Template:Did you know nominations/Andrea Salvadori

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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:20, 27 September 2011 (UTC)

Andrea Salvadori

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... that during his feud with the singer and composer Francesca Caccini, Andrea Salvadori wrote a poem enititled "Women Musicians Speak from Hell"?

Reviewed: Codium tomentosum see Template:Did you know nominations/Codium tomentosum

Created/expanded by Voceditenore (talk). Self nom at 12:36, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

Hook review
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Article review
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Thorough, interesting, well sourced, well illustrated, a pleasure! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:33, 26 September 2011 (UTC)
I agree. Beautiful work, and meets all the requirements. RockMagnetist (talk) 16:56, 26 September 2011 (UTC)

Shortened hook (date wasn't necessary) and changed quote marks to italics. RockMagnetist (talk) 17:34, 26 September 2011 (UTC)

Hi both. ;-) Thanks for your kind words. I agree re the date, but the poem should be in quotes per Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Titles. Italics sould only be used for lengthy epic poems like Orlando Furioso

Remarks: the checklist is not required. In this case it just adds clutter. - The hook should not be changed unless it's minor, in case of doubt better word an alternative. I suggest to have the poem title as in the article - and closer to Italian:

ALT1: ... that during his feud with the singer and composer Francesca Caccini (pictured), Andrea Salvadori wrote a poem entitled "Women musicians speak from Hell"?. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:48, 26 September 2011 (UTC)