User:Funlovinfriend/Sofia Coppola/Big ol' Brain Peer Review

Peer review

This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

• Funlovingfriend
• Link to draft you're reviewing: Sofia Coppola

Lead

Guiding questions:

• The lead has been updated as needed.
• The lead should be updated to include information for "On the Rocks."
• The lead only includes information that is in the article.
• The lead is concise

Content

Guiding questions:

• The content added is relevant to the article.
• The content is up to date, though there may be more information to be added as of now on her newest film project.
• There is no missing content or content that doesn't belong.

Tone and Balance

Guiding questions:

• The content is neutral.
• No biased content.
• Viewpoints are equally represented.
• Content does not sway reader to a specific opinion.

Sources and References

Guiding questions:

• All content is backed up by reliable sources.
• The sources are thorough.
• The sources are current.
• The links work.

Organization

Guiding questions:

• Some portions could be written slightly different to be more clear and concise.
• There are a few grammatical errors. The use of dashes rather than commas or new sentences should be changed.
• The content is well organized.

Overall impressions

Guiding questions:

• The content added has improved the article.
• What are the strengths of the content added?
• The content could be improved with some grammatical and organizational changes, as well as further additions to newly included information.

Overall evaluation

It was great! I loved the additions you chose to make.