Template:Did you know nominations/Arthur Edmund Grimshaw
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The result was: promoted by Oceanh (talk) 23:07, 24 May 2014 (UTC)
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Arthur Edmund Grimshaw
[edit]- ... that Arthur Edmund Grimshaw was the choir master at Leeds Cathedral for thirty years and was replaced by an eleven year old boy?
Created by Pjposullivan (talk). Self nominated at 02:42, 21 May 2014 (UTC).
Passes DYKcheck for length and date. Interesting hook and article (especially if you are from Yorkshire like me :-) ). Some marginal close paraphrasing ("...just eleven years old..." how about "only eleven years old" ?). NPoV in tone. The portrait image is free, so why not add it? Thanks! Woz2 (talk) 22:21, 23 May 2014 (UTC)
- Thank you Woz2, I've now gone through the article and tried to root out any close paraphrasing. Unfortunately, I can not add the portrait, it's not of Arthur Grimshaw himself, it's of his father. Pjposullivan (talk) 00:29, 24 May 2014 (UTC)