Talk:Yukon Quest/GA1
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- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
i. In the lead, 4 is written as a digit multiple times, it should be shown as a word
ii. In the "Braeburn to Pelly" section, it says the route follows a driveway. To me (in the UK) a driveway is the place in front of the house where you park your car. I'm guessing here it is being used in a different sense - can you clarify by an appropriate wikilink or rewording?
iii. In the "Pelly to Dawson" section, one sentence starts with a number written in digits, this needs to be changed
iv. "The river's name doesn't come..." seems a bit chatty for an encyclopedia article
v. "In winter, Eagle buffeted by high winds" - missing word
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars etc.:
- No edit wars etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Overall, an excellent read. If you can address the prose issues above, I will pass the article -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 21:45, 11 March 2009 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail:
- All changes requested now seem to have been made, I am off to pass the article. Well done! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 09:38, 12 March 2009 (UTC)