Template:Did you know nominations/1996 North Carolina Secretary of State election

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... that "The King" Richard Petty's campaign in the 1996 North Carolina Secretary of State election veered off course due to a hit-and-run?

Created by CaramelizedMargaritaLime (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

CaramelizedMargaritaLime (talk) 07:41, 27 January 2025 (UTC).

First off, nice job creating that article! There are two primary concerns I have right now: 1.) "legendary" is PUFFERY, 2.) the traffic incident section's second paragraph is fluff. Both issues can be resolved with a few well-executed excisions. ~ Pbritti (talk) 21:38, 27 January 2025 (UTC)

- @Pbritti: Thank you for taking a look at my article and providing some constructive criticism! I hope you like the changes that I made as much as I do. CaramelizedMargaritaLime (talk) 22:16, 27 January 2025 (UTC)
Dull hook. Someone usually loses an election; that doesn't become more interesting because of what they did before running. I think something related to his car accident would be more interesting, maybe with a pun, i.e. " ... that a car accident may have wrecked Richard Petty's chances of becoming North Carolina's Secretary of State?" Also, see the passages I tagged inline. Daniel Case (talk) 23:44, 27 January 2025 (UTC)

- @Daniel Case: I appreciate your advice. I tried to spice up the entry with a racing pun tied to the scandal.CaramelizedMargaritaLime (talk) 00:33, 28 January 2025 (UTC)

Thanks. Yours is actually better. Daniel Case (talk) 05:00, 28 January 2025 (UTC)

Thanks for the assist, Daniel Case. That hook is actually extremely funny. Great work! ~ Pbritti (talk) 14:48, 28 January 2025 (UTC)