Template:Did you know nominations/Girl in pink jacket
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Girl in pink jacket
- ... that Reyhaneh Soltan-Nejad, the girl in pink jacket, became a symbol of the 2024 Kerman terrorist attacks after being identified by her distinctive pink jacket and earrings?
- Reviewed:
Mhhossein talk 06:15, 16 January 2025 (UTC).
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Overall: @Mhhossein: While this is an interesting nomination, only one source mentioned in the article spells her name the same way as it is written in the nomination. The Persian language source is used twice, although it is the same, and it mentions "the 'girl in the pink jacket'", which seems to make more grammatical sense in the English language. The article needs more citations from reliable sources. The Atlantic Council source written by Holly Dagres does not mention her name, nor the number of casualties, so different sources should be used to support the lead. What was written by Dagres, although used as a source, is not really mentioned in the article. Although this event was an incredibly sad one, there is not a source I could find on the article that mentions her as a symbol, or a "poignant symbol" as it says in the article. The unveiling of the artwork is unnecessarily mentioned two separate times in the same section. Aneirinn (talk) 18:16, 16 January 2025 (UTC)
- Some things in the article have been fixed now. I don’t think "the girl in pink jacket" makes sense grammatically. A more appropriate title would be 'girl in the pink jacket' or the 'girl with a pink jacket'. Concerning her name, I think Soltaninejad is a common way her surname is spelled in English. I’ve also seen Soltani-Nejad, "Soltan-Nejad", however, seems unlikely. Has a QPQ been completed? Aneirinn (talk) 15:03, 17 January 2025 (UTC)