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Copy editing notes

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I have copy edited this article for the Guild of Copy Editors, as requested by Eurohunter.

  • I have listed Patrik Lindberg and Emil Wahlström as writers per the ASCAP source. (Are these the same people as Patrik & Lillen? I would assume so, but couldn't find a source.)
  • I removed the chart table as it provided no information not already provided by prose.
  • Clarify release dates and versions – it was first released on Basshunter's album, then as a single (a different song?)... did the album version also include Patrik & Lillen?
    •  Comment: It was the same song first released as "Vifta med händerna" on album LOL <(^^,)>, then it was released as single "Vifta med händerna" and it was released as "Throw Your Hands Up" on different edition of album LOL <(^^,)>. Eurohunter (talk) 19:24, 4 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • As for grammar, continuous issues were the lack of the definite article the and the possessive suffix 's.

Let me know if there are any questions or concerns with my edit. Thanks! Wracking talk! 19:12, 4 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Wracking: Your comments have been noted and issues has been taken into account. Some issues require further comments from you. 👍 Thank you. Eurohunter (talk) 19:24, 4 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Eurohunter, got it! More elaboration, if possible, in the "Release history" table would be helpful to clarify the various releases. Wracking talk! 20:30, 5 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]