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2024 Helong North Korean migrant workers unrest
- ... that in January 2024, several thousand North Korean migrant workers in Helong engaged in civil unrest that included the workers occupying a factory and taking managers hostage?
- Source: Reuters The Japan News
Created by JJonahJackalope (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 57 past nominations.
JJonahJackalope (talk) 13:25, 24 December 2024 (UTC).
- I left a few comments about the article on the article's talk page. May be worth addressing before the article goes to DYK. seefooddiet (talk) 08:14, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Seefooddiet:, I saw your comments in the talk page and made some edits regarding the Lead section, which I think properly address the points you raised. Additionally, I replied to your discussion on the title and am willing to work on some consensus regarding a possible page move. If that were to happen, would I have to renominate this DYK under the new name or make any edits like that? Please let me know, and thanks for the constructive criticism of the article. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 12:50, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Seefooddiet:, I just recently moved the page to 2024 Helong North Korean migrant workers unrest, is there anything I need to do here with this DYK nomination? -JJonahJackalope (talk) 17:39, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- I'm not really sure. I'll ask for help. seefooddiet (talk) 22:53, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- @JJonahJackalope and Seefooddiet: I have changed the link in the hook to the new article name. The nomination page should remain at its original name. TSventon (talk) 23:32, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hook is sourced. No copyvio, everything is sourced, article is presentable. Article created on 23 Dec, so within time range. There's no copyright problem with the image on the article, but it does feel a little loosely related to the main article content. QPQ is still technically pending; needs to be locked before it's considered done.
- The hook also needs revising to communicate uncertainty and for concision. E.g. Alt1 ... that in January 2024, South Korean sources reported that several thousand North Korean migrant workers occupied a factory and took hostages?
- Let me know what you think about this hook. seefooddiet (talk) 00:03, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Seefooddiet:, the new alt hook sounds good to me. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 21:16, 28 December 2024 (UTC)