Template:Did you know nominations/2020 Cagua fire
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Eddie891 (talk) 22:03, 24 January 2021 (UTC)
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2020 Cagua fire
- ...that eleven people, nine of them underage, died in a sugar plantation fire in Cagua, Venezuela, while trying to hunt rabbits? Source: El Nacional
- Comment: This is my first time nominating a DYK; any feedback or suggestions to either the nomination or the article are welcome!
5x expanded by NoonIcarus (talk). Self-nominated at 14:23, 22 January 2021 (UTC).
Welcome to DYK! This is a new enough and long enough expansion, and you do not need a QPQ as this is your first nomination. Before I could really review the article, I noted that the writing (mostly translation from eswiki) needed a significant amount of improvement to be idiomatic and flow properly in English. (Ojalá que los cambios que acabo de hacer te ayuden para mejorar tu inglés escrito.) The hook fact is in the article with cited source that checks out ([1] is also used by the hook) and is interesting. This should be ready and is a good example of an article rescue from PROD. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 19:23, 22 January 2021 (UTC)
- Thank you very much for the feedback and with the help proofreading! I'll make sure to take a look at the reviewing guide for future nominations, as well as take further care with translation. --NoonIcarus (talk) 20:30, 22 January 2021 (UTC)
