Template:Did you know nominations/Ralph Monroe Eaton

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:05, 2 December 2016 (UTC)

Ralph Monroe Eaton

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~~... that American philosopher Ralph Monroe Eaton wrote a memoir of his experiences during the First World War and subsequently committed suicide?~~
Alt1... that Harvard philosopher Ralph Monroe Eaton wrote an unpublished memoir of his experiences during the First World War?

Reviewed: Mary Barkas.

Created by Philafrenzy (talk). Self-nominated at 22:09, 2 November 2016 (UTC).

Touching biography, on good sources, offline sources accepted AGF. The hook sounds interesting but sounds like there was a connection between war experiences and the suicide, which I don't see in the article. Also "Subsequently" tells me "soon afterwards. I would prefer to not mention the suicide in the hook, - the contrast of philosophy and war seems interesting enough. Article: I'd prefer a few more years, if available, such as of the wedding (was it really "early life?), and the writing of the war memoirs. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 19:23, 5 November 2016 (UTC)

Added an Alt. Revised the early life heading. Unfortunately we don't know much more about him so I can't add any more about his marriage or the genesis of the memoirs. I will do the QPQ shortly. Philafrenzy (talk) 00:50, 15 November 2016 (UTC)

Thank you for the ALT! Just waiting for qpq then, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:54, 15 November 2016 (UTC)

QPQ done. Philafrenzy (talk) 00:57, 23 November 2016 (UTC)

thank you --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:49, 23 November 2016 (UTC)