User:Kschmick

Being bold is important on Wikipedia.

Articles for improvement

Latvia:

• More citations
• More subheadings
• References aren't all formatted correctly

Christopher Wilder:

• Could include section detailing how he was found out
• Some small grammatical errors
• Lead could be longer
• Could include section comparing him to similar serial killers
• More credible citations

My Articles

• Human resource management
• The New Yorker
• Intertextuality

Human resource management

Problems

• Lead section is too long
• "Weasel words"
• Some broad claims in areas

To-Do List

• Reduce lead section (Completed 3/19/18)
  • Redistribute info that should be kept (Completed 3/19/18)
• General copyediting (Completed 3/20/18)
  • Fix run-on sentences (Completed 3/20/18)
• Check references (Completed 3/2/18)
• Check for bias (Completed 3/2/18)
  • Fix certain broad claims (Completed 3/20/18)

Intertextuality

Problems

• Doesn't read like a Wikipedia article -- more like a research paper
• Citations don't follow Wikipedia Manual of Style
• Some original research

To-Do List

• General copyediting (Completed 3/20/18)
• Check references (Completed 3/2/18)
  • Change some in-text citations to follow Wikipedia Manual of Style (Completed 3/15/18)
• Check for bias (Completed 3/2/18)
• Evaluate subheadings -- some are a bit short (Completed 3/15/18)
  • Restructure layout (Completed 3/15/18)
• Get rid of original research (3/21/18)
• Add history section (Completed 3/15/18)