Talk:Typhoon Olive (1952)

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Did you know... that when Typhoon Olive struck Wake Island in 1952, World War II bunkers provided shelters for 700 people, resulting in zero fatalities despite the destruction of 85% of the island's structures?

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Definetly not a C, more storm history and impact (if found) --Yue ^{of the North} 00:48, 17 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

This was 1952. I'd honestly be surprised if any further information could be uncovered. –Juliancolton ^Tropical ^Cyclone 01:29, 17 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

There might be rainfall information for this system from NCDC. Let me see if Wake reported rainfall during this time frame. If so, I'll update the rainfall maxima page one evening late this week. I disagree about this article not reaching C class criteria, however. It is well-referenced, has the proper wikipedia article format, and has enough content for C class. One could argue B class, as it unlikely that any bulk of significant information (or missing sections) will be added from now on. Thegreatdr (talk) 16:09, 18 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

There is a general consensus for this article being C-class so I've upped it to C-class :) Cyclone biskit 18:09, 18 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

More info

Pages 158-160 of this document. Thegreatdr (talk) 21:27, 31 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 02:10, 24 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

"This article is about the 1952 typhoon. For other storms of the same name, see Tropical Storm Olive." Remove this /me screams in speakers you just gave me . Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 02:10, 24 July 2013 (UTC) Done[reply]
"Typhoon Olive (international designation: 5213) was the strongest Pacific typhoon of the 1952 Pacific typhoon season." "Pacific typhoon" to "Typhoon" since typhoon's occur in other basins. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 02:10, 24 July 2013 (UTC) Done[reply]
You link to tropical cyclone twice in the same sentence. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 02:10, 24 July 2013 (UTC) Done[reply]
"On the next day, the system attained tropical storm intensity, and it attained typhoon intensity on September 15." to "The next day, the system attained tropical storm intensity. Starting to rapidly intensify, Olive attained typhoon intensity on September 15." (also cut the RI bit from the next sentence). Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 02:10, 24 July 2013 (UTC) Done[reply]
"Olive, remaining away from land masses, eventually attained the equivalence of Category 5 intensity on the Saffir-Simpson Hurricane Scale." to "Olive reached Category 5 intensity on the modern-day Saffir-Simpson Hurricane Scale on [insert stupid day it did this]." Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 02:10, 24 July 2013 (UTC) Done[reply]
When did Olive die? Did it last forever? :P Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 02:10, 24 July 2013 (UTC) Done[reply]
"None Reported" to "None reported". Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 02:10, 24 July 2013 (UTC) Done[reply]
"however, posthumous analysis" what is this? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 02:10, 24 July 2013 (UTC) Done, replaced with postseason.—CycloneIsaac–E-Mail 03:19, 24 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
" Around 1800 UTC, the tropical storm, attaining typhoon intensity, acquired winds of 75 mph (120 km/h)." to " Around 1800 UTC, the tropical storm, attaining typhoon intensity, acquired winds of 75 mph (120 km/h)." to "Around 1800 UTC Olive was upgraded into typhoon, with winds of 75 mph (120 km/h)." Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane Done
" On the same date, Olive, intensifying further, passed near Wake Island with maximum sustained winds of 127 mph (204 km/h)." to "Continuing to intensify, Olive passed near Wake Island, where maximum sustained winds of 127 mph (204 km/h) were recorded." Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 02:10, 24 July 2013 (UTC) Done[reply]
" Reconnaissance aircraft recorded a minimum central pressure of 945 mbar (hPa; 27.90 inHg) at the time.[1][2] " to "Around this time, Reconnaissance aircraft reported a minimum central pressure of 945 mbar (hPa; 27.90 inHg).[1][2] " Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 02:10, 24 July 2013 (UTC) Done[reply]
"On September 16, Olive attained the equivalence of modern super typhoon intensity" to "On September 16, Olive attained winds of [ super typhoon intensity". Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 02:10, 24 July 2013 (UTC) Done[reply]
When did Olive attained Cat 2/3/4 intensity. Conversely, when did it weaken into a Cat 2/3/4? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 02:10, 24 July 2013 (UTC) Done[reply]
"The effects of Olive were severe—estimates suggested that fully 85 percent of the island's structures were demolished.[5] " to "Damage was severe; it is estimated that 85$ of the island's structures were demolished due to the storm.[5] " Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 02:10, 24 July 2013 (UTC) Done[reply]
Ref 3: switch refs to Y-M-D like you do with the rest of the short, stupid article. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 02:10, 24 July 2013 (UTC) Done, did M-D-Y instead.—CycloneIsaac–E-Mail 02:36, 24 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Ditto with Ref 7. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 02:10, 24 July 2013 (UTC) Done[reply]
Ref 6: Publisher is Loran history. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 02:10, 24 July 2013 (UTC) Done[reply]

Not good Cy10. I gave it a copyedit, so I think we are in the right ballpark. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 02:10, 24 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Done with fixes, just need to do some nbsp-ing.—CycloneIsaac–E-Mail 04:21, 24 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]