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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Alex ShihTalk 03:55, 23 July 2017 (UTC)

Margaret Amoakohene

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Created by Crosstemplejay (talk). Self-nominated at 13:28, 20 June 2017 (UTC).


  • New enough, long enough, within policy to a reasonable degree, copyvio unlikely, but could there be a more interesting hook or at least a second alternative hook? QBQ not done either. YE Pacific Hurricane 15:31, 13 July 2017 (UTC)
  • Ok. Good to go now (not striking ALT0, I'll let the closure decide on what hook, approved both). YE Pacific Hurricane 16:04, 13 July 2017 (UTC)
@Yoninah: *Changes made, more hooks suggested. Please review and offer your comment. Thanks.CrossTemple Jay 14:12, 16 July 2017 (UTC)
  • @Crosstemplejay: It's very hard to come up with a hook for a politician article when all you're writing about is their education and appointments. It's best to find some colorful biographical facts to add to the article so you can use those for a hook. ALT2 is coming close to a hook, but the part about each administration being in the New Patriotic Party doesn't appear in the article. If you would add and source that, we could use ALT2. We could also go with your original hook, although I would reverse the order:
  • ALT0a: ... that Margaret Ivy, currently a member of Ghana's Council of State, is the country's former High Commissioner to Canada?
  • Striking other hooks. Yoninah (talk) 21:42, 18 July 2017 (UTC)
  • Based on this, sure, which seems to be a very interesting newspaper, BTW. YE Pacific Hurricane 15:35, 21 July 2017 (UTC)