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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 09:04, 5 August 2013 (UTC)

Smim Payu

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Created/expanded by Hybernator (talk). Self nominated at 01:48, 21 July 2013 (UTC).

  • Comment. Hook fact is mentioned twice in the lead and the military career section, but it isn't followed by an inline citation and must be addressed. The article looks good otherwise. For the hook, to avoid the form of "that X is Y?", I've proposed the following:

ALT1 ... that Mon admiral Smim Payu switched sides to Burmese Toungoo and led an naval attack that ended his former Mon-speaking Hanthawaddy Kingdom? Alex ShihTalk 01:04, 4 August 2013 (UTC)

  • The citations were there but I've inserted them next to the hook's relevant sentences for better clarity. I'm fine with ALT1. Hybernator (talk) 03:26, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the clarification. I'll wait for someone else to promote this entry. Alex ShihTalk 04:08, 4 August 2013 (UTC)