There used to be a ‘style’ and ‘social context’ headings to break up the article information, but the headings were deleted 6 months ago without explanation.